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This classmate Shaohua is also very good at making trouble!
Adults should write them together~! !
Come on~~~~~~~
More BA~~WO wait for me, wait for me, wait, wait, wait
( ⊙O⊙ ) Wow, I'm really looking forward to the next plot.
Sure enough~~~~~~Not much! ! ! Author's reply:
Meow... These two are difficult to deal with, so I have to write slowly. ^_^
I want to destroy you...
Wish you all the best for the exam~
It's still very sweet. Author's reply:
I am my mother~~
Wow wow wow wow, I'm really touched to be loved by such a woman.
Hey-hey! I read the book "Tail on a Rainy Day" that you recommended. It's really good, but the little cat's words are a bit too much. It can be considered a fan at best! And the writing is much better than "Frozen Summer"!
Author's reply:
That's it.
Come on, the author replied:
Understand,
We will,
Very good article. When will it be updated? ? ? Speed author reply:
Senior year of high school. A little busy. Moreover, I am currently writing an article about the 1989 riots, which makes me even busier.
I really like the male protagonist, and even more like his open-minded mother~
It's not easy to be beautiful these days~ let alone one who encourages his son~
I finally saw Xiao Mu, so hurry up~Xiao Mo^^^^^
If you didn't buy the book, keep reading! I'll wait——————————
The big update is really not fast~~~
A Li? Could it be... Could... It seems... Seemingly... That this cat is really A Li?
Does this chapter give an explanation? But it still hurts.
I see the great efforts, keep up the good work and update! Expect……
Wow, I really like this article. I usually only like male protagonists o(╯□╰)o It's rare to find a female protagonist that I like so much. . . Of course, the 88 here is even more popular.
More updates, please finish it soon
I have read a lot of articles, and this is the first first-person article that I think is good. Since I am familiar with the author, I will write a long review after finishing it. Writing in the first person can to a certain extent better arouse the reader's empathy and resonance, but at the same time it will also produce various disadvantages, the most serious of which are God's perspective and narcissism. The two together are a bolt from the blue. Fortunately, the heroine of this article does not have this problem, laugh, otherwise I would have made a mistake and wouldn't have made a long discussion here.
The author should have considered the names when designing them: the heroine is named Feili, which is both warm and bright red and transparent and fragile, echoing her life experience; and the soul that traveled through time was originally named Lou Yujing, which reminds people of the famous "White Jade Capital in the sky, twelve cities on the fifth floor. The immortal caressed my head, and I tied my hair and received immortality", which is more in line with the heroine's intelligence and indifference.
The heroine is calm, smart, and has a wide range of knowledge. She can be said to be a "universal heroine" to a certain extent. In my opinion, the only shortcoming is that she is too self-sufficient and passive emotionally. Perhaps because she has been looking for a way back to her original world, she was relatively passive and immature in the early stages. It was not until later stages that she slowly began to shine. At the same time, the author's writing style also changed from dull and slightly verbose to mature. It was a slow-burning novel both in terms of character growth and the overall article.
As the first first-person article that I am interested in writing a long review on, "Uehara Biography" naturally has many advantages, such as humorous language; although it adopts a relaxed style, there are many things worth thinking about; and it has constructed a credible female lord system, and the men here are not at all like the simple male and female swaps in most female lord novels. They still have the charm of men and the charm of women. Some clues are buried so deeply that you have to watch it a second or even third time to see more of it and withstand repeated pondering.
Of course, some shortcomings are also obvious, such as:
1. There are many characters, some of which actually have little effect. (Of course, it is noted in the copy that the author has a tendency to write series of stories; if those redundant characters and foreshadowing that have not been taken back at the end of the article will be answered in the next story, then this can be ignored for the time being)
2. The style before and after is not unified enough, presumably because the writing time span is too long.
Third, it is a bit trivial and the climax is not obvious.
4. Because it is the first person, the perspective is limited, and sometimes the entire scene cannot be described well, resulting in an incoherent context.
From the protagonist to the text, now back to the heroine - three words first, I like it, haha.
After reading a lot of books, my taste is a bit strange. The chance of liking the protagonist of a book is less than 5%, and the chance of liking the heroine is less than 1%. This time it is really rare. I like that the heroine is smart but not ostentatious; I like that she is responsible and free and easy; I like that she knows how to cherish and make choices - so it is not surprising that she has won the admiration of many men - the last thing makes me like it the most. So even though she gained three emotions in the end and had three people living in her heart, it didn't dissatisfy me, who is somewhat mysophobic. Of course, whether there is true love between her and these three people remains to be discussed.
I have always been very interested in who the man Feili chose in the protagonist's dream when he was exchanged to a non-heroine world. Unfortunately, the author refused to reveal it. He just said that the man was "very familiar" and mentioned at the end of the article [Thinking of the "dream" when I was asleep, I felt a little confused - was it fate or was I putting things around me into the dream?
According to the context, the probability of this person being "Qian Hua" is the highest, followed by "Ye", and the others are impossible. That is to say. Feili (Yu Jing) actually only really loves one person in her heart. As for who this person is, because the word count exceeds, I'd better discuss it later in the long review.
Author's reply:
Actually, you basically guessed right who that person is, haha
Oh my god
After reading it for a long time, I realized that it was actually written by you, Mr. Winter Melon.
I was curious when I saw someone urging you to update somewhere on Duoduo
Found it
It turns out that this hole I was squatting in before was written by you, Winter Melon Da.
[Grip]
So excited
This classmate Shaohua is also very good at making trouble! Adults should write them together~! !
Come on~~~~~~~
More BA~~WO wait for me, wait for me, wait, wait, wait
( ⊙O⊙ ) Wow, I'm really looking forward to the next plot.
Sure enough~~~~~~Not much! ! ! Author's reply: Meow... These two are difficult to deal with, so I have to write slowly. ^_^
I want to destroy you...
Wish you all the best for the exam~ It's still very sweet. Author's reply: I am my mother~~
Wow wow wow wow, I'm really touched to be loved by such a woman.
Hey-hey! I read the book "Tail on a Rainy Day" that you recommended. It's really good, but the little cat's words are a bit too much. It can be considered a fan at best! And the writing is much better than "Frozen Summer"! Author's reply: That's it.
Come on, the author replied: Understand, We will,
Very good article. When will it be updated? ? ? Speed author reply: Senior year of high school. A little busy. Moreover, I am currently writing an article about the 1989 riots, which makes me even busier.
I really like the male protagonist, and even more like his open-minded mother~ It's not easy to be beautiful these days~ let alone one who encourages his son~
I finally saw Xiao Mu, so hurry up~Xiao Mo^^^^^
If you didn't buy the book, keep reading! I'll wait——————————
The big update is really not fast~~~
A Li? Could it be... Could... It seems... Seemingly... That this cat is really A Li?
Does this chapter give an explanation? But it still hurts. I see the great efforts, keep up the good work and update! Expect……
Wow, I really like this article. I usually only like male protagonists o(╯□╰)o It's rare to find a female protagonist that I like so much. . . Of course, the 88 here is even more popular.
More updates, please finish it soon
I have read a lot of articles, and this is the first first-person article that I think is good. Since I am familiar with the author, I will write a long review after finishing it. Writing in the first person can to a certain extent better arouse the reader's empathy and resonance, but at the same time it will also produce various disadvantages, the most serious of which are God's perspective and narcissism. The two together are a bolt from the blue. Fortunately, the heroine of this article does not have this problem, laugh, otherwise I would have made a mistake and wouldn't have made a long discussion here. The author should have considered the names when designing them: the heroine is named Feili, which is both warm and bright red and transparent and fragile, echoing her life experience; and the soul that traveled through time was originally named Lou Yujing, which reminds people of the famous "White Jade Capital in the sky, twelve cities on the fifth floor. The immortal caressed my head, and I tied my hair and received immortality", which is more in line with the heroine's intelligence and indifference. The heroine is calm, smart, and has a wide range of knowledge. She can be said to be a "universal heroine" to a certain extent. In my opinion, the only shortcoming is that she is too self-sufficient and passive emotionally. Perhaps because she has been looking for a way back to her original world, she was relatively passive and immature in the early stages. It was not until later stages that she slowly began to shine. At the same time, the author's writing style also changed from dull and slightly verbose to mature. It was a slow-burning novel both in terms of character growth and the overall article. As the first first-person article that I am interested in writing a long review on, "Uehara Biography" naturally has many advantages, such as humorous language; although it adopts a relaxed style, there are many things worth thinking about; and it has constructed a credible female lord system, and the men here are not at all like the simple male and female swaps in most female lord novels. They still have the charm of men and the charm of women. Some clues are buried so deeply that you have to watch it a second or even third time to see more of it and withstand repeated pondering. Of course, some shortcomings are also obvious, such as: 1. There are many characters, some of which actually have little effect. (Of course, it is noted in the copy that the author has a tendency to write series of stories; if those redundant characters and foreshadowing that have not been taken back at the end of the article will be answered in the next story, then this can be ignored for the time being) 2. The style before and after is not unified enough, presumably because the writing time span is too long. Third, it is a bit trivial and the climax is not obvious. 4. Because it is the first person, the perspective is limited, and sometimes the entire scene cannot be described well, resulting in an incoherent context. From the protagonist to the text, now back to the heroine - three words first, I like it, haha. After reading a lot of books, my taste is a bit strange. The chance of liking the protagonist of a book is less than 5%, and the chance of liking the heroine is less than 1%. This time it is really rare. I like that the heroine is smart but not ostentatious; I like that she is responsible and free and easy; I like that she knows how to cherish and make choices - so it is not surprising that she has won the admiration of many men - the last thing makes me like it the most. So even though she gained three emotions in the end and had three people living in her heart, it didn't dissatisfy me, who is somewhat mysophobic. Of course, whether there is true love between her and these three people remains to be discussed. I have always been very interested in who the man Feili chose in the protagonist's dream when he was exchanged to a non-heroine world. Unfortunately, the author refused to reveal it. He just said that the man was "very familiar" and mentioned at the end of the article [Thinking of the "dream" when I was asleep, I felt a little confused - was it fate or was I putting things around me into the dream? According to the context, the probability of this person being "Qian Hua" is the highest, followed by "Ye", and the others are impossible. That is to say. Feili (Yu Jing) actually only really loves one person in her heart. As for who this person is, because the word count exceeds, I'd better discuss it later in the long review. Author's reply: Actually, you basically guessed right who that person is, haha
Oh my god After reading it for a long time, I realized that it was actually written by you, Mr. Winter Melon. I was curious when I saw someone urging you to update somewhere on Duoduo Found it It turns out that this hole I was squatting in before was written by you, Winter Melon Da. [Grip] So excited