Everyone has had their youthful years, with a lot of confusion, a lot of curiosity, and a lot of regrets, but people have also grown up in it, and they have grown up painfully. Her growth process was completed by multiple boys. She once thought that the initial choice would be the final outcome, but things are unpredictable. After God gave her a cruel blow, he gave her another opportunity that she couldn't grasp. Is this the end?
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Song Lian's baby is so cute. We are still an eight-year-old baby who eats noodles with eggs [kiss] [kiss] [kiss] [orange candy].
→_→Follow→_→When will it be updated?
We were thinking about what it would look like if the two of them fell asleep with their heads together. . . Haha~~~
You are so casual↖（＾ω＾）↗
Ci Lang is too gentle to be the male protagonist╯╰
So cute! But the claw machine can't get the ten districts and losfer and so on. TNT is also very difficult to get. Why don't you post the full version on j j! ! ! ! ! (Erkang hand………………
Decisive, relaxed and funny~
Come and scatter some flowers or something. .
This is the best product. You can just play it when you are bored for a while. It is best to kill it early. After a long time, it will affect your mental health!
Come on~wait for updates~
Why can't I collect it? Jinjiang convulsed again (like a bitter pussy)
Do you want to do it or not? I beg Rourou, and the main character is not named Mo Sang. You must be disgusted with Tentacles.
Li Geshu is my uncle's nephew, not a nephew, otherwise I wouldn't call him uncle.
Have they actually been separated for three years? So many things have happened in three years. Xiao Zhuo should take his uncle into custody. There is one less lonely ghost in the world, and he might even be a bad-tempered ghost. As for Xu Shi. There are not many positive descriptions, so he is destined to be cannon fodder.
Very well written. Even I was confused about whether the male protagonist had an affair with the woman. . Otherwise, how could there be a chance for her to say that she had his child? . Also, why should the male protagonist be angry with the female protagonist when she has a child? Ask for answers
Could it be that his eldest brother had some tricks up his sleeve?
Please code the word (Graduate on June 9th this year, don't let down the senior high school party, dear)
Slowly, it entered the climax, chicken jelly! ! Expect……
This is simply a big thunderbolt on a sunny day. Jinjiang has reached the point where it can no longer withstand these many storms.
Cover your claws and wait for the peach blossom to finally bloom.
This is the second novel by A Mingming that I have read. The previous one was very good, very good. I liked it very much!
But this one... Maybe because it was written in 2008, I feel that my ability to understand has been greatly challenged.
The beginning of this article is eye-catching. Looney's hard wiring and the emojis were very funny. It gave me a premonition that this kid must be in a tragedy. Sure enough, he was!
Then... After Pandora and the others had a meeting, until several tourist groups arrived... Although the author tried his best to be cute and funny, because there were so many characters, the problems of the article began to be exposed.
Chaos! Too messy! Very messy!
I won't say much about the first half. The plot of one pair of pants lasted tens of thousands of words. I felt like I was running out of words a lot of the time. Once I couldn't finish writing, I used Saga's underwear and Garonne's pants to make up the number... But having said that, I Baidu googled Saga's pictures, and I couldn't tell whether he was wearing underwear or not... By the way, if he wasn't wearing underwear, the holy robe should be made of metal, right? Won't it damage your penis?
……Etc! What's going on with this idea! Morality!
Because the first half is so messy, the logic is bad, the plot is bad, the laughs are bad, and even the punctuation marks are bad. The emojis are so piled up that they have no finishing touch, but instead drag down the article... In short, I am very disappointed, so I will start this review from the second half.
But this second half is really good enough... When I tried my best to remember and understand the first half of the plot, it was very difficult to survive until the dawn!
That's right, Dawn!
Emma, it's like it was written by two people!
The first is the author's logic problem! Although the logic is still divine logic, it has transformed from a point of confusion into a point of joy, okay! And it's amazing that the author's divine logic can round out the article and create jokes! This is finally on the level of another article I read about Mi Miao before!
First of all, the most special person. Several reasons made this reviewer laugh out loud, okay? Moreover, the author did not make the mistake of writing everyone in the first half, so the characters were modular but did not leave an impression. The tragic and angry Saga, the extremely broken Hades, the elegant Garen, and the increasingly irritable Saga after being abused...
The characters have shown their own characteristics, which is enough to leave an impression! Like!
After that, the author's plot also made great progress! The author wrote 100,000 words before, right? I just finished writing the content of the first day, and Dang Duan kept getting messed up, making the article seem extremely sloppy, and even some of the highlights were submerged. But now the author will not write repeatedly on a highlight, but after describing it, he will stop and continue writing the next highlight!
The most important thing is that the author's plot finally has a foreshadowing!
Emma, you don't know how much I am also looking forward to the reveal of the most special character, how much I look forward to Luni giving Minos a good look, how much I look forward to the ingenious performance of the fairy tale!
This foreshadowing was so important that when I watched the second half, I couldn't bear to go to the toilet...
After the laughter and the plot complement each other, the readability of the article has been greatly improved!
Then during the performance of the stage play, this reviewer also searched for pictures and followed the author's concise descriptions in his mind, and then laughed to death!
This group of people is so noisy and cute! This is a spoof!
There is no dialogue in the first half but no descriptive connections to make the article look smoother. There are also no piles of emojis and wrong punctuation marks to make readers struggle to understand. They just need to follow the author's thinking to imagine the picture and laugh! This is the true meaning of parody! Use a pen to describe the picture in your mind and form a natural smile!
I still remember the classic that made people laugh when I saw a sentence two days ago: In the background of the night smoke, Lu Xiaofeng held the conch high above her head, with one hand on her hip and a bright smile. (Probably)
And in the second half of this article, similar classics also appeared! For example, talking about the image of Dis, that sentence: "Dis looked at them and said righteously: "Let go of that pillow! Come at me if you have anything! "" And "It's okay when Dis is not smiling. As long as he grins, his strong gangster temperament will burst out, which is really hard to look at." "Dis said with a bad smile: "Yes, I am the princess! Please see, I am the most beautiful in the legend - Sleeping Beauty. "Fake news!" "Hades suddenly said this." It turns out that Hades was accusing the child of not sleeping at all, why is he called Sleeping Beauty!
Then Dis very cleverly lay down on the table and fell asleep...
These highlights were revealed one after another. This reviewer laughed until he was dizzy, okay! The laughter is so low-key that it can't hurt your blood pressure...
And Daniel and Dis! ! Dis still acts like a princess! ! Kiss! ! !
Just think about it, I'm already dead! !
This is so funny! !
To be honest, when I saw this place, I really wanted to have a pop~!
But Dis and Daniel don't have Bo'er, but Hades and Milo have Bo'er...
The black lines are one by one... Falling down...
Then the chaotic stage play ended like this, and the little butterfly returned to normal (which is really gratifying). Since there are still other plots that have not appeared, this review has been focusing on the most special person and the stage play, which are two impressive plot points.
It is undeniable that compared with the previous article, the author has made many improvements, such as the smoothness and logic of the article, and the importance of describing multiple characters. At least he can tell a story satisfactorily.
The most important thing about an author is not the writing style, but the ability to tell a story completely. This is a sentence in a writing observation I saw, and I will give this sentence to the author now.
The most special person, the outstanding character here is Hades. His unreliability and badness, strange taste, elusive imagination, etc., Make people laugh so hard that their hands and feet twitch, and every award-winner's heart-wrenching feeling is beyond words! The entire underworld is very happy, the entire golden tour group is very miserable, the entire girls club and senior citizen club are just passersby...
Very passerby...
In the stage play, the female president suddenly appeared with a strange movement, brushed her presence with her helmet, and seduced the cute boy Balian's innocent boy's heart. Then the entire girls' club and the senior citizens' club continued to pass by...
And here, Hades is also very good, and his potential has also appeared. In addition to being unreliable, he also has a bit more of a boss flavor. He disrupted the stage play several times to let all the gods unfold... It was too dark.
But Minos is a better boss. To be honest, Minos is really a scumbag. Luni should continue to ignore him! I don't mind!
Um, I'm off topic...
All in all, the second half is very happy, and the writing style is the best among novice novels. It is very suitable for the current happy and spoof writing style, but the first half is... Not to mention.
Anyway, it doesn't matter. The author wrote the first half six years ago = =……
The only small problem in the second half is about Zelos. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work, so I have a very average impression of Zheluos. In this article, when everyone is happy, only Zheluos is intolerant. That extra chapter makes me uncomfortable, because in this article, everyone hates Zheluos because he is ugly, and they bully him because of his appearance. However, in the description of this article, he has not done anything evil, he is just ugly, and then he is insulted and thrown into the dirt.
Refers to the shame of the underworld = =...
This three-dimensional view of good and bad based on appearance suddenly lowered the style of this article = =|||It is best for the author not to let his own preferences affect the characters in his writing. Even if he really hates a person, he still has to have a reasonable reason to abuse him, but Zheluosi is too ugly. This reason is a little bit...
Apart from that, the second half is an excellent happy ending.
Khan, because the author did not mention specific requirements, so I just gave some random thoughts.
Unreliable long review shop, drunkard
I thought I was the couch, but I'm not!
This chapter is full of information! It's a bit unclear.
Since Su Qing has a bad relationship with her family, why should she go home? If it is necessary to go home, then why should she comfort her sister? Even if it is not now, she will not listen to Su Qing at other times. .
And it was Tang Luoluo who took away (was it counted as taking away?) Her man, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! ! She didn't say anything, who knew, it was simply unreasonable!
Classmate, why is the title of your novel so garbled? . . I found this because of an error on my phone. I thought it was strange so I clicked on it.
Gewu, great love——oh hehehe
No comments, I just hope it can be done faster XD
Huahua, send it to Zhuangzhuang Huahua, come on, I'm optimistic about you.
It's been too long since I updated, and I forgot all the previous chapters, so I just read it again, from beginning to end.
It will definitely be even more sensational when the second dimension is exposed! I can't help but want to watch it now~
Why are there two Sister Yun?
What a sad story. . . .
Author, are you cheating?"
Haha, I can't love it, the computer can't post comments. . Do you feel like the progress has sped up? Haha, there are fewer words in the last paragraph, just abuse it as much as you want.
Song Lian's baby is so cute. We are still an eight-year-old baby who eats noodles with eggs [kiss] [kiss] [kiss] [orange candy].
→_→Follow→_→When will it be updated?
We were thinking about what it would look like if the two of them fell asleep with their heads together. . . Haha~~~
You are so casual↖（＾ω＾）↗
Ci Lang is too gentle to be the male protagonist╯╰
So cute! But the claw machine can't get the ten districts and losfer and so on. TNT is also very difficult to get. Why don't you post the full version on j j! ! ! ! ! (Erkang hand………………
Decisive, relaxed and funny~
Come and scatter some flowers or something. .
This is the best product. You can just play it when you are bored for a while. It is best to kill it early. After a long time, it will affect your mental health!
Come on~wait for updates~ Why can't I collect it? Jinjiang convulsed again (like a bitter pussy)
Do you want to do it or not? I beg Rourou, and the main character is not named Mo Sang. You must be disgusted with Tentacles.
Li Geshu is my uncle's nephew, not a nephew, otherwise I wouldn't call him uncle. Have they actually been separated for three years? So many things have happened in three years. Xiao Zhuo should take his uncle into custody. There is one less lonely ghost in the world, and he might even be a bad-tempered ghost. As for Xu Shi. There are not many positive descriptions, so he is destined to be cannon fodder.
Very well written. Even I was confused about whether the male protagonist had an affair with the woman. . Otherwise, how could there be a chance for her to say that she had his child? . Also, why should the male protagonist be angry with the female protagonist when she has a child? Ask for answers
Could it be that his eldest brother had some tricks up his sleeve?
Please code the word (Graduate on June 9th this year, don't let down the senior high school party, dear)
Slowly, it entered the climax, chicken jelly! ! Expect……
This is simply a big thunderbolt on a sunny day. Jinjiang has reached the point where it can no longer withstand these many storms.
Cover your claws and wait for the peach blossom to finally bloom.
This is the second novel by A Mingming that I have read. The previous one was very good, very good. I liked it very much! But this one... Maybe because it was written in 2008, I feel that my ability to understand has been greatly challenged. The beginning of this article is eye-catching. Looney's hard wiring and the emojis were very funny. It gave me a premonition that this kid must be in a tragedy. Sure enough, he was! Then... After Pandora and the others had a meeting, until several tourist groups arrived... Although the author tried his best to be cute and funny, because there were so many characters, the problems of the article began to be exposed. Chaos! Too messy! Very messy! I won't say much about the first half. The plot of one pair of pants lasted tens of thousands of words. I felt like I was running out of words a lot of the time. Once I couldn't finish writing, I used Saga's underwear and Garonne's pants to make up the number... But having said that, I Baidu googled Saga's pictures, and I couldn't tell whether he was wearing underwear or not... By the way, if he wasn't wearing underwear, the holy robe should be made of metal, right? Won't it damage your penis? ……Etc! What's going on with this idea! Morality! Because the first half is so messy, the logic is bad, the plot is bad, the laughs are bad, and even the punctuation marks are bad. The emojis are so piled up that they have no finishing touch, but instead drag down the article... In short, I am very disappointed, so I will start this review from the second half. But this second half is really good enough... When I tried my best to remember and understand the first half of the plot, it was very difficult to survive until the dawn! That's right, Dawn! Emma, it's like it was written by two people! The first is the author's logic problem! Although the logic is still divine logic, it has transformed from a point of confusion into a point of joy, okay! And it's amazing that the author's divine logic can round out the article and create jokes! This is finally on the level of another article I read about Mi Miao before! First of all, the most special person. Several reasons made this reviewer laugh out loud, okay? Moreover, the author did not make the mistake of writing everyone in the first half, so the characters were modular but did not leave an impression. The tragic and angry Saga, the extremely broken Hades, the elegant Garen, and the increasingly irritable Saga after being abused... The characters have shown their own characteristics, which is enough to leave an impression! Like! After that, the author's plot also made great progress! The author wrote 100,000 words before, right? I just finished writing the content of the first day, and Dang Duan kept getting messed up, making the article seem extremely sloppy, and even some of the highlights were submerged. But now the author will not write repeatedly on a highlight, but after describing it, he will stop and continue writing the next highlight! The most important thing is that the author's plot finally has a foreshadowing! Emma, you don't know how much I am also looking forward to the reveal of the most special character, how much I look forward to Luni giving Minos a good look, how much I look forward to the ingenious performance of the fairy tale! This foreshadowing was so important that when I watched the second half, I couldn't bear to go to the toilet... After the laughter and the plot complement each other, the readability of the article has been greatly improved! Then during the performance of the stage play, this reviewer also searched for pictures and followed the author's concise descriptions in his mind, and then laughed to death! This group of people is so noisy and cute! This is a spoof! There is no dialogue in the first half but no descriptive connections to make the article look smoother. There are also no piles of emojis and wrong punctuation marks to make readers struggle to understand. They just need to follow the author's thinking to imagine the picture and laugh! This is the true meaning of parody! Use a pen to describe the picture in your mind and form a natural smile! I still remember the classic that made people laugh when I saw a sentence two days ago: In the background of the night smoke, Lu Xiaofeng held the conch high above her head, with one hand on her hip and a bright smile. (Probably) And in the second half of this article, similar classics also appeared! For example, talking about the image of Dis, that sentence: "Dis looked at them and said righteously: "Let go of that pillow! Come at me if you have anything! "" And "It's okay when Dis is not smiling. As long as he grins, his strong gangster temperament will burst out, which is really hard to look at." "Dis said with a bad smile: "Yes, I am the princess! Please see, I am the most beautiful in the legend - Sleeping Beauty. "Fake news!" "Hades suddenly said this." It turns out that Hades was accusing the child of not sleeping at all, why is he called Sleeping Beauty! Then Dis very cleverly lay down on the table and fell asleep... These highlights were revealed one after another. This reviewer laughed until he was dizzy, okay! The laughter is so low-key that it can't hurt your blood pressure... And Daniel and Dis! ! Dis still acts like a princess! ! Kiss! ! ! Just think about it, I'm already dead! ! This is so funny! ! To be honest, when I saw this place, I really wanted to have a pop~! But Dis and Daniel don't have Bo'er, but Hades and Milo have Bo'er... The black lines are one by one... Falling down... Then the chaotic stage play ended like this, and the little butterfly returned to normal (which is really gratifying). Since there are still other plots that have not appeared, this review has been focusing on the most special person and the stage play, which are two impressive plot points. It is undeniable that compared with the previous article, the author has made many improvements, such as the smoothness and logic of the article, and the importance of describing multiple characters. At least he can tell a story satisfactorily. The most important thing about an author is not the writing style, but the ability to tell a story completely. This is a sentence in a writing observation I saw, and I will give this sentence to the author now. The most special person, the outstanding character here is Hades. His unreliability and badness, strange taste, elusive imagination, etc., Make people laugh so hard that their hands and feet twitch, and every award-winner's heart-wrenching feeling is beyond words! The entire underworld is very happy, the entire golden tour group is very miserable, the entire girls club and senior citizen club are just passersby... Very passerby... In the stage play, the female president suddenly appeared with a strange movement, brushed her presence with her helmet, and seduced the cute boy Balian's innocent boy's heart. Then the entire girls' club and the senior citizens' club continued to pass by... And here, Hades is also very good, and his potential has also appeared. In addition to being unreliable, he also has a bit more of a boss flavor. He disrupted the stage play several times to let all the gods unfold... It was too dark. But Minos is a better boss. To be honest, Minos is really a scumbag. Luni should continue to ignore him! I don't mind! Um, I'm off topic... All in all, the second half is very happy, and the writing style is the best among novice novels. It is very suitable for the current happy and spoof writing style, but the first half is... Not to mention. Anyway, it doesn't matter. The author wrote the first half six years ago = =…… The only small problem in the second half is about Zelos. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work, so I have a very average impression of Zheluos. In this article, when everyone is happy, only Zheluos is intolerant. That extra chapter makes me uncomfortable, because in this article, everyone hates Zheluos because he is ugly, and they bully him because of his appearance. However, in the description of this article, he has not done anything evil, he is just ugly, and then he is insulted and thrown into the dirt. Refers to the shame of the underworld = =... This three-dimensional view of good and bad based on appearance suddenly lowered the style of this article = =|||It is best for the author not to let his own preferences affect the characters in his writing. Even if he really hates a person, he still has to have a reasonable reason to abuse him, but Zheluosi is too ugly. This reason is a little bit... Apart from that, the second half is an excellent happy ending. Khan, because the author did not mention specific requirements, so I just gave some random thoughts. Unreliable long review shop, drunkard
I thought I was the couch, but I'm not! This chapter is full of information! It's a bit unclear. Since Su Qing has a bad relationship with her family, why should she go home? If it is necessary to go home, then why should she comfort her sister? Even if it is not now, she will not listen to Su Qing at other times. . And it was Tang Luoluo who took away (was it counted as taking away?) Her man, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! ! She didn't say anything, who knew, it was simply unreasonable!
Classmate, why is the title of your novel so garbled? . . I found this because of an error on my phone. I thought it was strange so I clicked on it.
Gewu, great love——oh hehehe
No comments, I just hope it can be done faster XD
Huahua, send it to Zhuangzhuang Huahua, come on, I'm optimistic about you.
It's been too long since I updated, and I forgot all the previous chapters, so I just read it again, from beginning to end.
It will definitely be even more sensational when the second dimension is exposed! I can't help but want to watch it now~
Why are there two Sister Yun?
What a sad story. . . .
Author, are you cheating?"
Haha, I can't love it, the computer can't post comments. . Do you feel like the progress has sped up? Haha, there are fewer words in the last paragraph, just abuse it as much as you want.