It was very well written, why did you abandon it? There are almost no articles written by Itachi and V. Keep it up
Is the hero a younger brother? …
Old Davis is also a vampire?
Come on, author! Discover the Net King fandom!
The content is well written! But too many URLs appear when reading!
Ink. . . Pfft. . That's our physics teacher
Although I came a little late, I wish you the best
Zhen'er and Lei Yi love each other so much, why did the author want Lei Yi to die! ! ! !
No more. . . . GN, tell me quickly, what is going on with Zuo Tianhao! ! ! ! Is he a modern person? ? ? I didn't look carefully enough. It seems like something was overlooked. . . . . . Embarrassing~~~~
The psychology of the three people is too real!
Ahhh - I'm from the Suoxiang Party, but Lusuo is also very cute - it's hard to let go.
Zhang Qiang's parents' family is really miserable. They are all being taken advantage of. It's so shameful for the patriarch to have such an IQ!
"Hibari, who was thinking, accidentally touched Kurama's wound, "Ah~" Kurama called out, the voice was a little loud and sharp." I think most of Kurama here can only grunt.
Finally updated, spread flowers~~
Poof~! ~Menace dressed as Skylark. . ~
Um... Who is the pig's trotter... It confused me...
"Five" was changed to five fingers
Comment on "[King of Internet] Blooming Spring and Falling Sunflowers"
At first glance, I saw the cute light blue cover, which looked very warm, although it was a bit inconsistent with the countless words of copywriting and the serious sentence at the top. The songs on the home page are also very nice. The deep female voice gives people a sense of helplessness as time goes by and they grow up? In summary, the writing is pretty good and will not make people feel the urge to run away.
Just reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist is a girl with a story in her heart. Laughs, did you use "White Night Walk" to imply something? I found that each chapter is accompanied by music, which may be a bit laggy for girls with poor internet speeds, but the music is still very soothing. Ps: Although it is suitable for local conditions and convenient for writing, the Haihara Festival is in September.
So in addition to the heroine, there must be a female supporting character in the text, a heroine with a story plus a supporting female character with a story, plus a dog... Ah, I'm sorry, I always unconsciously translate the English word "Son of God" into some kind of local name in northern China = =|||, okay, it's Seiichi Yukimura. The second member of the Tennis Club is Lord Lord——Compared to the military advisor who has been at the same desk for five years and still can't find out the heroine's information, he and Ijima seem to have a past of bullying and being bullied. Lord, are you really that bad?
The sudden transfer student, Baili Lan, looks like the Mary Sue heroine who usually appears in time travel novels, and it matches in every way! But when I saw VII, I didn't think so. I felt that she just paid too much attention to the tennis clubs of each school and was too purposefully obsessed.
There are a lot of jumps between chapters, especially this one.
Baililan's reason for coming to see Boss Hei has been clearly explained, but her identity is also a bit confusing. The inexplicable appearance and conversation between Young A and the heroine, as well as the sudden appearance of a ruffian who is suspected of having a relationship with the heroine, and Young A's attitude towards the heroine are still confusing and somewhat unclear.
Personally, I feel that the explanations in this chapter are a bit complicated and sloppy - in fact, it doesn't take such an ancient brain to make the characters come out, it is easy to suffer from indigestion.
Ahhhh, it turns out that in the next chapter Young A and the heroine didn't know each other before! Inexplicably, I arrived at the beach again, OTZ... Personally, I feel that Mr. A is not the kind of boy who casually calls people "female cats". He is not such a person, no, no... Q mouth Q
The plot man arrives after a few chapters! Oh, Valentine's Day! The perfect Valentine's Day! As a result, I saw that Atobe seemed to be agitated for something, and the poor Renzu suffered a lot. In the end, it was revealed that the scoundrel man who looked scumbag but very affectionate was related to him by blood. The heroine probably had a strange feeling for him, but she always felt like she didn't like him. There was an unspeakable past. I thought of the previous "White Night Journey", well, maybe I was overthinking it.
Speaking of the unspeakable past——Ishima's character is also very strange. She probably likes Liu Renji. It was not mentioned in the article before, but it suddenly came out after a can of black tea. It feels a bit abrupt. A good friend turns into a love rival (although the situation is not obvious yet). It is the most annoying! The Ishima created by the author gives people the feeling of a wet-faced person who is slimy and rotten when rubbed. It seems that as long as you exert force, it will be squeezed out of shape. The face is too vague, and it is not easy for people to like her. A soft girl is good, but a soft girl who looks sick and timid and silent all day long... Is not very popular.
To sum up: this is a somewhat gloomy article where everyone has a story, and there are foreshadowings everywhere in the article. The writing is good, the details are beautifully described, but the connection between chapters is a bit unsmooth, the content jumps a bit, and the foreshadowing seems a bit blurry. It is recommended for girls who are patient, can stand the dullness and like cruel youth.
Invincible Tongfeng Review ShopJingjing Review
Strangely, if the timeline is set, the world after Mo Ziyan traveled back to 1992 would have ceased to exist, so Zi Yan's existence actually complies with the rules, right?
Master =-=.....
Looking forward to the update, the article is very nice~~
This, this, this. . . How can you cheat Nirvana? . . . Watch. . .
What's behind, what's behind, I'm looking for Xiaobing to update every day, why don't you update?
Dad, you have to work hard!
I wonder how Bai Shan will deal with Zifan XD
Although Sanmiao is a male nanny, and although he still has a very naughty crush on the stupid and annoying Yongyang, I will continue to watch it for the sake of King Yan and Sanbao's red and fruity love!
Please take a photo in the front row=3=
What would it look like if you were so thin that you became a ribbon? Ouch!
Bubbling, it's over~
XianziGJ~~~~~~
Knock down all the 'light bulbs'~~~~
I found that I like Xiao hope a little bit, really
Hope she won't become bad
It was very well written, why did you abandon it? There are almost no articles written by Itachi and V. Keep it up
Is the hero a younger brother? …
Old Davis is also a vampire?
Come on, author! Discover the Net King fandom!
The content is well written! But too many URLs appear when reading!
Ink. . . Pfft. . That's our physics teacher Although I came a little late, I wish you the best
Zhen'er and Lei Yi love each other so much, why did the author want Lei Yi to die! ! ! !
No more. . . . GN, tell me quickly, what is going on with Zuo Tianhao! ! ! ! Is he a modern person? ? ? I didn't look carefully enough. It seems like something was overlooked. . . . . . Embarrassing~~~~
The psychology of the three people is too real!
Ahhh - I'm from the Suoxiang Party, but Lusuo is also very cute - it's hard to let go.
Zhang Qiang's parents' family is really miserable. They are all being taken advantage of. It's so shameful for the patriarch to have such an IQ!
"Hibari, who was thinking, accidentally touched Kurama's wound, "Ah~" Kurama called out, the voice was a little loud and sharp." I think most of Kurama here can only grunt.
Finally updated, spread flowers~~
Poof~! ~Menace dressed as Skylark. . ~
Um... Who is the pig's trotter... It confused me...
"Five" was changed to five fingers
Comment on "[King of Internet] Blooming Spring and Falling Sunflowers" At first glance, I saw the cute light blue cover, which looked very warm, although it was a bit inconsistent with the countless words of copywriting and the serious sentence at the top. The songs on the home page are also very nice. The deep female voice gives people a sense of helplessness as time goes by and they grow up? In summary, the writing is pretty good and will not make people feel the urge to run away. Just reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist is a girl with a story in her heart. Laughs, did you use "White Night Walk" to imply something? I found that each chapter is accompanied by music, which may be a bit laggy for girls with poor internet speeds, but the music is still very soothing. Ps: Although it is suitable for local conditions and convenient for writing, the Haihara Festival is in September. So in addition to the heroine, there must be a female supporting character in the text, a heroine with a story plus a supporting female character with a story, plus a dog... Ah, I'm sorry, I always unconsciously translate the English word "Son of God" into some kind of local name in northern China = =|||, okay, it's Seiichi Yukimura. The second member of the Tennis Club is Lord Lord——Compared to the military advisor who has been at the same desk for five years and still can't find out the heroine's information, he and Ijima seem to have a past of bullying and being bullied. Lord, are you really that bad? The sudden transfer student, Baili Lan, looks like the Mary Sue heroine who usually appears in time travel novels, and it matches in every way! But when I saw VII, I didn't think so. I felt that she just paid too much attention to the tennis clubs of each school and was too purposefully obsessed. There are a lot of jumps between chapters, especially this one. Baililan's reason for coming to see Boss Hei has been clearly explained, but her identity is also a bit confusing. The inexplicable appearance and conversation between Young A and the heroine, as well as the sudden appearance of a ruffian who is suspected of having a relationship with the heroine, and Young A's attitude towards the heroine are still confusing and somewhat unclear. Personally, I feel that the explanations in this chapter are a bit complicated and sloppy - in fact, it doesn't take such an ancient brain to make the characters come out, it is easy to suffer from indigestion. Ahhhh, it turns out that in the next chapter Young A and the heroine didn't know each other before! Inexplicably, I arrived at the beach again, OTZ... Personally, I feel that Mr. A is not the kind of boy who casually calls people "female cats". He is not such a person, no, no... Q mouth Q The plot man arrives after a few chapters! Oh, Valentine's Day! The perfect Valentine's Day! As a result, I saw that Atobe seemed to be agitated for something, and the poor Renzu suffered a lot. In the end, it was revealed that the scoundrel man who looked scumbag but very affectionate was related to him by blood. The heroine probably had a strange feeling for him, but she always felt like she didn't like him. There was an unspeakable past. I thought of the previous "White Night Journey", well, maybe I was overthinking it. Speaking of the unspeakable past——Ishima's character is also very strange. She probably likes Liu Renji. It was not mentioned in the article before, but it suddenly came out after a can of black tea. It feels a bit abrupt. A good friend turns into a love rival (although the situation is not obvious yet). It is the most annoying! The Ishima created by the author gives people the feeling of a wet-faced person who is slimy and rotten when rubbed. It seems that as long as you exert force, it will be squeezed out of shape. The face is too vague, and it is not easy for people to like her. A soft girl is good, but a soft girl who looks sick and timid and silent all day long... Is not very popular. To sum up: this is a somewhat gloomy article where everyone has a story, and there are foreshadowings everywhere in the article. The writing is good, the details are beautifully described, but the connection between chapters is a bit unsmooth, the content jumps a bit, and the foreshadowing seems a bit blurry. It is recommended for girls who are patient, can stand the dullness and like cruel youth. Invincible Tongfeng Review ShopJingjing Review
Strangely, if the timeline is set, the world after Mo Ziyan traveled back to 1992 would have ceased to exist, so Zi Yan's existence actually complies with the rules, right?
Master =-=.....
Looking forward to the update, the article is very nice~~
This, this, this. . . How can you cheat Nirvana? . . . Watch. . .
What's behind, what's behind, I'm looking for Xiaobing to update every day, why don't you update?
Dad, you have to work hard!
I wonder how Bai Shan will deal with Zifan XD
Although Sanmiao is a male nanny, and although he still has a very naughty crush on the stupid and annoying Yongyang, I will continue to watch it for the sake of King Yan and Sanbao's red and fruity love!
Please take a photo in the front row=3=
What would it look like if you were so thin that you became a ribbon? Ouch!
Bubbling, it's over~
XianziGJ~~~~~~ Knock down all the 'light bulbs'~~~~
I found that I like Xiao hope a little bit, really Hope she won't become bad