Ur Short Story the Black Wings

This is a short story I wrote a few years ago. At that time, I saw the part where I saw Xiaowu die. It took me a long time to write it. I remember that at that time I sent it to the editorial department of other magazines, but they didn't want it. I was deeply shocked. ORZ I checked it out today and no changes were made. Please point out if there are any inaccuracies, thank you~ Intention: