If you love each other in this life but cannot stay together, you must wait for the next life.
If there is an afterlife, love must continue.
If there is a separation between yin and yang in this life and the next, we must pray that we can turn back time and never meet each other at the moment we meet.
Reader comments
[It was midsummer of the nineteenth year of Duanxi. Would it be better to remove the word "time is"?
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It seems a little unreasonable that a tea shop selling coarse tea in a small town can provide crushed ice in the summer. Such tea is unlikely to be "free herbal tea".
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[My mother was too weak to work hard, so whenever she had to do rough work, he would naturally carry it on his shoulders. He was by no means a scholar who could neither shoulder nor lift. Would it be smoother if the subject "he" is added to the last part and then becomes an independent sentence?
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[A good man will never disdain the money exchanged for poetry and appearance. It's "take", not "that".
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[After acknowledging him, Fu Qing sat down with him. Fang mentioned that he was now alone, preparing to travel to the Seven Prefectures, but Nang
The state of being empty. Would it be better to change the last part to "The bag is empty."
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[In the end, I could only ask the tea boy about the location of the Jin family, and made up my mind to visit them in five days. This sentence is missing a subject. Also, I don't quite understand why Fu Qing must "visit in five days"? Would it be better to use a vague time? For example, how many days will it take?
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The segmentation and layout of the adults are a bit tiring to read. It might be better to combine one thing, one scene, and one psychological description into one paragraph. Line breaks occur every sentence, and they are all crowded together. It took me a little more effort to get used to them.
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Looking back, I found a lot of thorns in my side. If you don't like it, I'll stop here. Author's reply:
Finally disconnected and returned... Thank you for your guidance and correction.
The ice in the tea is indeed a bug, I plan to replace it
The rest will be modified slowly later >_<
555555555.......... My heart is so happy for you, but you don't know...
By the way, I am back again! ! ! ! ! ! O(∩_∩)o... Hahahahahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Little Lingling~~~~~You are missing me~~~Hahahaha~~~~~~~~~~~
(Everyone in Meteor Street!!!!!!! Go kill the FJ family!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha!!!) Author's reply:
Welcome back Xiaojiu~~I miss you~
(The FJ family is gone, and Meteor Street is gone. The world is completely destroyed, Amen)
[It was midsummer of the nineteenth year of Duanxi. Would it be better to remove the word "time is"? . It seems a little unreasonable that a tea shop selling coarse tea in a small town can provide crushed ice in the summer. Such tea is unlikely to be "free herbal tea". . [My mother was too weak to work hard, so whenever she had to do rough work, he would naturally carry it on his shoulders. He was by no means a scholar who could neither shoulder nor lift. Would it be smoother if the subject "he" is added to the last part and then becomes an independent sentence? . [A good man will never disdain the money exchanged for poetry and appearance. It's "take", not "that". . [After acknowledging him, Fu Qing sat down with him. Fang mentioned that he was now alone, preparing to travel to the Seven Prefectures, but Nang The state of being empty. Would it be better to change the last part to "The bag is empty." . [In the end, I could only ask the tea boy about the location of the Jin family, and made up my mind to visit them in five days. This sentence is missing a subject. Also, I don't quite understand why Fu Qing must "visit in five days"? Would it be better to use a vague time? For example, how many days will it take? . The segmentation and layout of the adults are a bit tiring to read. It might be better to combine one thing, one scene, and one psychological description into one paragraph. Line breaks occur every sentence, and they are all crowded together. It took me a little more effort to get used to them. . Looking back, I found a lot of thorns in my side. If you don't like it, I'll stop here. Author's reply: Finally disconnected and returned... Thank you for your guidance and correction. The ice in the tea is indeed a bug, I plan to replace it The rest will be modified slowly later >_<
555555555.......... My heart is so happy for you, but you don't know...
By the way, I am back again! ! ! ! ! ! O(∩_∩)o... Hahahahahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Little Lingling~~~~~You are missing me~~~Hahahaha~~~~~~~~~~~ (Everyone in Meteor Street!!!!!!! Go kill the FJ family!!!!!!!!! Hahahahaha!!!) Author's reply: Welcome back Xiaojiu~~I miss you~ (The FJ family is gone, and Meteor Street is gone. The world is completely destroyed, Amen)