This is a bitter story about an unlucky author who changes his writing into the novel world.
He was reborn as a cannon fodder... When he tried hard to get on the protagonist's lap, he discovered that something had happened...
Although he has made up his mind to eat and drink behind the protagonist's back, one day he can find a virtuous girl to come home and get married...
But it seems that the possibility of realizing it is far away...
PS: This article is not a V, I don't know how long it will be, updates may not be guaranteed, the protagonist does not have a golden finger, Xiao Gong is not a very possessive male, occasionally character pictures will appear, if you have any doubts, you can raise them, and you can leave your comments.
The author must reply to every reply (except for supplementary points, etc. ← It is not recommended to supplement points, because it is easy to delete the message, especially because the author writes silently and it looks like readers can see it, so there is no need to ask for this point). Just leave a message where you can, and do not recommend it to relatives and friends.
Finally: =L= Actually, I prefer long comments... Will anyone say that I am greedy → → If they do, just pretend they didn't hear it, that's it.
PS:
Note: This is a HE article that the author thinks is HE, but readers think it is BE.
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Reader comments
I accidentally read another article by the author and found this one in the comment section and column. When I first read the copy, I was still hesitant whether to read it. When I saw "the author thinks he but the reader thinks be", my curiosity suddenly rose, and then I jumped into the trap resolutely. What is the ending that makes the author think it's okay but makes the readers want to die with the author?
I am not afraid of be. I always feel that the aesthetics of be are equally moving, or even more moving. Tragedy is more like eternal beauty. Some of them are not as heart-breaking as BE's forced sex. Of course, abuse for the sake of abuse is fine.
Omnivores say that as long as the author writes well, there is no setting that cannot be read.
This article is almost ten years old and is indeed quite old. Although it has shortcomings, the overall level is still very admirable. Think about what I wrote in my senior year of high school_(:зゝ∠)_
There is nothing that I can't understand, but sometimes it feels like the explanation part is a little lacking, as if a piece is missing and needs to be supplemented, and some missing explanations are like a plot that has no beginning or end. For example, in the early stage, my senior brother was heartbroken and went to the Undersea City, but he just said "nothing serious" and turned the page without asking the reason... Maybe someone like me who likes to get to the bottom of things can't understand it, or I was still confused by the behavior of the Riddler who didn't explain things like this. Although the reason was finally stated at the end, why didn't anyone ask at the time...
In addition, Sanshui also suffered from heart disease, and Xu Xiu died of a heart attack twice. Does the author have any obsession with heartache...?
The rather ancient prose is a bit disconnected from the quite modern complaints, but it is still interesting. Many of the settings in Zuhua Dictionary are very detailed and vivid, and feel great, just like little easter eggs in a full-length collection of settings. There are many characters and each has their own charm, but it seems that it is not enough to say that they are group portraits. Many of them are unnecessary to the story. The main plot is not very complicated, and it seems that there is no room for so many big bosses in it. It feels a bit like the huge worldview of "Eternal Hate" with millions of words cannot be fully supported.
The setting about the author falling in love with the protagonist through the book is really classic, but it was the senior brother who discovered it first, figured it out, took the initiative, and took the initiative, while Xiaobai was still ignorant and had more trust and dependence on the elders and more family and friendship components in his heart. It was really touching... I don't think the senior brother and the Wang Tianji is two people, and they are both Xu Xiu. Just like Xiaobai will never know that he used to be a complaining, stupid and cute otaku. This is part of Xu Xiu. The gentle, dignified, calm and reserved senior brother and Wang Tianji, who is only gentle to Xiaobai, cold, arrogant and fragile, are also part of him.
As for the ending, as mentioned in the article, after drinking all the water from the River of Forgetfulness, the person reincarnated will never be the same again. Although it is not reincarnation but a new world line, I am convinced that Ah Xiu is not Xu Xiu, and Kongsang Immortal is not Bai Jiangli.
In the end, Xu Xiu died once again through his heart and left Bai Jiangli alone. In the end, Bai Jiangli once again desperately held the body of the person he cherished and fell into the darkness, only this time the whole world was buried with him.
In the end, just like the destiny that Jian Qing prayed for, the Son of Heaven will bring about the collapse of the heaven and the end of the world. He hopes that the heaven will prove the way and mend the sky, so that the people will be safe.
But who says this is not he? Although it is by no means a happy ending, I still want to say: dying for love is he——!
Even the ending that appeared in the previous extra chapter made me sadder. Or they may die, and the dead person's voice and face will be dusted forever, and the living person will always walk alone in the memory of the other person who is still alive, only waking up to the pain once every ten years; or it may be that both of them are by each other's side, but there are people and things that cannot be solved, and the indelible sadness lingers for a long time. It seems that the world is full of pain and happiness is only for a moment. No matter the mortals or the heaven-defying ones, there is nothing they can do about it. The bright moon shines on his white hair, but the world of mortals is so lonely.
So Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli embraced each other, the world restarted, and Ah Xiu and Kong Sang still have a future. Isn't this great? If it were Bai Jiangli facing Ah Xiu or Xu Xiu facing Kong Sang, then I would really cry to death. All the living beings in Jiuxiao are still there, and the people in front of me talk and laugh as before, but they are no longer the old friends in my heart.
The arrival of Xu Xiu and the changes that followed left no one in this world to save the collapsed heaven. In the end, it was naturally his creator who would make up for everything. Because of him, there is "Eternal Hate", and he patched up the sky, and then there was the Kongsang Immortal who reigned in the sky. Speaking of which, what I remember most is the sentence in the postscript. It was Xu Xiu's partiality that gave Bai Jiangli the supreme glory.
Yes, which author who writes with sincerity doesn't love his protagonist deeply.
Teacher, the more I read your articles, the more I feel like it's not good. It's terrible. It's too much for me. At the same time, I always feel that you have opened up a new level for me. Let me explain. This new level means that in the past few years of reading your articles, you have made me It's quite a joy. Maybe it's been too long since I've read an article, but at this age, I've experienced so many things, and when I read the article again, I felt so surprised, so amazing, so wonderful. I haven't been so interested in an article for a long time. I mean reading it. At that time, haha, nearly ten years after you wrote this article, the world has become very absurd. I don't know what other people think. It's just me, a layman, who hates those weird novels on the JJ list today. I feel that the situation is getting worse. Reading your article again is so joyful. I think my current comment is too subjective and may be quite bad. But my recent mentality, after reading it, I don't know what to say. Of course, it may be that I am a senior in high school now. It's related to students, haha, because the teacher was also a senior in high school when he wrote this article, and from what the author said, I can understand some of the author's personality. Obviously, I know that I am completely opposite, but the three views are indeed very consistent. It's just that I am not as brave as the teacher, and I am not as smart as the teacher. Looking at such a teacher makes me admire me so much. In the past ten years, alas, I have been too attached to this time, haha. I feel that I came too late. When I met the teacher, the teacher had already left. It's so far away. The teacher is still insisting on writing. It's really awesome. I like the teacher no matter how I look at it. Of course, I know that there is something called a book and the author should not be discussed in the same breath, but I feel that it is not okay not to express my love for the author and the teacher. In short, it is 3:30 in the morning, and I don't know what I am talking about. Anyway, it is just like this, disturbing the teacher. I like the teacher's writing and the teacher's little temper. I hope the teacher has something in mind and can achieve something. Dear characters, everyone is wonderful, see you next time! ! I like it very much! ! ! ! By the way, I'm sorry that my child is just a poor ordinary high school student with no education, no money or energy. JJ I really deleted it again and again, downloaded it and deleted it again. I'm not very good at using it. If I offended you, I apologize to everyone who saw this comment~
The writing is really beautiful, with an amazing writing style and plot. The emotional expression also really made me feel particularly profound, a different kind of profound. For example, when I read other novels, when the other half leaves him, most of the authors describe the painful screams after the loss, and the subsequent decadence and decadence. Grief for the rest of my life. But when Jiang Li's Tianji left, Jiang Li said why I want to know you, why I want to meet you, and I never want to meet you again. It was so beautiful when we met, but the repeated losses made him a hundred times more painful. He was so sad that he looked forward to never meeting him. I really felt his pain deeply at that moment. Compared with other novels about the separation between life and death, screaming in pain, when Jiang Li said these words, I really felt too painful and desperate, as if a knife had stabbed into my heart.
Haha... When my friend was listening to a song and reading comments today, someone said that she thought of this article... So she took a screenshot and sent it to me x (because she remembered that my previous ID was Fengjuan. I will never read abuse articles in my next life (...)...) When I saw the screenshot she sent me, I felt a mouthful of old blood ( No) The feeling of phantom pain (this is real) came up again, my God... I finished reading it in junior high school on an icy winter day. It was extremely cold, and my heart was cold. I had never been beaten by an abusive novel at that time. After reading this book, I felt so deep in my heart. The desolation was completely blank (not that serious). Anyway, I was confused for a while after watching it and then went to bed. There was nothing special after that. I just feel a little confused when I think about it (probably). It has been so long and I didn't expect that I still remember it (eh), because of a screenshot taken by a friend. I looked at the comment section of this article again, and there were so many familiar names and familiar plots. My heart ached and my chest felt so heavy! This article was so painful!
After all, it's been so long, and I can't remember any clear plot development. I can only remember that the protagonist is a senior brother and the other protagonist is a junior brother (wow, next year). There are so many names in the comment section, so familiar and familiar, but I can't remember the specific plot. It's just the feeling back then that left a deep impression on me, the cold wind outside and my heart ()
Sad! ! Well, another word that can describe my mood is sigh (Hey) I originally wanted to give it to my friend, but my friend learned about the double-death ending of this book first and said that she was not prepared to bear such a heavy burden on her heart. Hum, okay (falling to the ground)_(:з∠)_Although I followed up by saying that they were together in the new world (plausible), she didn't read anything (hum)
hhhhh This article has more memories for me now x That night gave me such a profound feeling, _(:з∠)_ I sighed and sighed, it was the feeling of helplessness and the flowers falling away. . . . . Everyone is living a normal life, and the result is. . . . Ending. . . . Well, the inevitable ending,,,,, ahhhhhh! Sure enough it's still great! ! Because I am a vulgar, emotional person who loves happy endings TT←Don't worry about me, just write whatever you want because I am! Readers! ! ! (Tremor) (Just a few days ago I heard a reader say, in fact, what else can a reader say (skin it)
_(:з∠)_In short, I have finished writing this review that has no brains, no skills, only feelings and memories. I don't know what I want to express. Anyway, I like your article. The characters in the book do things with logic and motivation. Come on, write it. Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, I want to follow you (eh?)＼(`Δ')/
I miss this article... After reading it, I turned to the author's vb and looked at the character pictures. In fact, I didn't feel that cruel? (Maybe I saw it a little bit awkwardly at the time)
I've finished reviewing it. The last time I watched it was more than ten years ago. I was in junior high school at that time. It was so painful that I went downstairs to run laps at around 10 or 11 o'clock in the middle of the night... Looking at it now, although I don't feel the same as before, I still feel heavy in my heart, ugh.
I'm writing a long review, but I don't know if the author's sister can read it, haha.
This book is divided into four volumes, and the relationship between the two protagonists is also divided into four sections. The first volume, Xu Xiu's time travel, gave this book the same beginning as ordinary sweet articles about cultivating immortals. At that time, I just read this article with the idea of killing time, but I didn't expect that it actually gave me the desire to write a long review. The last time I had this urge was after reading Er Gen's Seeking Demons. Okay, let's get back to the topic. In the first chapter of the book, Xu Xiu travels through time and meets Bai Jiangli. The beginning of the story is very plain, which makes people relax involuntarily, watching the author slowly construct their world with delicate words, watching their smiles, and watching their deep love for each other. But ordinary days are dull, but for them in the future, this period of time in the Yuying Sect is probably the happiest and most nostalgic moment in their lives. At this time, the plot begins. Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli picked up their junior sister on the way down the mountain, allowing her to escape the sect's disaster. Xu Xiu originally thought that as the author, he knew the plot and characters of the book very well, but later events changed his mind. At this time, the gears of fate had begun to turn.
Bai Jiangli embarked on the road to find his parents, and Xu Xiu, as his senior brother and the author of the book, of course accompanied his protagonist on the road. The first encounter between Xu Xiu and Jin Qing in the dream laid an important foreshadowing for the book and provided space for the development of the following chapters.
Xu Xiu realized his subconscious thoughts because of Bai Jiangli's kiss, but Bai Jiangli always saw clearly what he was thinking, which made him miss Xu Xiu once. Xu Xiu's kiss amidst the clouds and cranes made Bai Jiangli leave with a sense of escape, but he didn't want this to be the last time he saw his senior brother alive. Bai Jiangli was hit, and the two corpses of good and evil became adults on their own, but Bai Jiangli himself fell into a deep sleep. A hundred years later, Xu Xiu wakes up as Wang Tianji and expresses his feelings to Hui Bai Jiangli. The two protagonists finally come together, but the final ending is unexpected and not perfect, but it is also heartwarming in the end. The love and hatred of the previous life are abandoned. In this life, we are together again. You are the immortal Kongsang, and I am the remnant soul Ah Xiu.
Except for the first paragraph, the whole book is filled with a faint atmosphere of depression and sadness. The development of the plot is not unexpected. The elegance of the ancient style and the shallow philosophy in the words are undoubtedly a highlight of the book. The author must have rich experience. But halfway through, I discovered a problem. The plot of the article is very good and the plot is very rich, but many foreshadowings and details are not well arranged. The understanding of many parts of the article comes from the author's explanation in the message. This is one of the problems. The author is a student, and he is a senior high school student who is about to face the mammoth college entrance examination. He may be busy with his studies. I saw a little perfunctory in it. Maybe the perfunctory is a bit serious, but the author does have some negligence. Fairy novels are difficult to write, and I feel this deeply. It contains too many things, and the further you go, the harder it becomes to start writing. As the plot progresses, there are more and more foreshadowings, and there are more and more details that need to be paid attention to. Often, a sub-"copy" of tens of thousands of words will involve all walks of life and even the direction of heaven. It is easy to deviate from the original outline if you are not careful. Therefore, I have always been a writer who does not lay out the outline, the kind who digs holes without filling them and is chased. I admire you for cheating.
The tone of the article is very good. It is not torture for the sake of torture. The slow heat is good. After all, they are two grown men, and one is an otaku who admires Teacher Cang and the other is the protagonist of a stallion novel. How could they develop admiration for someone of the same gender as themselves so quickly? Not to mention Bai Jiangli, a cold person. Being strong is good, but slow heat is also good.
Perhaps because the author is a girl, the full text does not show the joy and ease of a fairy tale, but it is understandable considering the type and background of the story.
In fact, to be honest, I think this article is quite good. The whole book has a warm tone, and the development of the story and plot attracts readers to look forward to the next chapter impatiently. My favorite chapter in the whole book is the extra chapter. Bai Jiangli stands at the top, but Xu Xiu chooses to live in seclusion (pretend).
The ending is quite good, I like it very much. I no longer care about any major events in the world, and there is no longer any love or hatred. We are just us. No matter what we have experienced or what we have forgotten, fate will always let us meet again.
Think about it or leave a review. This book was recommended to me by someone else. I thought it was some kind of funny fairy-cultivating story from the title. After I clicked in and took a look, I couldn't put it down. I couldn't put it down because it was such a fairy-like writing. It felt like a real martial arts novel (although it's not a martial arts novel →_→). The writing style is good, and the characters in the novel are all very rich. What a story! I have to say, chaos is really a bit chaotic →_→. Fortunately, I like this kind of complicated relationship. I am someone who couldn't understand it the first time but tried hard to read it the second time <(｀^?)>. Anyway, I didn't see any clues or anything like that (?-ω-`). Hey,,?^?,,, Such a fairy-like article is worth reading.
Ah, I came across this article again. It made my liver hurt at first. When I read the title, I had the same feeling as before: This is probably a joyful article about cultivating immortality. Result! It's actually a piece of writing that makes my liver hurt! ! ! The writing is still good, but now I can't stand the abuse QAQ
I finished reading it all... I can't understand it... I can't understand anything since the three of them separated from the bottom of the sea. It doesn't feel cruel, maybe because I can't understand it [laughing and crying].
After reading the entire article, I only have one question: Why is Wangtianji's white-haired body in the world of immortality? ? ? If it's wearing clothes, is it white hair? ? ? Why did that princess call him Bai Zi? ? ? ?
Okay~_~ Most likely it's because I didn't read the old article carefully so I don't know the answer [crying]
Today I was looking through my reading records from a few years ago, and when I saw the title of this article, my heart skipped a beat. I have read countless articles, but this article really left a deep psychological shadow (the article was very well written). Several years later, I still remember that I thought the title of the article was a happy ending, so I started reading. The first half was very interesting, and the ending was... Huh? The protagonist is dead? ? Ward Maye, the writing style is good, the sense of substitution is strong, the characters are likeable, and then the ending is disappointing, the contrast is not good for everyone. Looking back at the title of the article, I saw that it was really not a headline-grabber. In the next life, don't write about immortals or heroes. It will hurt others and yourself. Also, a few years later, I still don't have the courage to watch it again.
After reading it, I felt very sad, depressing but warm at the same time! I don't know what to say, but thank you so much for writing this article!
After all, this article is totally my cup of tea~
All in all, come on~
After reading this book in one sitting, I felt a lot. The author of the comment may not be able to see it now, but I still want to say something.
What initially attracted me was the writing style. Although there was a slight difference between the front and back, and I felt it was stumbling and not very smooth in the early stage, the characters were clearly and vividly depicted. The relationship between two people is like two ropes that are twisted together into a complicated knot. To be honest, the ending is different from what I imagined, but it is a bit expected. This is how the relationship between Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli ended. Although it is heavy, it is also very beautiful. Thank you to the author for writing this article! This is a style I have never seen before, but it is really attractive. Come on!
I finished reading it in one go... To be honest, I was still reading it very seriously. Although there were many foreshadowings, I still didn't notice it (Isn't your brain working well? What attracted me most at first, apart from the writing style, was probably the characters. Recently, I like to wear books and prose, but I always feel that the characters are still inseparable from the template? I just feel that everything seems to be there. It feels a bit samey (I probably read too little!), But the characters in this article are very attractive to me. As for the writing style, I don't want to say how good the writing is, but I feel that he is a very meticulous person. The dictionary at the beginning made me feel very powerful... But in the end, it is easy for me to have a good impression of a character from the details. People who read it straight away... Not to mention, I really like the big style. Although some parts were really hazy when I didn't have a big dictionary and I was really... Confused, but it still didn't affect my enthusiasm and love for this article after reading it in one go... Well, the final ending can't be said to be unexpected. I have the same feeling I had when I read the ending of Jian San, well... It's very strange, and then I went to rewatch the Bai Xu extra chapter, and I really felt like crying. It's been a long time since this article was finished, so I probably won't see this comment, but I still want to say something to express my love for this article.
I looked confused before, but now I'm drunk too. ?
It's always like this, in several articles. XXWow, the ending is so disappointing. . . . .
I always feel that Xu You should be happier.
. . . You can't think simpler. There are many ways to tell a story. Only a few of the bad ones are from the same source. I read the second to last page. There is right and wrong. Why can I just wear books? And it's obviously you who call me Goldfinger. If someone is suddenly lucky enough to find someone, I can also say that a golden finger suddenly breaks out.
In fact, it was still being serialized until the point where the senior brother died. I couldn't keep up with the update speed, emmm, so I wanted to wait for the end. I waited until the Chuan Shu novels started to rise to the current bad street. To be honest, if ranked, this is the top three Chuan Shu novels that I have read. It's also the reason why I don't feel like giving up the story after reading it all the way. In the early and mid-term, I always felt that the senior brother died because of Xu Xiu. Now after reading it, I realized that it was not the case. But, it looks good! Split Wall Recommendation I now want to decapitate Amway. The only drawback is that I won't be able to communicate with the author until it's finished, but it's really good to watch!
In fact, I was a little confused when I read it, but the sleeve writing of Xianxia is really good. It's really amazing to have such imagination and writing skills in the third year of high school.
I'm inexplicably sad. I'm really not suitable for reading this kind of article. Hey, hey, I'm going to put my mind aside and read the sand sculpture happy article slowly.
I'm crying. I didn't finish watching it before, but now I feel a little sad after watching it.
Spread flowers ~ Great writing! By the way, am I the second one? (❛◡❛✿)
The author writes very well
If I had come here first to check in on literacy, I would never have read another huge article about reading. I probably learned a lot from this article, but at the end of the article, I really wanted to die with the author. . It's obviously like that in the early stage. . . . . . . Looking back, I wonder how the setting of attack could be a sweet story. I was too naive.
I read this article a long time ago, and I read it again today. I didn't think of this article at first, but then I wanted to cry when I saw the author's name_(:з∠)_
Quite suddenly, the next chapter was locked. I'm very curious about what was written.
After reading and checking in, the characters are quite interesting, and the plot direction is somewhat stream-of-consciousness. However, it only lasted for one year, and it was still the same environment (senior year of high school). It is good that the author was able to complete the story he wanted to write. If you have the time and energy, would you consider revising the article later? There are many details that could use some polishing. After all, this was a work made 6 years ago. The author is right. It is best not to recommend this article casually, but to let others read it, just by chance.
Madam, I want to be tortured to death by you. I thought it was an ordinary love story, but it turned out to be a profound sadomasochism story. The writing style of the prelude is normal and clear, but the following text made me have a myocardial infarction. So sad, please compensate me for a sweet fairy tale love storyヾ(
There is no torture orz as imagined, and the show is finished! So pretty!
I accidentally read another article by the author and found this one in the comment section and column. When I first read the copy, I was still hesitant whether to read it. When I saw "the author thinks he but the reader thinks be", my curiosity suddenly rose, and then I jumped into the trap resolutely. What is the ending that makes the author think it's okay but makes the readers want to die with the author? I am not afraid of be. I always feel that the aesthetics of be are equally moving, or even more moving. Tragedy is more like eternal beauty. Some of them are not as heart-breaking as BE's forced sex. Of course, abuse for the sake of abuse is fine. Omnivores say that as long as the author writes well, there is no setting that cannot be read. This article is almost ten years old and is indeed quite old. Although it has shortcomings, the overall level is still very admirable. Think about what I wrote in my senior year of high school_(:зゝ∠)_ There is nothing that I can't understand, but sometimes it feels like the explanation part is a little lacking, as if a piece is missing and needs to be supplemented, and some missing explanations are like a plot that has no beginning or end. For example, in the early stage, my senior brother was heartbroken and went to the Undersea City, but he just said "nothing serious" and turned the page without asking the reason... Maybe someone like me who likes to get to the bottom of things can't understand it, or I was still confused by the behavior of the Riddler who didn't explain things like this. Although the reason was finally stated at the end, why didn't anyone ask at the time... In addition, Sanshui also suffered from heart disease, and Xu Xiu died of a heart attack twice. Does the author have any obsession with heartache...? The rather ancient prose is a bit disconnected from the quite modern complaints, but it is still interesting. Many of the settings in Zuhua Dictionary are very detailed and vivid, and feel great, just like little easter eggs in a full-length collection of settings. There are many characters and each has their own charm, but it seems that it is not enough to say that they are group portraits. Many of them are unnecessary to the story. The main plot is not very complicated, and it seems that there is no room for so many big bosses in it. It feels a bit like the huge worldview of "Eternal Hate" with millions of words cannot be fully supported. The setting about the author falling in love with the protagonist through the book is really classic, but it was the senior brother who discovered it first, figured it out, took the initiative, and took the initiative, while Xiaobai was still ignorant and had more trust and dependence on the elders and more family and friendship components in his heart. It was really touching... I don't think the senior brother and the Wang Tianji is two people, and they are both Xu Xiu. Just like Xiaobai will never know that he used to be a complaining, stupid and cute otaku. This is part of Xu Xiu. The gentle, dignified, calm and reserved senior brother and Wang Tianji, who is only gentle to Xiaobai, cold, arrogant and fragile, are also part of him. As for the ending, as mentioned in the article, after drinking all the water from the River of Forgetfulness, the person reincarnated will never be the same again. Although it is not reincarnation but a new world line, I am convinced that Ah Xiu is not Xu Xiu, and Kongsang Immortal is not Bai Jiangli. In the end, Xu Xiu died once again through his heart and left Bai Jiangli alone. In the end, Bai Jiangli once again desperately held the body of the person he cherished and fell into the darkness, only this time the whole world was buried with him. In the end, just like the destiny that Jian Qing prayed for, the Son of Heaven will bring about the collapse of the heaven and the end of the world. He hopes that the heaven will prove the way and mend the sky, so that the people will be safe. But who says this is not he? Although it is by no means a happy ending, I still want to say: dying for love is he——! Even the ending that appeared in the previous extra chapter made me sadder. Or they may die, and the dead person's voice and face will be dusted forever, and the living person will always walk alone in the memory of the other person who is still alive, only waking up to the pain once every ten years; or it may be that both of them are by each other's side, but there are people and things that cannot be solved, and the indelible sadness lingers for a long time. It seems that the world is full of pain and happiness is only for a moment. No matter the mortals or the heaven-defying ones, there is nothing they can do about it. The bright moon shines on his white hair, but the world of mortals is so lonely. So Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli embraced each other, the world restarted, and Ah Xiu and Kong Sang still have a future. Isn't this great? If it were Bai Jiangli facing Ah Xiu or Xu Xiu facing Kong Sang, then I would really cry to death. All the living beings in Jiuxiao are still there, and the people in front of me talk and laugh as before, but they are no longer the old friends in my heart. The arrival of Xu Xiu and the changes that followed left no one in this world to save the collapsed heaven. In the end, it was naturally his creator who would make up for everything. Because of him, there is "Eternal Hate", and he patched up the sky, and then there was the Kongsang Immortal who reigned in the sky. Speaking of which, what I remember most is the sentence in the postscript. It was Xu Xiu's partiality that gave Bai Jiangli the supreme glory. Yes, which author who writes with sincerity doesn't love his protagonist deeply.
Teacher, the more I read your articles, the more I feel like it's not good. It's terrible. It's too much for me. At the same time, I always feel that you have opened up a new level for me. Let me explain. This new level means that in the past few years of reading your articles, you have made me It's quite a joy. Maybe it's been too long since I've read an article, but at this age, I've experienced so many things, and when I read the article again, I felt so surprised, so amazing, so wonderful. I haven't been so interested in an article for a long time. I mean reading it. At that time, haha, nearly ten years after you wrote this article, the world has become very absurd. I don't know what other people think. It's just me, a layman, who hates those weird novels on the JJ list today. I feel that the situation is getting worse. Reading your article again is so joyful. I think my current comment is too subjective and may be quite bad. But my recent mentality, after reading it, I don't know what to say. Of course, it may be that I am a senior in high school now. It's related to students, haha, because the teacher was also a senior in high school when he wrote this article, and from what the author said, I can understand some of the author's personality. Obviously, I know that I am completely opposite, but the three views are indeed very consistent. It's just that I am not as brave as the teacher, and I am not as smart as the teacher. Looking at such a teacher makes me admire me so much. In the past ten years, alas, I have been too attached to this time, haha. I feel that I came too late. When I met the teacher, the teacher had already left. It's so far away. The teacher is still insisting on writing. It's really awesome. I like the teacher no matter how I look at it. Of course, I know that there is something called a book and the author should not be discussed in the same breath, but I feel that it is not okay not to express my love for the author and the teacher. In short, it is 3:30 in the morning, and I don't know what I am talking about. Anyway, it is just like this, disturbing the teacher. I like the teacher's writing and the teacher's little temper. I hope the teacher has something in mind and can achieve something. Dear characters, everyone is wonderful, see you next time! ! I like it very much! ! ! ! By the way, I'm sorry that my child is just a poor ordinary high school student with no education, no money or energy. JJ I really deleted it again and again, downloaded it and deleted it again. I'm not very good at using it. If I offended you, I apologize to everyone who saw this comment~
The writing is really beautiful, with an amazing writing style and plot. The emotional expression also really made me feel particularly profound, a different kind of profound. For example, when I read other novels, when the other half leaves him, most of the authors describe the painful screams after the loss, and the subsequent decadence and decadence. Grief for the rest of my life. But when Jiang Li's Tianji left, Jiang Li said why I want to know you, why I want to meet you, and I never want to meet you again. It was so beautiful when we met, but the repeated losses made him a hundred times more painful. He was so sad that he looked forward to never meeting him. I really felt his pain deeply at that moment. Compared with other novels about the separation between life and death, screaming in pain, when Jiang Li said these words, I really felt too painful and desperate, as if a knife had stabbed into my heart.
Haha... When my friend was listening to a song and reading comments today, someone said that she thought of this article... So she took a screenshot and sent it to me x (because she remembered that my previous ID was Fengjuan. I will never read abuse articles in my next life (...)...) When I saw the screenshot she sent me, I felt a mouthful of old blood ( No) The feeling of phantom pain (this is real) came up again, my God... I finished reading it in junior high school on an icy winter day. It was extremely cold, and my heart was cold. I had never been beaten by an abusive novel at that time. After reading this book, I felt so deep in my heart. The desolation was completely blank (not that serious). Anyway, I was confused for a while after watching it and then went to bed. There was nothing special after that. I just feel a little confused when I think about it (probably). It has been so long and I didn't expect that I still remember it (eh), because of a screenshot taken by a friend. I looked at the comment section of this article again, and there were so many familiar names and familiar plots. My heart ached and my chest felt so heavy! This article was so painful! After all, it's been so long, and I can't remember any clear plot development. I can only remember that the protagonist is a senior brother and the other protagonist is a junior brother (wow, next year). There are so many names in the comment section, so familiar and familiar, but I can't remember the specific plot. It's just the feeling back then that left a deep impression on me, the cold wind outside and my heart () Sad! ! Well, another word that can describe my mood is sigh (Hey) I originally wanted to give it to my friend, but my friend learned about the double-death ending of this book first and said that she was not prepared to bear such a heavy burden on her heart. Hum, okay (falling to the ground)_(:з∠)_Although I followed up by saying that they were together in the new world (plausible), she didn't read anything (hum) hhhhh This article has more memories for me now x That night gave me such a profound feeling, _(:з∠)_ I sighed and sighed, it was the feeling of helplessness and the flowers falling away. . . . . Everyone is living a normal life, and the result is. . . . Ending. . . . Well, the inevitable ending,,,,, ahhhhhh! Sure enough it's still great! ! Because I am a vulgar, emotional person who loves happy endings TT←Don't worry about me, just write whatever you want because I am! Readers! ! ! (Tremor) (Just a few days ago I heard a reader say, in fact, what else can a reader say (skin it) _(:з∠)_In short, I have finished writing this review that has no brains, no skills, only feelings and memories. I don't know what I want to express. Anyway, I like your article. The characters in the book do things with logic and motivation. Come on, write it. Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, I want to follow you (eh?)＼(`Δ')/
I miss this article... After reading it, I turned to the author's vb and looked at the character pictures. In fact, I didn't feel that cruel? (Maybe I saw it a little bit awkwardly at the time)
I've finished reviewing it. The last time I watched it was more than ten years ago. I was in junior high school at that time. It was so painful that I went downstairs to run laps at around 10 or 11 o'clock in the middle of the night... Looking at it now, although I don't feel the same as before, I still feel heavy in my heart, ugh.
I'm writing a long review, but I don't know if the author's sister can read it, haha. This book is divided into four volumes, and the relationship between the two protagonists is also divided into four sections. The first volume, Xu Xiu's time travel, gave this book the same beginning as ordinary sweet articles about cultivating immortals. At that time, I just read this article with the idea of killing time, but I didn't expect that it actually gave me the desire to write a long review. The last time I had this urge was after reading Er Gen's Seeking Demons. Okay, let's get back to the topic. In the first chapter of the book, Xu Xiu travels through time and meets Bai Jiangli. The beginning of the story is very plain, which makes people relax involuntarily, watching the author slowly construct their world with delicate words, watching their smiles, and watching their deep love for each other. But ordinary days are dull, but for them in the future, this period of time in the Yuying Sect is probably the happiest and most nostalgic moment in their lives. At this time, the plot begins. Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli picked up their junior sister on the way down the mountain, allowing her to escape the sect's disaster. Xu Xiu originally thought that as the author, he knew the plot and characters of the book very well, but later events changed his mind. At this time, the gears of fate had begun to turn. Bai Jiangli embarked on the road to find his parents, and Xu Xiu, as his senior brother and the author of the book, of course accompanied his protagonist on the road. The first encounter between Xu Xiu and Jin Qing in the dream laid an important foreshadowing for the book and provided space for the development of the following chapters. Xu Xiu realized his subconscious thoughts because of Bai Jiangli's kiss, but Bai Jiangli always saw clearly what he was thinking, which made him miss Xu Xiu once. Xu Xiu's kiss amidst the clouds and cranes made Bai Jiangli leave with a sense of escape, but he didn't want this to be the last time he saw his senior brother alive. Bai Jiangli was hit, and the two corpses of good and evil became adults on their own, but Bai Jiangli himself fell into a deep sleep. A hundred years later, Xu Xiu wakes up as Wang Tianji and expresses his feelings to Hui Bai Jiangli. The two protagonists finally come together, but the final ending is unexpected and not perfect, but it is also heartwarming in the end. The love and hatred of the previous life are abandoned. In this life, we are together again. You are the immortal Kongsang, and I am the remnant soul Ah Xiu. Except for the first paragraph, the whole book is filled with a faint atmosphere of depression and sadness. The development of the plot is not unexpected. The elegance of the ancient style and the shallow philosophy in the words are undoubtedly a highlight of the book. The author must have rich experience. But halfway through, I discovered a problem. The plot of the article is very good and the plot is very rich, but many foreshadowings and details are not well arranged. The understanding of many parts of the article comes from the author's explanation in the message. This is one of the problems. The author is a student, and he is a senior high school student who is about to face the mammoth college entrance examination. He may be busy with his studies. I saw a little perfunctory in it. Maybe the perfunctory is a bit serious, but the author does have some negligence. Fairy novels are difficult to write, and I feel this deeply. It contains too many things, and the further you go, the harder it becomes to start writing. As the plot progresses, there are more and more foreshadowings, and there are more and more details that need to be paid attention to. Often, a sub-"copy" of tens of thousands of words will involve all walks of life and even the direction of heaven. It is easy to deviate from the original outline if you are not careful. Therefore, I have always been a writer who does not lay out the outline, the kind who digs holes without filling them and is chased. I admire you for cheating. The tone of the article is very good. It is not torture for the sake of torture. The slow heat is good. After all, they are two grown men, and one is an otaku who admires Teacher Cang and the other is the protagonist of a stallion novel. How could they develop admiration for someone of the same gender as themselves so quickly? Not to mention Bai Jiangli, a cold person. Being strong is good, but slow heat is also good. Perhaps because the author is a girl, the full text does not show the joy and ease of a fairy tale, but it is understandable considering the type and background of the story. In fact, to be honest, I think this article is quite good. The whole book has a warm tone, and the development of the story and plot attracts readers to look forward to the next chapter impatiently. My favorite chapter in the whole book is the extra chapter. Bai Jiangli stands at the top, but Xu Xiu chooses to live in seclusion (pretend). The ending is quite good, I like it very much. I no longer care about any major events in the world, and there is no longer any love or hatred. We are just us. No matter what we have experienced or what we have forgotten, fate will always let us meet again.
Think about it or leave a review. This book was recommended to me by someone else. I thought it was some kind of funny fairy-cultivating story from the title. After I clicked in and took a look, I couldn't put it down. I couldn't put it down because it was such a fairy-like writing. It felt like a real martial arts novel (although it's not a martial arts novel →_→). The writing style is good, and the characters in the novel are all very rich. What a story! I have to say, chaos is really a bit chaotic →_→. Fortunately, I like this kind of complicated relationship. I am someone who couldn't understand it the first time but tried hard to read it the second time <(｀^?)>. Anyway, I didn't see any clues or anything like that (?-ω-`). Hey,,?^?,,, Such a fairy-like article is worth reading.
Ah, I came across this article again. It made my liver hurt at first. When I read the title, I had the same feeling as before: This is probably a joyful article about cultivating immortality. Result! It's actually a piece of writing that makes my liver hurt! ! ! The writing is still good, but now I can't stand the abuse QAQ
I finished reading it all... I can't understand it... I can't understand anything since the three of them separated from the bottom of the sea. It doesn't feel cruel, maybe because I can't understand it [laughing and crying]. After reading the entire article, I only have one question: Why is Wangtianji's white-haired body in the world of immortality? ? ? If it's wearing clothes, is it white hair? ? ? Why did that princess call him Bai Zi? ? ? ? Okay~_~ Most likely it's because I didn't read the old article carefully so I don't know the answer [crying]
Today I was looking through my reading records from a few years ago, and when I saw the title of this article, my heart skipped a beat. I have read countless articles, but this article really left a deep psychological shadow (the article was very well written). Several years later, I still remember that I thought the title of the article was a happy ending, so I started reading. The first half was very interesting, and the ending was... Huh? The protagonist is dead? ? Ward Maye, the writing style is good, the sense of substitution is strong, the characters are likeable, and then the ending is disappointing, the contrast is not good for everyone. Looking back at the title of the article, I saw that it was really not a headline-grabber. In the next life, don't write about immortals or heroes. It will hurt others and yourself. Also, a few years later, I still don't have the courage to watch it again.
After reading it, I felt very sad, depressing but warm at the same time! I don't know what to say, but thank you so much for writing this article! After all, this article is totally my cup of tea~ All in all, come on~
After reading this book in one sitting, I felt a lot. The author of the comment may not be able to see it now, but I still want to say something. What initially attracted me was the writing style. Although there was a slight difference between the front and back, and I felt it was stumbling and not very smooth in the early stage, the characters were clearly and vividly depicted. The relationship between two people is like two ropes that are twisted together into a complicated knot. To be honest, the ending is different from what I imagined, but it is a bit expected. This is how the relationship between Xu Xiu and Bai Jiangli ended. Although it is heavy, it is also very beautiful. Thank you to the author for writing this article! This is a style I have never seen before, but it is really attractive. Come on!
I finished reading it in one go... To be honest, I was still reading it very seriously. Although there were many foreshadowings, I still didn't notice it (Isn't your brain working well? What attracted me most at first, apart from the writing style, was probably the characters. Recently, I like to wear books and prose, but I always feel that the characters are still inseparable from the template? I just feel that everything seems to be there. It feels a bit samey (I probably read too little!), But the characters in this article are very attractive to me. As for the writing style, I don't want to say how good the writing is, but I feel that he is a very meticulous person. The dictionary at the beginning made me feel very powerful... But in the end, it is easy for me to have a good impression of a character from the details. People who read it straight away... Not to mention, I really like the big style. Although some parts were really hazy when I didn't have a big dictionary and I was really... Confused, but it still didn't affect my enthusiasm and love for this article after reading it in one go... Well, the final ending can't be said to be unexpected. I have the same feeling I had when I read the ending of Jian San, well... It's very strange, and then I went to rewatch the Bai Xu extra chapter, and I really felt like crying. It's been a long time since this article was finished, so I probably won't see this comment, but I still want to say something to express my love for this article.
I looked confused before, but now I'm drunk too. ?
It's always like this, in several articles. XXWow, the ending is so disappointing. . . . .
I always feel that Xu You should be happier.
. . . You can't think simpler. There are many ways to tell a story. Only a few of the bad ones are from the same source. I read the second to last page. There is right and wrong. Why can I just wear books? And it's obviously you who call me Goldfinger. If someone is suddenly lucky enough to find someone, I can also say that a golden finger suddenly breaks out.
In fact, it was still being serialized until the point where the senior brother died. I couldn't keep up with the update speed, emmm, so I wanted to wait for the end. I waited until the Chuan Shu novels started to rise to the current bad street. To be honest, if ranked, this is the top three Chuan Shu novels that I have read. It's also the reason why I don't feel like giving up the story after reading it all the way. In the early and mid-term, I always felt that the senior brother died because of Xu Xiu. Now after reading it, I realized that it was not the case. But, it looks good! Split Wall Recommendation I now want to decapitate Amway. The only drawback is that I won't be able to communicate with the author until it's finished, but it's really good to watch!
In fact, I was a little confused when I read it, but the sleeve writing of Xianxia is really good. It's really amazing to have such imagination and writing skills in the third year of high school.
I'm inexplicably sad. I'm really not suitable for reading this kind of article. Hey, hey, I'm going to put my mind aside and read the sand sculpture happy article slowly.
I'm crying. I didn't finish watching it before, but now I feel a little sad after watching it.
Spread flowers ~ Great writing! By the way, am I the second one? (❛◡❛✿)
The author writes very well
If I had come here first to check in on literacy, I would never have read another huge article about reading. I probably learned a lot from this article, but at the end of the article, I really wanted to die with the author. . It's obviously like that in the early stage. . . . . . . Looking back, I wonder how the setting of attack could be a sweet story. I was too naive.
I read this article a long time ago, and I read it again today. I didn't think of this article at first, but then I wanted to cry when I saw the author's name_(:з∠)_
Quite suddenly, the next chapter was locked. I'm very curious about what was written.
After reading and checking in, the characters are quite interesting, and the plot direction is somewhat stream-of-consciousness. However, it only lasted for one year, and it was still the same environment (senior year of high school). It is good that the author was able to complete the story he wanted to write. If you have the time and energy, would you consider revising the article later? There are many details that could use some polishing. After all, this was a work made 6 years ago. The author is right. It is best not to recommend this article casually, but to let others read it, just by chance.
Madam, I want to be tortured to death by you. I thought it was an ordinary love story, but it turned out to be a profound sadomasochism story. The writing style of the prelude is normal and clear, but the following text made me have a myocardial infarction. So sad, please compensate me for a sweet fairy tale love storyヾ(
There is no torture orz as imagined, and the show is finished! So pretty!