What's the mess? I find that today's authors are really becoming more and more perverted. They always like to write some nondescript things. Isn't it possible that I am also a gay???????? Is it really doubtful?
My only sigh after reading this article is - your writing skills have improved so much more than just shorthand~~ (Stars in my eyes, super admiration~~~~~~~)
It's so terrible, like this...
真是动人的故事,很久没读过这么优秀的软科幻了。很多线索铺陈都很妙,读来有柳暗花明之感(e. g. “漂亮先生”名字的由来)。篇幅也很精炼。
不过个人觉得最妙的地方是这个故事给读者留下了想像空间——情节上的伏笔全都交代干净,人物性格情感让读者自行分析。机器人vs.人类的话题古今中外被写得太多,所以无论作者最后给出的结论是“机器人有情感”还是“机器人无情感”,都难免落进前人的俗套。还不如就这样留着疑点,让大家见仁见智。
此文文学水准绝对高于科幻世界国内版平均水平,无奈它是耽美。
唉,其实我又不知道自己在写什么了,最后两段感觉就像在凑字数一样,晕......
My stomach hurts from laughing so hard, Meng Meng is so strong.
呃...看到【*】然后开始疑惑章节里到底哪里出现过,于是从头看了一遍...悲剧...
I like the kind of people who only like themselves
My favorite is Meng Mengla
He is really strong
Too smart, too opinionated
I admire him so much
Dear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
可惜你也放弃了~四年了咯~我遇见你太晚了
What a shame, Xiao Shou, being betrayed by my lover like that and still being together! !
I still don't like Xiao Gong, I don't know what Ni Da thinks, stepmother? ? Mengmeng should be told not to make small attacks! !
I like Ni Da's articles very much, although this debut novel is not very good (of course, Ni Da's subsequent articles are more beautiful than the last, hehe~~~)
I am also a loyal fan of Zui Hongchen. Please update me.
What a great article! Not bad!
其实我想说前面写的真不错,发现小说还是短篇的好,似乎精华都在前面,下面不看也无遗憾。
Good article~~~
Come on!
Looking forward to new articles~~~
It's a very interesting article, but the mood becomes much heavier. Why can't we love each other well? People who love each other always torture each other?
Although the ending was good, I still felt very bored after watching it.
So strong, this little boy is really the strongest I have ever seen~~~~~~The fujoshi followed him, they were so happy~~~~~~~~~
I have seen all kinds of strong Xiaoshou in the past, but this one is so strong that I have nothing to say~~~~But I really envy Tongtong, and at the same time I sympathize with her very much~
In fact, I think this is the best ending, because no one can match him anymore.
It seems that Jin Wunie will not have an easy life in the future~haha
Come on~
I like Mengmeng the most
super strong
嘻嘻,大要加油……
What a great article!
Great love!
I never get tired of the adult's literary works. I'm here to relive my old dream again.
A bit messy, but very good and touching
Well, it's been 15 years now. Let's recall the article from 11 years ago. How should I put it? According to the current standard, it is really surprisingly bad, but according to the original standard, it is actually not bad. I read this article for the first time in 2006. I read it countless times and then forgot the name. I have been thinking about it for seven or eight years. I was lucky enough to find it and read it again. I scrolled through the screen in my heart and questioned myself. Why did I never forget this article? But then I thought about it, maybe I also liked scumbag attacks back then. As for my writing skills, I can only say that it has improved year by year, and the current authors have also worked hard. Well, I just want to leave a mark~ I will come back to it when I think of it later~ To remember the past, I am twenty this year and have been rotten for eight years, so I will leave this mark~
I also want to leave a message. It seems to be an old article. Baidu couldn't find the complete resource, so I went around and found Jinjiang.
It turns out to be a Virgo about a wife in adversity. I just finished reading it, and I do feel that the writing is a bit unsophisticated, but the writing is accumulated, so I just need to write more.
The good thing is that this article is easy and non-violent. It is abusive at the beginning, but much better at the end. It has a Japanese style feel. For example, everyone's name is a single-character title.
The main CPs are Mengmeng and Jin Wuie, which I think are okay, but Mengmeng also helped Jin Wuie's two twin brothers get married. The two deputy CPs are quite fun.
Jin Wujie is with a beautiful man from abroad, and Jin Wuge is with Kurosawa Tian from Japan. They were originally involved in those two dramas to take revenge on Jin Wunie, but in the end, Jin Wunie's two younger brothers also found partners hahaha
写的不错呦!O(∩_∩)O~~~慊人和绫女是两大男主吧?
What's the mess? I find that today's authors are really becoming more and more perverted. They always like to write some nondescript things. Isn't it possible that I am also a gay???????? Is it really doubtful?
程铮的世界烟花瞬放,华灯璀璨的大街,川流不息的车辆和行人仿佛都成为布景,只为衬映少年男女的淡淡一吻。 美好~
就这样赤裸裸没了啊?
A debut novel about adversity. . . . . . . . .
My only sigh after reading this article is - your writing skills have improved so much more than just shorthand~~ (Stars in my eyes, super admiration~~~~~~~)
It's so terrible, like this...
真是动人的故事,很久没读过这么优秀的软科幻了。很多线索铺陈都很妙,读来有柳暗花明之感(e. g. “漂亮先生”名字的由来)。篇幅也很精炼。 不过个人觉得最妙的地方是这个故事给读者留下了想像空间——情节上的伏笔全都交代干净,人物性格情感让读者自行分析。机器人vs.人类的话题古今中外被写得太多,所以无论作者最后给出的结论是“机器人有情感”还是“机器人无情感”,都难免落进前人的俗套。还不如就这样留着疑点,让大家见仁见智。 此文文学水准绝对高于科幻世界国内版平均水平,无奈它是耽美。
唉,其实我又不知道自己在写什么了,最后两段感觉就像在凑字数一样,晕......
My stomach hurts from laughing so hard, Meng Meng is so strong.
呃...看到【*】然后开始疑惑章节里到底哪里出现过,于是从头看了一遍...悲剧...
I like the kind of people who only like themselves My favorite is Meng Mengla He is really strong Too smart, too opinionated I admire him so much Dear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
可惜你也放弃了~四年了咯~我遇见你太晚了
What a shame, Xiao Shou, being betrayed by my lover like that and still being together! ! I still don't like Xiao Gong, I don't know what Ni Da thinks, stepmother? ? Mengmeng should be told not to make small attacks! ! I like Ni Da's articles very much, although this debut novel is not very good (of course, Ni Da's subsequent articles are more beautiful than the last, hehe~~~)
I am also a loyal fan of Zui Hongchen. Please update me.
What a great article! Not bad!
其实我想说前面写的真不错,发现小说还是短篇的好,似乎精华都在前面,下面不看也无遗憾。
Good article~~~ Come on! Looking forward to new articles~~~
我没有看过波波的睡美人,但从你的评里面我觉得有些意见也是可取的。 童话本来就是简单单纯,说白点就是适合幼稚儿童读的, 我没有批评的意思,这确实是童话带给我们的奖赏,在这疲惫的都市里,认真的“幼稚”一回, 如果连童话都这么复杂,哪里才是块净土? 童话教给人的应该是玫瑰是红色的,带刺的玫瑰是为了保护自己的,玫瑰是小王子的;天空是蓝色的,白云是天空的睡袍。 而不是告诉我们,玫瑰是红色的是因为它吸收了什么成分,白云是水蒸气形成的.....这些让我们索然无味的。 我没有看过她这篇童话,不好妄自评论,但这些的确是肺腑之言,望波波的粉丝不要怪罪
It's a very interesting article, but the mood becomes much heavier. Why can't we love each other well? People who love each other always torture each other?
Although the ending was good, I still felt very bored after watching it.
So strong, this little boy is really the strongest I have ever seen~~~~~~The fujoshi followed him, they were so happy~~~~~~~~~ I have seen all kinds of strong Xiaoshou in the past, but this one is so strong that I have nothing to say~~~~But I really envy Tongtong, and at the same time I sympathize with her very much~ In fact, I think this is the best ending, because no one can match him anymore.
It seems that Jin Wunie will not have an easy life in the future~haha Come on~
I like Mengmeng the most super strong
嘻嘻,大要加油……
What a great article! Great love!
I never get tired of the adult's literary works. I'm here to relive my old dream again.
A bit messy, but very good and touching
Well, it's been 15 years now. Let's recall the article from 11 years ago. How should I put it? According to the current standard, it is really surprisingly bad, but according to the original standard, it is actually not bad. I read this article for the first time in 2006. I read it countless times and then forgot the name. I have been thinking about it for seven or eight years. I was lucky enough to find it and read it again. I scrolled through the screen in my heart and questioned myself. Why did I never forget this article? But then I thought about it, maybe I also liked scumbag attacks back then. As for my writing skills, I can only say that it has improved year by year, and the current authors have also worked hard. Well, I just want to leave a mark~ I will come back to it when I think of it later~ To remember the past, I am twenty this year and have been rotten for eight years, so I will leave this mark~
I also want to leave a message. It seems to be an old article. Baidu couldn't find the complete resource, so I went around and found Jinjiang. It turns out to be a Virgo about a wife in adversity. I just finished reading it, and I do feel that the writing is a bit unsophisticated, but the writing is accumulated, so I just need to write more. The good thing is that this article is easy and non-violent. It is abusive at the beginning, but much better at the end. It has a Japanese style feel. For example, everyone's name is a single-character title. The main CPs are Mengmeng and Jin Wuie, which I think are okay, but Mengmeng also helped Jin Wuie's two twin brothers get married. The two deputy CPs are quite fun. Jin Wujie is with a beautiful man from abroad, and Jin Wuge is with Kurosawa Tian from Japan. They were originally involved in those two dramas to take revenge on Jin Wunie, but in the end, Jin Wunie's two younger brothers also found partners hahaha