An unrecognizable woman, two handsome men, and a ghost everywhere behind them.
The fire a year ago destroyed all his hopes
How much I thought, it just made me forget, and made me always think that I was a person, a person who could loudly say I love her.
Everything I do runs according to the program, including hugging you, kissing you, comforting you, caring for you... No matter what I do, it is designed by your lover, and it is what your lover will do! Not me! I'm just a tool!
I just feel the roar in my head, and the feeling of powerlessness surges up like a tide and overwhelms me. I close my eyes, I know that I am finished, my words will completely wake up Xizhao, it has always been her self-deception, now, it is time to wake up from the dream, she will drive me out of the car, go back to find her lover, and then the two will live happily ever after. I suddenly think of the words that Cheng Qian always said at the end of those fairy tales stored in my memory.
At that moment, she seemed to have forgotten that I was a computer, a pile of scrap metal that looked like a human, a toy given to her by her lover to relieve her boredom...
I don't know how to put it, but everyone will know after reading it that he is a fan of Chobits.
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Reader comments
Come on newcomers! Progress slowly!
Nightless Hug, the Wine Fairy Stepmother
Happy New Year~~~~I didn't see this update yesterday -x-
Maybe the time is off >_<
This mother is cheating on her son. It's terrible.
The kaleidoscope............ Opened as soon as it was said to open......................
Hahaha, crazy manzi
The young master finally realized that he was going to get married╮(╯▽╰)╭
Is Anna the legendary cuteness...?
Write well~~Come on
Come on, more and more~
Oh leak! What a shameful show of affection! ! !
Why not update? But then again, isn't this anime too cold now? How many years is it?
This pair is so cute! The large articles are always sweet and mixed with a little philosophy and insights. It is super smooth to read! Like it very much!
I decided first whether to read this long review or not, but I think it's better not to read it.
I'm a rather venomous person, so don't blame me if your words don't sound nice.
To be honest, this kind of pure ancient Chinese writing is not very popular nowadays. Next time you write an article, do more research on the gold list and write a more popular topic. The more you read, the more comments and shortcomings others will give you.
When writing an article, you need to have a general idea. It doesn't just mean that the title of the article is good-looking and the cover is good-looking. Of course, this is also one of them. The most important thing is how to enrich your content so that it can attract readers' attention and capture what articles readers like now.
Let's talk about the first point first. The first point is that if the author wants to write a full-length novel, then Yao suggests that it is better to have more words in one chapter. After all, unless an ancient novel is a small novel with 60,000 or 70,000 words, the rest is hundreds of thousands of words. The number of words is too few. Not only is it not enough to read ten lines in one glance, but there is nothing left at the end. Dear, you can definitely turn two into one. The more words there are, the better it will look. But don't write a bunch of nonsense just to make up the word count, otherwise the author will easily lose readers.
The second point is that pure ancient words are not as time-travelling as women, so some words are carefully considered when writing. Sometimes the tone still has a modern flavor. If you know that pure ancients would not be able to travel back to our modern era and then go back to their time and then speak.
Also, since I am writing about a palace battle, I need to carefully consider some plot points before writing.
For example, there is a paragraph in Qin that reads: The heroine rescued a man and returned to the palace to treat him.
You must know that there are spies in the palace, and the kind of time-traveling heroine who can have good luck again and again. Except for appearing in novels, I think it is impossible to really time-travel. What's more, your heroine is a noble concubine, and her words and deeds can all be seen by the eyes. If you really want to save her, then how to save her must be carefully considered. After all, the kind of heroine who hides and is safe after saving her does not exist in a real palace.
When writing a novel, you must not only write it well, but also write the story in a way that makes people feel that the story really happened, so that the story can be a complete and living story.
The connection between the authors is quite good, but if there is a foreshadowing in the middle, don't delay it until the reader can explain it, and then explain it clearly to the reader after more than a dozen pictures. The reader will forget all about it.
Foreshadowing is okay, but don't foreshadow too deeply, because the author's novel is a classical Chinese novel, not a suspense novel, and the reader does not need to rack his or her brains to think about the plot or why he is doing this.
The appropriate tightness must be grasped. If it is too tight, the readers will be irritated. But if it is too dull, it will be a farming novel and not a palace novel. If all kinds of flowers and plants in palace literature can win the emperor's favor, then there is nothing interesting about it.
Finally, I want to say... The cover is beautiful, really beautiful~! !
Okay, this long review is dedicated to you, the author. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes, and can complete what he wants as soon as possible. I wish the author a happy new year and all the best. Please hurry up and don't cheat. This is not only responsible for the readers but also for yourself! !
Mo Meiren belongs to Chicken Brother (づ●─●)づ
Could it be that Yun is the purest and most flawless feather in the world? I forgot whether it was Brother Ji or Leng Yu who said the original words.
Come on newcomers! Progress slowly!
Nightless Hug, the Wine Fairy Stepmother
Happy New Year~~~~I didn't see this update yesterday -x- Maybe the time is off >_<
This mother is cheating on her son. It's terrible.
The kaleidoscope............ Opened as soon as it was said to open......................
Hahaha, crazy manzi
The young master finally realized that he was going to get married╮(╯▽╰)╭
Is Anna the legendary cuteness...?
Write well~~Come on
Come on, more and more~
Oh leak! What a shameful show of affection! ! !
Why not update? But then again, isn't this anime too cold now? How many years is it?
This pair is so cute! The large articles are always sweet and mixed with a little philosophy and insights. It is super smooth to read! Like it very much!
I decided first whether to read this long review or not, but I think it's better not to read it. I'm a rather venomous person, so don't blame me if your words don't sound nice. To be honest, this kind of pure ancient Chinese writing is not very popular nowadays. Next time you write an article, do more research on the gold list and write a more popular topic. The more you read, the more comments and shortcomings others will give you. When writing an article, you need to have a general idea. It doesn't just mean that the title of the article is good-looking and the cover is good-looking. Of course, this is also one of them. The most important thing is how to enrich your content so that it can attract readers' attention and capture what articles readers like now. Let's talk about the first point first. The first point is that if the author wants to write a full-length novel, then Yao suggests that it is better to have more words in one chapter. After all, unless an ancient novel is a small novel with 60,000 or 70,000 words, the rest is hundreds of thousands of words. The number of words is too few. Not only is it not enough to read ten lines in one glance, but there is nothing left at the end. Dear, you can definitely turn two into one. The more words there are, the better it will look. But don't write a bunch of nonsense just to make up the word count, otherwise the author will easily lose readers. The second point is that pure ancient words are not as time-travelling as women, so some words are carefully considered when writing. Sometimes the tone still has a modern flavor. If you know that pure ancients would not be able to travel back to our modern era and then go back to their time and then speak. Also, since I am writing about a palace battle, I need to carefully consider some plot points before writing. For example, there is a paragraph in Qin that reads: The heroine rescued a man and returned to the palace to treat him. You must know that there are spies in the palace, and the kind of time-traveling heroine who can have good luck again and again. Except for appearing in novels, I think it is impossible to really time-travel. What's more, your heroine is a noble concubine, and her words and deeds can all be seen by the eyes. If you really want to save her, then how to save her must be carefully considered. After all, the kind of heroine who hides and is safe after saving her does not exist in a real palace. When writing a novel, you must not only write it well, but also write the story in a way that makes people feel that the story really happened, so that the story can be a complete and living story. The connection between the authors is quite good, but if there is a foreshadowing in the middle, don't delay it until the reader can explain it, and then explain it clearly to the reader after more than a dozen pictures. The reader will forget all about it. Foreshadowing is okay, but don't foreshadow too deeply, because the author's novel is a classical Chinese novel, not a suspense novel, and the reader does not need to rack his or her brains to think about the plot or why he is doing this. The appropriate tightness must be grasped. If it is too tight, the readers will be irritated. But if it is too dull, it will be a farming novel and not a palace novel. If all kinds of flowers and plants in palace literature can win the emperor's favor, then there is nothing interesting about it. Finally, I want to say... The cover is beautiful, really beautiful~! ! Okay, this long review is dedicated to you, the author. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes, and can complete what he wants as soon as possible. I wish the author a happy new year and all the best. Please hurry up and don't cheat. This is not only responsible for the readers but also for yourself! !
Mo Meiren belongs to Chicken Brother (づ●─●)づ Could it be that Yun is the purest and most flawless feather in the world? I forgot whether it was Brother Ji or Leng Yu who said the original words.
Brother Su is indeed very sinister~~~·
The heroine is totally my goddess