The story of Heluo and Tianyu Clan, my first official Kyushu work.
Published in "Kyushu Fantasy" in March 2007.
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(When I first read the title, I thought it was very interesting, and then I thought of writing a sequel called "But For Your Majesty". I wonder what Mr. Fox will think when he finds out. Ahem, cough, now back to the topic.)
Qinglan, a gentle woman like water, she is ordinary and simple, but has a unique lonely soul. Her loneliness is so obvious that people can't help but feel pity when they see her. And is there a person named Xuanyuan Qi among these people?
What is the cruelest thing in love? Tagore said: I stand in front of you, but you don't know that I love you. So when she fell in love with that superior man, she hesitated - in fact, there was already a childish and awkward Yin Yun beside her when she was loneliest, but why did she still fall in love with him? Maybe this is love... It's a pity that love is very close, but the distance between two people is very far, because they are people in two worlds.
"Do you think I am poor, humble, not beautiful, and short, so I have no soul and no heart? My soul is the same as yours, and my heart is the same as yours!" This sentence was said by Jane Eyre, but I want to give it to Qinglan. No matter how disparate the status is, everyone is equal in the face of love. When Xuanyuan Qi's kiss fell, she finally faced herself honestly My heart: "Xuanyuan Qi, I, I am happy for you." Seeing this, my hanging heart finally fell. This sentence was just eight words, but it embodies so much courage on her part. If I had always despised her cowardice before (Fox, forgive me), then from this moment on, I began to admire her. Speaking it out bravely should be the attitude towards love. Even though she still ran away in the end, in good conscience, her escape this time was quite cute.
Compared to this little girl, Xuanyuan Qi was obviously much inferior. Even if she fell in love, she was unwilling to admit it. She gave people hope but immediately made them despair. What did that kiss mean? Is it love? Or just pity? If you don't want to stop your romantic steps for one person, why do you still have any ties with her? Wouldn't it be free and easy to let go? He always feels that he is not qualified. What is this so-called qualification? Are you talking about the qualifications of a lover? Or is he not qualified to love only one person? Maybe even he himself didn't know the true bottom line of that qualification. He just vaguely felt that he wanted to defend something. So if that's the case, why did you still kiss her in the first place? How could this make her feel embarrassed after she had already given her sincere efforts? "Because you seem to be in need of a kiss." He said. In fact, he must have noticed her loneliness a long time ago, but the condescending aura in his tone still couldn't be overcome, as if the kiss was a favor bestowed by him, alas. Of course, you can say that he doesn't know how to love, or even... Is evil. However, even though we, the readers, know his thoughts better than he does, he is the person in the story, so why not? The story is still developing, our hearts are still entangled, and we finally understand what it means that the emperor should not be in a hurry to kill the eunuch...
Love is beautiful but also dangerous. If you don't know how to love or make a commitment easily, please don't easily provoke someone who knows how to love and can give true love. Therefore: if you love, please love deeply; if you don't love, please leave.
PS: Today, Kavin came to Fox You for a visit. When I first read it, I always felt that the heroine was a little woman with no opinion. But when I saw it later, I was shocked by her open-mindedness and persistence. If you don't care, I will stop. The heroine in my novel will not have such a noble spirit... So I have learned a lot. But I still want to say one thing, we don't like that awkward Xuanyuan Qi, please torture him to death~~ Don't give us face. Also, please give me more praise for my handsome man Yin Yun~
Once again, I would like to thank Fox for his hard work in creating such a story. Who said we don't have rising stars in modern literature~ Come on! ! ! (Maybe the writing style is a bit clumsy, I hope Mr. Fox can forgive me = ==+)
——BY A certain feather from Kavin in the middle of the night
Author's reply:
This is my first long review in my life. Thank you very much, classmate Jiayu, hehe.
I found that I didn't understand what you wrote from the text, and I probably didn't feel as much as you did.
Very touched, really, thank you!
Well, Mr. Huo shows up, but do you want him to be a male pig? ! Really………………
(When I first read the title, I thought it was very interesting, and then I thought of writing a sequel called "But For Your Majesty". I wonder what Mr. Fox will think when he finds out. Ahem, cough, now back to the topic.) Qinglan, a gentle woman like water, she is ordinary and simple, but has a unique lonely soul. Her loneliness is so obvious that people can't help but feel pity when they see her. And is there a person named Xuanyuan Qi among these people? What is the cruelest thing in love? Tagore said: I stand in front of you, but you don't know that I love you. So when she fell in love with that superior man, she hesitated - in fact, there was already a childish and awkward Yin Yun beside her when she was loneliest, but why did she still fall in love with him? Maybe this is love... It's a pity that love is very close, but the distance between two people is very far, because they are people in two worlds. "Do you think I am poor, humble, not beautiful, and short, so I have no soul and no heart? My soul is the same as yours, and my heart is the same as yours!" This sentence was said by Jane Eyre, but I want to give it to Qinglan. No matter how disparate the status is, everyone is equal in the face of love. When Xuanyuan Qi's kiss fell, she finally faced herself honestly My heart: "Xuanyuan Qi, I, I am happy for you." Seeing this, my hanging heart finally fell. This sentence was just eight words, but it embodies so much courage on her part. If I had always despised her cowardice before (Fox, forgive me), then from this moment on, I began to admire her. Speaking it out bravely should be the attitude towards love. Even though she still ran away in the end, in good conscience, her escape this time was quite cute. Compared to this little girl, Xuanyuan Qi was obviously much inferior. Even if she fell in love, she was unwilling to admit it. She gave people hope but immediately made them despair. What did that kiss mean? Is it love? Or just pity? If you don't want to stop your romantic steps for one person, why do you still have any ties with her? Wouldn't it be free and easy to let go? He always feels that he is not qualified. What is this so-called qualification? Are you talking about the qualifications of a lover? Or is he not qualified to love only one person? Maybe even he himself didn't know the true bottom line of that qualification. He just vaguely felt that he wanted to defend something. So if that's the case, why did you still kiss her in the first place? How could this make her feel embarrassed after she had already given her sincere efforts? "Because you seem to be in need of a kiss." He said. In fact, he must have noticed her loneliness a long time ago, but the condescending aura in his tone still couldn't be overcome, as if the kiss was a favor bestowed by him, alas. Of course, you can say that he doesn't know how to love, or even... Is evil. However, even though we, the readers, know his thoughts better than he does, he is the person in the story, so why not? The story is still developing, our hearts are still entangled, and we finally understand what it means that the emperor should not be in a hurry to kill the eunuch... Love is beautiful but also dangerous. If you don't know how to love or make a commitment easily, please don't easily provoke someone who knows how to love and can give true love. Therefore: if you love, please love deeply; if you don't love, please leave. PS: Today, Kavin came to Fox You for a visit. When I first read it, I always felt that the heroine was a little woman with no opinion. But when I saw it later, I was shocked by her open-mindedness and persistence. If you don't care, I will stop. The heroine in my novel will not have such a noble spirit... So I have learned a lot. But I still want to say one thing, we don't like that awkward Xuanyuan Qi, please torture him to death~~ Don't give us face. Also, please give me more praise for my handsome man Yin Yun~ Once again, I would like to thank Fox for his hard work in creating such a story. Who said we don't have rising stars in modern literature~ Come on! ! ! (Maybe the writing style is a bit clumsy, I hope Mr. Fox can forgive me = ==+) ——BY A certain feather from Kavin in the middle of the night Author's reply: This is my first long review in my life. Thank you very much, classmate Jiayu, hehe. I found that I didn't understand what you wrote from the text, and I probably didn't feel as much as you did. Very touched, really, thank you!
Well, Mr. Huo shows up, but do you want him to be a male pig? ! Really………………
看到四个小正太,顿时感觉自己也棒棒哒~