It's easy to fall in love but hard to get along. Why is this happening? I keep thinking: Maybe I don't love deeply enough or not enough!
Reader comments
Nai's writing is all very good.
Ah ah ah, dear, it broke at the most critical place and collapsed.
I saw it was updated in March last year. Have you fallen into the trap again? Dear, have you given up?
Wenwen is very good, but it's a pity that it hasn't been updated for too long, so it's abandoned? Collect it first
Author, please keep updating, wait and see!
It's so early to update. I'm going to attend an English summer camp recently. My girl doesn't have a computer and is going camping.
I always thought it was a survival drill. In addition to bringing English books,
But the stage is so cute~~
It probably won't appear in the near future, so please keep updating~waiting for fattening up
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
In fact, it is quite normal for gods to pair up siblings! The most famous are the brother and sister couple Fuxi and Nuwa!
Isn't Yang Jian's father named Yang Tianyou? It was mentioned in the prequel of the TV series Lotus Lantern! Is this still original?
Waiting for the candidate... But I don't quite understand the last paragraph. Who is this person? By the way, I think it could be divided into more paragraphs, it's a bit crowded... Have you ever seen that the text master is sleeping with me, the punctuation master is so hard, and the paragraph master can't sleep alone... ╭(╯ε╰)╮
The author will update soon^ω^ (^３^)
This chapter has been changed quite a lot. Xiaoda, I hope there won't be too many changes in the future.
I have to say some things that may make you very unhappy. If you can't bear it, just scold me if you can't.
From the beginning, I felt that the subject matter was a bit old, but I was still looking forward to distinctive characters. But when I saw this, I had to sigh again.
Completely "danmei protagonist character"!
Even if you hesitate, even if you give up, no matter what, there will be a sudden turning point in the end.
To be honest, you are writing a Danmei article, and I don't think you should write about a man's character and psychology from what you know well or from your own starting point. Personally, I really hate some of the protagonists in danmei novels like this. They are obviously men, but they can be cowardly, cowardly, and have the same hesitations as women.
In your setting, the two of them should be deeply in love, even as a partner, but before that, he was more of a man. The person he loves can't remember him, or even hates himself, but he has given up on running away or even daring to go. As a man, a man who has been in love with his lover for a long time, his first reaction is not to save his love but to give up.
To be honest, this is really unacceptable to me.
Of course, you can also explain it as this is the character of the protagonist, etc., Then I have nothing to say.
Last but not least, you clearly promised to have an update in the afternoon but broke your promise, which also caused "me" to be unhappy. As an author, when you wrote this question, you shouldered the expectations of all readers of this book for this book, as well as their expectations for you. This is a kind of responsibility. If you are not ready to take on this responsibility, I will not be able to do anything to you, but I will only be disappointed - another author who may give up.
Of course, if you give us a reason or plan to take responsibility for what you said, I will only appreciate you. After all, there is only so much I can do across this screen between us.
Above
Kiss, it's finally updated. I suddenly feel like I'm about to cry. Update once a month. I can't afford to be hurt~ Kiss, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Nai's writing is all very good.
Ah ah ah, dear, it broke at the most critical place and collapsed. I saw it was updated in March last year. Have you fallen into the trap again? Dear, have you given up?
Wenwen is very good, but it's a pity that it hasn't been updated for too long, so it's abandoned? Collect it first
Author, please keep updating, wait and see!
It's so early to update. I'm going to attend an English summer camp recently. My girl doesn't have a computer and is going camping. I always thought it was a survival drill. In addition to bringing English books, But the stage is so cute~~ It probably won't appear in the near future, so please keep updating~waiting for fattening up
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
In fact, it is quite normal for gods to pair up siblings! The most famous are the brother and sister couple Fuxi and Nuwa!
Isn't Yang Jian's father named Yang Tianyou? It was mentioned in the prequel of the TV series Lotus Lantern! Is this still original?
Waiting for the candidate... But I don't quite understand the last paragraph. Who is this person? By the way, I think it could be divided into more paragraphs, it's a bit crowded... Have you ever seen that the text master is sleeping with me, the punctuation master is so hard, and the paragraph master can't sleep alone... ╭(╯ε╰)╮
The author will update soon^ω^ (^３^)
This chapter has been changed quite a lot. Xiaoda, I hope there won't be too many changes in the future.
I have to say some things that may make you very unhappy. If you can't bear it, just scold me if you can't. From the beginning, I felt that the subject matter was a bit old, but I was still looking forward to distinctive characters. But when I saw this, I had to sigh again. Completely "danmei protagonist character"! Even if you hesitate, even if you give up, no matter what, there will be a sudden turning point in the end. To be honest, you are writing a Danmei article, and I don't think you should write about a man's character and psychology from what you know well or from your own starting point. Personally, I really hate some of the protagonists in danmei novels like this. They are obviously men, but they can be cowardly, cowardly, and have the same hesitations as women. In your setting, the two of them should be deeply in love, even as a partner, but before that, he was more of a man. The person he loves can't remember him, or even hates himself, but he has given up on running away or even daring to go. As a man, a man who has been in love with his lover for a long time, his first reaction is not to save his love but to give up. To be honest, this is really unacceptable to me. Of course, you can also explain it as this is the character of the protagonist, etc., Then I have nothing to say. Last but not least, you clearly promised to have an update in the afternoon but broke your promise, which also caused "me" to be unhappy. As an author, when you wrote this question, you shouldered the expectations of all readers of this book for this book, as well as their expectations for you. This is a kind of responsibility. If you are not ready to take on this responsibility, I will not be able to do anything to you, but I will only be disappointed - another author who may give up. Of course, if you give us a reason or plan to take responsibility for what you said, I will only appreciate you. After all, there is only so much I can do across this screen between us. Above
Kiss, it's finally updated. I suddenly feel like I'm about to cry. Update once a month. I can't afford to be hurt~ Kiss, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah