I am nothing, I am just a beautiful doll.
I don't know anything, I'm just a killing machine.
I don't know anything, I only know that I must obey my master absolutely.
Yes, Master...
Lianji
Reader comments
I feel like that woman is unpopular and wants to be disgraced...
After reading three chapters in a row, I can only say that I saw a novel, but not the soul of the novel.
It is recommended that the author think carefully about what he wants to express in each chapter or even each event.
I can only tell you honestly that I can't stand your writing. I don't even know what plot you are writing.
It feels like the author has been describing her beauty and power from the heroine to other characters, but that is just an empty narrative, just a group of glittering people in the author's imagination. I can't see the souls of those people, they are just characters with attributes imposed by the author.
As for the plot, it is also fragmented and unfocused, with plots going on one after another without distinction of importance. In these three chapters, we continue to see Yanan's admiration for Ke Meng, Ke Meng's successful life as a director, and Ke Meng's sadness for her ex-boyfriend. If these three points are what you want to express, then focus on them and find ways to strengthen these key points. Rather than piecemeal here and there, piecemeal, like a puzzle rather than an article.
I feel like that woman is unpopular and wants to be disgraced...
After reading three chapters in a row, I can only say that I saw a novel, but not the soul of the novel. It is recommended that the author think carefully about what he wants to express in each chapter or even each event. I can only tell you honestly that I can't stand your writing. I don't even know what plot you are writing. It feels like the author has been describing her beauty and power from the heroine to other characters, but that is just an empty narrative, just a group of glittering people in the author's imagination. I can't see the souls of those people, they are just characters with attributes imposed by the author. As for the plot, it is also fragmented and unfocused, with plots going on one after another without distinction of importance. In these three chapters, we continue to see Yanan's admiration for Ke Meng, Ke Meng's successful life as a director, and Ke Meng's sadness for her ex-boyfriend. If these three points are what you want to express, then focus on them and find ways to strengthen these key points. Rather than piecemeal here and there, piecemeal, like a puzzle rather than an article.
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