Zhuang Sheng was obsessed with butterflies in his dream, and lost his way with his lonely bald pen.
Let's speak plainly after feeling numb, dear brothers and sisters,
We are writing this for fun, but 80% of the time we won't be able to finish it.
Warning in advance: This is a typical piece of writing that tries to trick someone into selling someone else. Except for the first chapter, there is no sense of time travel at all from now on.
In addition, according to feedback from readers, this article has several major characteristics: it is slightly unique, but wordy, clumsy, cruel, and makes me depressed after reading it...
So, please choose carefully.
Please also note that all the historical information, humanistic appellation, customs, place names, etc. Are all made up and are caused by the author's lack of historical knowledge. Therefore, please do not take it seriously. Thank you. And don't say you are depressed, because I am more depressed than you.
And everyone, please don't ask any more questions about what you mean by writing this article, what your intentions are, and what you want to say. The reasons are as follows: 1. I am not Confucius; ? I am not Christ Jesus. Therefore, I have neither the responsibility to educate talents nor the obligation to promote morality. I just write it casually. This is a nonsense story. Please don't look for serious topics in it, such as the good and evil of human nature, the principles of life, life, or the purpose of writing. Please just treat it as a story. Take a look and figure it out when you have time.
After reading this article, I took out my resume and looked at it, and I can confidently change my name to ----- Expert of Hitting Bricks. Therefore, I will add a tail after the article to summarize the academic report, briefly talk about classic bricks, and reactions and experiences of hitting bricks. Of course, I must not forget the support of many classmates, the comfort of tofu bricks, etc. The comfort encouraged me to persevere to the end, and I did not fall down and die before becoming an expert in hitting bricks, or abandon the formation and abscond. Then, You should have noticed that both this article and the author are famous for being wordy and procrastinating.
PS: This is the end of the first part, and all the locked chapters have been moved to the second part. In fact, just read this as a finished article. You must read it together, it will make you exhausted. You must know that the plan is to barely finish the four parts. But now I am really not in the mood to write, and I have lost a lot of stored articles, so, it's a trap, a trap, a trap~~~~~
Intention:
Reader comments
Please update it soon. As a supermarket colleague, I strongly support you for truly writing the voices of people in our supermarket industry. There is always a feeling that you are writing about our supermarket. You must have done it at LH Supermarket in NB City.
Black Friday here in Canada is obviously not as popular as the discounts on Boxing Day (the day after Christmas), and the queues are so long.
Pfft~ Wen Renting has been so happy ever since I heard about it~ This long appearance is so brilliant~ Hahaha
As expected, the brain is very cruel! Haha~~~
What should I do? Little Ye Zi is so pitiful... Mumu, aren't you ready to end it? Is the ending good? It doesn't matter how cruel you are in the happy reunion!
Why do you want to block me? Even if you comment, you have to block me. . .
People who have been diving for a long time come out to take a shower. . . As a pseudo-mystery fan, I really like this kind of female detective novels. Although they often focus more on romance, it doesn't matter if they don't. By the way, the author's reasoning is very good~~~
Haha, first of all, I want to thank you for your concern, and secondly, I am looking forward to your updates. Maybe it is because of insufficient publicity. Uncle Cat's articles are very good but there are not many comments ^_^
Woo, Dada is finally back! ! ! Welcome back! !
Well, Mr. Qing's image as a male god is nothing in front of Mrs. Qing, haha? Haha
First person? ? ?
What a surprise! Poke your little anus. By the way, is this Feiyun an acquaintance of Ye Xue? Do you know Si Chen too?
Such a sharp Hua Ge is so amazing, but the brother is Da Lei, so after reading this chapter, Hiyori yelled in her heart [... Demacia!
It is obviously Bu Tian who has learned such cruel methods. This is unscientific! Enough
Although temperament is Hua Ge's signature, he is always so indifferent in the face of a twin brother who is looking for him. Is he really a real man? It's even worse to compromise like this in the end! Use your brother's majesty and upright views to severely correct your brother's personality! !
Actually, I feel that the reason why Butian is not good at learning is a bit unexpected. I thought he would be a more mature person.
Did it turn out that only the female characters liked it? The military girl's secret love is very touching. Although I thought she and Du Jing would be a couple
The girl from the Ba Dao family is good at chasing and killing Butian. He is indeed a dangerous person.
If you are well, it will be sunny
I feel a little angry for the heroine's willfulness and ignorance of blessings in the midst of blessings; I feel angry for her too arrogant self-esteem. She accepted other people's kindness to her so naturally that it finally became a matter of course; and she rejected everything on the grounds that she could not bear the sadness of youth.
So willful, but it still makes people feel distressed.
She is just a girl in her senior year of high school. She has the ignorance of a girl, the sadness of unnamed youth, and the stubbornness and principles of youth. Looking at the years we have gone through, she is as ordinary as a girl we just met yesterday, but people can't help but take a second look.
This was Murong Lianyin, which made people angry, but they couldn't help but hold her in their arms.
In reality, who is a confidant, who is Lan Yan, and who is a lover; the answer is not chosen by ourselves, and we have no control over how our hearts want to go. At the beginning, the freedom and leisure of the young girls in the article suddenly made me feel a little sad; I thought back then, we were like birds that wanted to fly high, and our dreams and future were extremely bright in our eyes. Then, next, there will always be a "But, later..."
Di Bu Jiang was like a certain young man we met on the trip who suddenly jumped into her sight. She didn't know where he came from, let alone where he would go. I just wonder in my heart, why does this person keep appearing in front of me? He took her to experience all the novelties, and the girl felt anxious but also inexplicably excited.
However, I stubbornly believe that he is a passer-by after all. A handsome man is destined not to stop in just one place; what's more, the woman he is looking at is no longer in his heart?
I like Ah Jin. If I had an Ah Jin in reality, I would never leave him. He is not a perfect lover, but as long as he is good to her, that's all. Understanding a person's habits cannot be learned by getting along with them for a long time. A Jin has a heart, and A Jin puts Lian Yu in the softest place in his heart, so he knows where Lian Yu's weakness lies, what Lian Yu's preferences are, and what Lian Yu's heart is wandering about...
However, the girl named Murong Lianyin finally escaped from his protection timidly.
Ah Jin must be sad and disappointed.
As for Xu Dakai, just like his name, he answered the doubts that Lian Yu didn't want to touch.
Lian Yu ran away. Escaped from everyone's sight.
I think everyone she comes into contact with in the article will hope that this girl can come back safely and accept the pain that life has given her calmly. I think those who care about her will think this way about her: It is raining in your life, but for me, if you are well, it will be sunny!
When I started reading, I was impressed by Chia's powerful and rich vocabulary. Not everyone can write clean words, let alone show a pure feeling in the soft writing style.
The above is a compliment, sincerely; the following is a slightly venomous comment.
Chia! Pay attention to the description of the environment! The story cannot develop in a suspended manner, and it is not a movie in a studio. Don't let readers make up the environment! Is there any!
The novel is not prose, and the characters cannot be spoken into poetry. Chia, who is used to writing prose, may not have noticed that when we talk, we don't use gorgeous sentences to describe it. How can it be so difficult to understand? The novel is close to life, not only in terms of emotions, but also in terms of scenery and language.
However, after reading twenty chapters, I gradually found that Chia had made great progress. Your writing style has given you a very good foundation. Now you only lack training and life experience. Honey, I'm here to support you, come on! !
Although it is slow to warm up, you will be attracted after seeing it. I'm looking forward to the story behind it.
It seems that the Demon Prince has been stewed haha
Yinjia is waiting for you to finish the first eleven chapters before starting to read, otherwise I will be completely confused when reading on my mobile phone, so come on, wait for you
Dear, the currency used in Germany is the euro.
I bit my tongue while eating chestnuts. Orange, you have to be responsible for me!
Zheng Zha's bitter smile, helplessness, wiping sweat, squinting, smoking in the car after meeting the family of the deceased, walking a shoulder behind Chu Xuan... Chu Xuan's sneer, raising his eyebrows, picking up Zheng Zha's book with his fingertips, patting Zheng Zha's shoulder, pinching his own palm... The look in the eyes of the two people, the casual psychological description, the calm rendering in these details is really great, oh oh oh~~
The two of them seem to be a little attracted to each other... Tsk tsk, Captain Zheng, don't look at Dr. X's elegant appearance now, and the corner of his mouth will twitch later. I really look forward to the scene where these two get to know each other and cause the whole team to get up and down (what kind of bad taste is this)
Ahem, next is catching insects...
What's the matter? I have a bad appetite——>Change 'yao' to 'mo', the pronunciation of 'yao' is yao.
Why can't I eat it——>Same as above
We can't compare him with his previous life——>Does 'him' here refer to this thing in this life or to the people in this life? Maybe it could be changed to 'replace it'?
However, Zhengha did not start the car——> However, Zheng Zha did not start the car
Passing by each other or catching a glimpse of Du is just a matter of a moment——>Change 'dou' to 'du'
Haven't I checked it many times already——>Similarly, change 'yao' to 'mo'
In the end Gao still took out the evidence bag -> Is 'Gao' redundant?
Zhang Lingmei used to buy magazines here -> The magazines she bought in the past are missing a ""
I haven't found anything that could be attractive at all——>Change 'again' to 'yes', or simply remove it
Chu Xuan was reading the two magazines with relish——>'''change''''
This person's pupils are unexpectedly dark——>Change '' to ''
Also, all 'Zheng Zha' should be 'Zheng Zha'. Does it mean that the girl is not from mainland China? There are some characters in the article that are not unified between traditional and simplified Chinese. Lazy Mao is more stupid... I hope the author doesn't mind = = Well, the basic situation is like this (being beaten).
When I saw the title, I thought of my cute sleeveless big~~~~(>_<)~~~~, I haven't seen her for several years!
Fake brother and sister, well written~ Come on~
Really happy. Maybe only in dreams, good people will be rewarded.
In fact, in the last sentence, the focus is on the failure!
If there is no motivation to pursue the article, should I say it is well written or not well written? I guess it's my own problem, I don't like this kind of writing... I can't force it.
I feel so cute, come on on a moonlit night~~
It ended so quickly, but it's a bit unfinished, but I like it~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Please update it soon. As a supermarket colleague, I strongly support you for truly writing the voices of people in our supermarket industry. There is always a feeling that you are writing about our supermarket. You must have done it at LH Supermarket in NB City.
Black Friday here in Canada is obviously not as popular as the discounts on Boxing Day (the day after Christmas), and the queues are so long.
Pfft~ Wen Renting has been so happy ever since I heard about it~ This long appearance is so brilliant~ Hahaha
As expected, the brain is very cruel! Haha~~~
What should I do? Little Ye Zi is so pitiful... Mumu, aren't you ready to end it? Is the ending good? It doesn't matter how cruel you are in the happy reunion!
不希望女主是巽芳啊,巽芳有负于少恭,其实她是最没有资格这么对少恭的了。不过,这是怎么回事,长琴移情于巽芳了?
Sprinkle flowers~~~Come on~~
Another pit == keep your claws
Why do you want to block me? Even if you comment, you have to block me. . .
People who have been diving for a long time come out to take a shower. . . As a pseudo-mystery fan, I really like this kind of female detective novels. Although they often focus more on romance, it doesn't matter if they don't. By the way, the author's reasoning is very good~~~
我期待林峰的原型,最好是漫画版的。话说,跟我有点像~~~- -. 跌宕起伏的中转篇章,很好!我喜欢看混乱的心情的那段描写,很不错。
Sir, please update soon~~
Haha, first of all, I want to thank you for your concern, and secondly, I am looking forward to your updates. Maybe it is because of insufficient publicity. Uncle Cat's articles are very good but there are not many comments ^_^
Woo, Dada is finally back! ! ! Welcome back! !
Well, Mr. Qing's image as a male god is nothing in front of Mrs. Qing, haha? Haha
First person? ? ?
What a surprise! Poke your little anus. By the way, is this Feiyun an acquaintance of Ye Xue? Do you know Si Chen too?
Such a sharp Hua Ge is so amazing, but the brother is Da Lei, so after reading this chapter, Hiyori yelled in her heart [... Demacia! It is obviously Bu Tian who has learned such cruel methods. This is unscientific! Enough Although temperament is Hua Ge's signature, he is always so indifferent in the face of a twin brother who is looking for him. Is he really a real man? It's even worse to compromise like this in the end! Use your brother's majesty and upright views to severely correct your brother's personality! ! Actually, I feel that the reason why Butian is not good at learning is a bit unexpected. I thought he would be a more mature person. Did it turn out that only the female characters liked it? The military girl's secret love is very touching. Although I thought she and Du Jing would be a couple The girl from the Ba Dao family is good at chasing and killing Butian. He is indeed a dangerous person.
If you are well, it will be sunny I feel a little angry for the heroine's willfulness and ignorance of blessings in the midst of blessings; I feel angry for her too arrogant self-esteem. She accepted other people's kindness to her so naturally that it finally became a matter of course; and she rejected everything on the grounds that she could not bear the sadness of youth. So willful, but it still makes people feel distressed. She is just a girl in her senior year of high school. She has the ignorance of a girl, the sadness of unnamed youth, and the stubbornness and principles of youth. Looking at the years we have gone through, she is as ordinary as a girl we just met yesterday, but people can't help but take a second look. This was Murong Lianyin, which made people angry, but they couldn't help but hold her in their arms. In reality, who is a confidant, who is Lan Yan, and who is a lover; the answer is not chosen by ourselves, and we have no control over how our hearts want to go. At the beginning, the freedom and leisure of the young girls in the article suddenly made me feel a little sad; I thought back then, we were like birds that wanted to fly high, and our dreams and future were extremely bright in our eyes. Then, next, there will always be a "But, later..." Di Bu Jiang was like a certain young man we met on the trip who suddenly jumped into her sight. She didn't know where he came from, let alone where he would go. I just wonder in my heart, why does this person keep appearing in front of me? He took her to experience all the novelties, and the girl felt anxious but also inexplicably excited. However, I stubbornly believe that he is a passer-by after all. A handsome man is destined not to stop in just one place; what's more, the woman he is looking at is no longer in his heart? I like Ah Jin. If I had an Ah Jin in reality, I would never leave him. He is not a perfect lover, but as long as he is good to her, that's all. Understanding a person's habits cannot be learned by getting along with them for a long time. A Jin has a heart, and A Jin puts Lian Yu in the softest place in his heart, so he knows where Lian Yu's weakness lies, what Lian Yu's preferences are, and what Lian Yu's heart is wandering about... However, the girl named Murong Lianyin finally escaped from his protection timidly. Ah Jin must be sad and disappointed. As for Xu Dakai, just like his name, he answered the doubts that Lian Yu didn't want to touch. Lian Yu ran away. Escaped from everyone's sight. I think everyone she comes into contact with in the article will hope that this girl can come back safely and accept the pain that life has given her calmly. I think those who care about her will think this way about her: It is raining in your life, but for me, if you are well, it will be sunny! When I started reading, I was impressed by Chia's powerful and rich vocabulary. Not everyone can write clean words, let alone show a pure feeling in the soft writing style. The above is a compliment, sincerely; the following is a slightly venomous comment. Chia! Pay attention to the description of the environment! The story cannot develop in a suspended manner, and it is not a movie in a studio. Don't let readers make up the environment! Is there any! The novel is not prose, and the characters cannot be spoken into poetry. Chia, who is used to writing prose, may not have noticed that when we talk, we don't use gorgeous sentences to describe it. How can it be so difficult to understand? The novel is close to life, not only in terms of emotions, but also in terms of scenery and language. However, after reading twenty chapters, I gradually found that Chia had made great progress. Your writing style has given you a very good foundation. Now you only lack training and life experience. Honey, I'm here to support you, come on! ! Although it is slow to warm up, you will be attracted after seeing it. I'm looking forward to the story behind it.
It seems that the Demon Prince has been stewed haha
Yinjia is waiting for you to finish the first eleven chapters before starting to read, otherwise I will be completely confused when reading on my mobile phone, so come on, wait for you
Dear, the currency used in Germany is the euro.
I bit my tongue while eating chestnuts. Orange, you have to be responsible for me!
Zheng Zha's bitter smile, helplessness, wiping sweat, squinting, smoking in the car after meeting the family of the deceased, walking a shoulder behind Chu Xuan... Chu Xuan's sneer, raising his eyebrows, picking up Zheng Zha's book with his fingertips, patting Zheng Zha's shoulder, pinching his own palm... The look in the eyes of the two people, the casual psychological description, the calm rendering in these details is really great, oh oh oh~~ The two of them seem to be a little attracted to each other... Tsk tsk, Captain Zheng, don't look at Dr. X's elegant appearance now, and the corner of his mouth will twitch later. I really look forward to the scene where these two get to know each other and cause the whole team to get up and down (what kind of bad taste is this) Ahem, next is catching insects... What's the matter? I have a bad appetite——>Change 'yao' to 'mo', the pronunciation of 'yao' is yao. Why can't I eat it——>Same as above We can't compare him with his previous life——>Does 'him' here refer to this thing in this life or to the people in this life? Maybe it could be changed to 'replace it'? However, Zhengha did not start the car——> However, Zheng Zha did not start the car Passing by each other or catching a glimpse of Du is just a matter of a moment——>Change 'dou' to 'du' Haven't I checked it many times already——>Similarly, change 'yao' to 'mo' In the end Gao still took out the evidence bag -> Is 'Gao' redundant? Zhang Lingmei used to buy magazines here -> The magazines she bought in the past are missing a "" I haven't found anything that could be attractive at all——>Change 'again' to 'yes', or simply remove it Chu Xuan was reading the two magazines with relish——>'''change'''' This person's pupils are unexpectedly dark——>Change '' to '' Also, all 'Zheng Zha' should be 'Zheng Zha'. Does it mean that the girl is not from mainland China? There are some characters in the article that are not unified between traditional and simplified Chinese. Lazy Mao is more stupid... I hope the author doesn't mind = = Well, the basic situation is like this (being beaten).
When I saw the title, I thought of my cute sleeveless big~~~~(>_<)~~~~, I haven't seen her for several years! Fake brother and sister, well written~ Come on~
Really happy. Maybe only in dreams, good people will be rewarded.
In fact, in the last sentence, the focus is on the failure!
If there is no motivation to pursue the article, should I say it is well written or not well written? I guess it's my own problem, I don't like this kind of writing... I can't force it.
I feel so cute, come on on a moonlit night~~
It ended so quickly, but it's a bit unfinished, but I like it~~~~~~~~~~~~~