This is my first time writing an article, and my writing style is average. Please give me your criticism and advice.
This article has a slight fantasy aspect, and the writing style is more relaxed. The heroine is not omnipotent, so she should not be suicidal. (Probably... = =)
It mainly tells the story of the master tricking and abducting the heroine and stealing her home.
It seems like that's all I have to say, so I'll start posting below.
Which one would be good to be the heroine? Leave a message
http://pic4. Nipic. Com/20090810/2105517_194414038_2. Jpg This picture is very beautiful.