Actually, it's not as mysterious as the title says, it's just a dream I had at night, and I think it's pretty good. Just...
A girl with a dual personality can be as cute as the bright sunshine, or as cold as the dark moonlight. During a trip, I was
The evil magic split into two, with only the memory of sunshine during the day, and only the painful past at night...
Okay, enough nonsense, let's watch it!
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A pair of people from generation to generation, competing for two places of ecstasy. . . . Chain effort. . .
Update soon! Update soon
"Remember the housekeeper silently" replace "remember" with "memory"! "A turn in the footsteps" is a bit weird... How about a "pause"? "Looking carefully at the room, there is a simple table, a chair, a bed, a cabinet and a window, (but the window seems to have been nailed with wood a long time ago) and nothing else" can be changed to "Looking carefully at the room, except for a simple table, a chair, a bed, a cabinet and a window, there is nothing else, but the window seems to have been nailed down a long time ago. It's already nailed with wood." "Go outside the door and get a broom and a rag hanging on the nail and start cleaning. Because the room is not big, it should be easy to clean, but Yuze has been busy all morning to remove those thick and numerous spider webs." Well, can the broom be hung on the nail? But it could be changed to "Go outside the door and get a rag hanging on a nail and a broom behind the door. Then start cleaning. The room is not big, so it should be easy to clean, but Yuze has been busy all morning removing those thick and numerous spider webs." "But his face is shiny and his body smells like money" can be changed to "But his face is shiny and his body smells like copper". It seems better to change "nostrils to the sky" to "nostrils to the sky" =.= "Very unruly" seems to be "very unruly". . . "See how I will punish you next time" can be changed to "See how I will punish you (or teach you a lesson) next time". Delicate is not used to describe a magical voice. It can be changed to crisp or sweet~ "I have heard it before" can be changed to "I have heard it before". Don't use it indiscriminately if it has different meanings in ancient and modern times~ There is a sentence that directly reminded me of "Don't call me the king, call me the queen~"
. . Not updated yet. . Pit?
A pair of people from generation to generation, competing for two places of ecstasy. . . . Chain effort. . .
Update soon! Update soon
"Remember the housekeeper silently" replace "remember" with "memory"! "A turn in the footsteps" is a bit weird... How about a "pause"? "Looking carefully at the room, there is a simple table, a chair, a bed, a cabinet and a window, (but the window seems to have been nailed with wood a long time ago) and nothing else" can be changed to "Looking carefully at the room, except for a simple table, a chair, a bed, a cabinet and a window, there is nothing else, but the window seems to have been nailed down a long time ago. It's already nailed with wood." "Go outside the door and get a broom and a rag hanging on the nail and start cleaning. Because the room is not big, it should be easy to clean, but Yuze has been busy all morning to remove those thick and numerous spider webs." Well, can the broom be hung on the nail? But it could be changed to "Go outside the door and get a rag hanging on a nail and a broom behind the door. Then start cleaning. The room is not big, so it should be easy to clean, but Yuze has been busy all morning removing those thick and numerous spider webs." "But his face is shiny and his body smells like money" can be changed to "But his face is shiny and his body smells like copper". It seems better to change "nostrils to the sky" to "nostrils to the sky" =.= "Very unruly" seems to be "very unruly". . . "See how I will punish you next time" can be changed to "See how I will punish you (or teach you a lesson) next time". Delicate is not used to describe a magical voice. It can be changed to crisp or sweet~ "I have heard it before" can be changed to "I have heard it before". Don't use it indiscriminately if it has different meanings in ancient and modern times~ There is a sentence that directly reminded me of "Don't call me the king, call me the queen~"