Woo~ Three people obviously fell into this damn ancient time together. Why did they sell the most useless girl to a rich family to be a miserable little girl for the purpose of starting a business fund, and gave him such a good luck to serve the young master who was famous in the whole house? Oh~ I can't even be so lucky. 8 But except for the fact that this legendary young master is a little gloomier, a little more irritable, a little louder, a little vindictive... Well, everything else is within his tolerance. Well, seeing that she could barely achieve her happy wish of eating and waiting to die here, she decided to stay here until she found those two unloyal friends. But when the eldest young master's leg problem suddenly recovered, something seemed to be different...
Reader comments
I can definitely say that I read this article before because it was about Xiao Chu. I'm very happy that someone is finally writing about Xiao Chu. Although there were many articles about Xiao Chu in the past, most of them were very harmful to people. I only remember the article "Observing the Moon" among the long articles that have been completed. The others are either CPs about Fujian Kan or short articles, so I hope you can finish this article and don't give up in the middle. So, here are some personal suggestions. I hope you don't mind if the tone is not good, because my expressive ability is not very good. First: Change the first three chapters from first person to third person as soon as possible, because I am new to writing, and the change from first person to third person is not very successful, which makes people a little unable to change; second, maybe because the first three chapters are in first person, it feels like one chapter is different from the other. The connection between them is a bit awkward (not excluding my personal problem); thirdly, although the interaction between Xiao Chu and Xiao Kelp is very loving, it gives people the feeling that these two people are not like them, and Xiao Chu is proud, a bit narcissistic, elegant, perfect and strong. It's heartbreaking... But Xiaochu is not inconsiderate of others, no matter what aspect, but the Xiaochu in the personal article gives me the feeling that he is easy to ignore others, too narcissistic, a little weak, and can't review current affairs (maybe I used the wrong word)... This can be seen in the chapter when you first arrive at Rikkai University to look for kelp. Fourth, the most important point is that you must not give up. Even if you are stuck, you cannot give up. Even if you have something to do and you cannot go online, you cannot give up. You can ask for leave, but you cannot give up, because if you give up, the readers of the article will be very sad. The above are my personal feelings after reading the eleven chapters so far. Please forgive me if I offend you in any way. I wish my writing will get better and better and my writing will become more and more popular~~
Score... Come on adults, please give me more... It's a good start... Hehe... I also played Emei...
Haha, the professor's mouth is not very poisonous now, he can only be regarded as relatively sharp... Haha...
This book has not been updated for so long.
Update soon
Haha, I'm going to be served from the same pot, rub your hands together ~ Emma, hurry up!
I can definitely say that I read this article before because it was about Xiao Chu. I'm very happy that someone is finally writing about Xiao Chu. Although there were many articles about Xiao Chu in the past, most of them were very harmful to people. I only remember the article "Observing the Moon" among the long articles that have been completed. The others are either CPs about Fujian Kan or short articles, so I hope you can finish this article and don't give up in the middle. So, here are some personal suggestions. I hope you don't mind if the tone is not good, because my expressive ability is not very good. First: Change the first three chapters from first person to third person as soon as possible, because I am new to writing, and the change from first person to third person is not very successful, which makes people a little unable to change; second, maybe because the first three chapters are in first person, it feels like one chapter is different from the other. The connection between them is a bit awkward (not excluding my personal problem); thirdly, although the interaction between Xiao Chu and Xiao Kelp is very loving, it gives people the feeling that these two people are not like them, and Xiao Chu is proud, a bit narcissistic, elegant, perfect and strong. It's heartbreaking... But Xiaochu is not inconsiderate of others, no matter what aspect, but the Xiaochu in the personal article gives me the feeling that he is easy to ignore others, too narcissistic, a little weak, and can't review current affairs (maybe I used the wrong word)... This can be seen in the chapter when you first arrive at Rikkai University to look for kelp. Fourth, the most important point is that you must not give up. Even if you are stuck, you cannot give up. Even if you have something to do and you cannot go online, you cannot give up. You can ask for leave, but you cannot give up, because if you give up, the readers of the article will be very sad. The above are my personal feelings after reading the eleven chapters so far. Please forgive me if I offend you in any way. I wish my writing will get better and better and my writing will become more and more popular~~
Score... Come on adults, please give me more... It's a good start... Hehe... I also played Emei...
Haha, the professor's mouth is not very poisonous now, he can only be regarded as relatively sharp... Haha...
This book has not been updated for so long. Update soon
Haha, I'm going to be served from the same pot, rub your hands together ~ Emma, hurry up!