(The fifth part of the an series)
Bi an is a legendary beast. In ancient times, it was often painted on the door of a prison, and later it was often used as a metaphor for prison...
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The author of "Dream Forever Flying" and the first two books are probably not the same person, Xiaoduo. Why do I feel that the level of these chapters is so different from the previous ones? The writing is messy and incomprehensible, and it doesn't highlight your personality. Is it really not the same person?
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Not only is the ending of the whole article far-fetched, there are many places in it that make people feel very unnecessary, such as the part about buying a murder to kill. Guan Boran and Yin Ze are both business elites, and their brains are not very good. If the method of delaying Lin's equity acquisition continues, it can actually achieve the goal. For elites like them, there are many ways, so why do they have to do something like "killing a thousand enemies and losing eight hundred to themselves" like buying a murder to kill? Moreover, the last part of the deal between Guan Boran and Lin Shu was not very necessary. It was not to the point where there was no choice. Lin Shu was a person with little IQ. Wasn't it easy to get that information? The significance of this information was not explained clearly after I got it. It was just to express the bitterness.
The author probably has little work experience and only scratches the surface of the professional aspects involved in the article, which makes the character seem very thin. In addition, there is no reasonable grasp of the changes in the protagonist's personality. At first, I wanted to portray Qianqian as a calm, rational, and calm character with potential. As a result, the later she went, the more she felt like a little princess who had been well protected since she was a child. She would lose her mind when something happened, and she would often come up with unrealistic ideas or faint.
In a word: The structure is confusing, lacks layers, lacks depth, and has a rushed ending.
The author of "Dream Forever Flying" and the first two books are probably not the same person, Xiaoduo. Why do I feel that the level of these chapters is so different from the previous ones? The writing is messy and incomprehensible, and it doesn't highlight your personality. Is it really not the same person?
It's finally updated again, and I've checked it out many times. Give it 2 points and support it.
Congratulations~~~Sanah~~~Well done~~~~
Not only is the ending of the whole article far-fetched, there are many places in it that make people feel very unnecessary, such as the part about buying a murder to kill. Guan Boran and Yin Ze are both business elites, and their brains are not very good. If the method of delaying Lin's equity acquisition continues, it can actually achieve the goal. For elites like them, there are many ways, so why do they have to do something like "killing a thousand enemies and losing eight hundred to themselves" like buying a murder to kill? Moreover, the last part of the deal between Guan Boran and Lin Shu was not very necessary. It was not to the point where there was no choice. Lin Shu was a person with little IQ. Wasn't it easy to get that information? The significance of this information was not explained clearly after I got it. It was just to express the bitterness. The author probably has little work experience and only scratches the surface of the professional aspects involved in the article, which makes the character seem very thin. In addition, there is no reasonable grasp of the changes in the protagonist's personality. At first, I wanted to portray Qianqian as a calm, rational, and calm character with potential. As a result, the later she went, the more she felt like a little princess who had been well protected since she was a child. She would lose her mind when something happened, and she would often come up with unrealistic ideas or faint. In a word: The structure is confusing, lacks layers, lacks depth, and has a rushed ending.