[This article has been overhauled... Please read it from the beginning...]
It is well known that the Crown Princess Chang Lanqi is not favored by the Crown Prince.
But no one knew that King Zhu Di of Yan and Emperor Taisun Zhu Yunzhen were all chasing this erratic figure.
Life has been full of passion and infatuation since ancient times, and the most painful thing is being destined but not destined, and God's will playing tricks on people.
The long years, the bloody sky, and the many winds and rains ruthlessly covered up the love-hate entanglement that took place in the Hongwu Imperial City...
Reader comments
What an interesting idea…
Sprinkle flowers...
... What can I say? Why have I lost confidence in the big guarantee that "it will never suck" OTZ...
But I still jumped into the trap without looking back!
So I just shook my M and cracked the whip, crack the whip!
I really hope Chang Jian and Lin Han are together!
I can't calm down anymore. I hate the feeling of chasing articles. Please don't stop at the critical point... Eh...
很好很好的一篇文啊，看完觉得满足，钉子请继续努力~~~~~~~~~
This chapter really dragged on. . . After waiting for several days, I ended up adding such a plot that is not a plot, which is a bit disappointing.
As a poisonous insect, he can be so cute. Should it really be said that he is born with a different species, or should it be said that the author has a strong writing ability?
Keep complaining!
Thank you for your concern! You can rest assured that this article is absolutely original! A boring person, let him continue to be boring!
From now on, everyone will automatically ignore his existence. If he wants to say it, let him say it! Yaoyao can bear it!
Haha~~
Seeing so many people encouraging and supporting Yaoyao, Yaoyao is already very happy! Yaoyao will continue to write!
Regarding this matter, please stop making comments. All I have to do is make a complaint. I will complain to everyone I see.
What everyone has to do is to ignore him and isolate him mentally. Anyway, his behavior is no longer a day or two. In Yi Xue's posts, his evil deeds have long been known to everyone.
I was really angry at first. After all, it feels uncomfortable to be falsely accused. It is human nature. However, later on, I found that the more I paid attention to him, the more energetic he became, so I simply left him alone and let him say whatever he wanted. After all, real gold is not afraid of fire. He cannot judge my actions or words.
Now I finally understand why Yixue still concentrated on writing as if nothing had happened after being so unreasonably attacked by him. She is really an expert and has realized it a long time ago. Yaoyao just got the revelation today.
Yesterday, when I was reading Mr. Wang Dingwen's collection of essays "Wind and Rain", I read a sentence - the best way to stop slander is to write a good article!
This is what Yao thinks now. Instead of spending time on boring things, I might as well finish the article quickly and be worthy of my friends who have always believed and supported me!
Therefore, if I unilaterally stop this matter, if he wants to continue, please do so!
My right is - to complain!
Big, update soon. Accelerate
I like it very much, but I still can't get enough of both articles...
That picture is Kanda + Liu Huan, right?
: Chulolo Luxixi. I am his loyal fan
The silver chopsticks are also a point of laughter.
It seems there is no need for me to leave a message soon.
Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers~~~
Fortunately it's not really over, otherwise, ╭(╯^╰)╮Be careful with your little anus...
My NP ending, my world is boundless... If you dare to give me a bad ending...
You won't want to know the result...
Oh hahahaha, it's over like this... But... My mother's family... My husband's family... I squirted...
Hehe ~~Come back and take a look~~~Thank you for the extra, I have been looking forward to saying this for a long time~
Give it a thumbs up~~~~
Sofa author replied:
Congratulations~~~~
It's finally updated, it's been a pain in the ass waiting for it
! Is something going to happen under the emperor's eyes? ?
=0=This· I remember the one you originally wrote for Yu Ye was also very good...
The update is so slow, my neck is getting long while waiting.
But it's good (*@ο@*) Wow ~ I like it (⊙o⊙)
Both the pet and the owner are adorable~
I have always liked Fusu, and I feel depressed when I think of his fate. There is actually an article written about him. I support him greatly!
By the way, many kind and gentle princes in history had bad fates, such as Fusu, Liu Zhi, Xiao Tong, Li Hong, Zhenjin, and Zhu Biao.
History cannot be changed, but I also hope that this article can give Fusu a good ending.
Maybe it's because of personal reasons that I feel the writing is a bit messy... Maybe I prefer independent stories = = And who is Shu Ang = =
Why can't I post a long comment? Please delete the following, I will post it again.
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This cold article is much better than many novice articles on the list, but now it is a popular novice and no one can do anything about it.
You should probably have this awareness: if you choose an unpleasant subject, you should make some innovations in language or character.
The main flaw of this article is that there is nothing new. To be honest, the language, characters and story structure of this article are all average. (I always compare with the resident authors, and the requirements may be higher, because I only read ancient texts by the resident authors)
Some of the stories written by adults are very clichéd, but the language is so beautiful that there is nothing to say; some of the stories written by adults are slightly inferior, but have other characteristics.
The characters and plot of this article are too popular: there are almost all cold-faced singers in ancient costumes, and there are even more of them buying smiles with a lot of money.
As long as the characters and plot are no different from other writers, they should find ways to shine elsewhere, but the author just didn't notice this and was just complaining about his own indifference.
It's cold, not without reason.
My comments may not be pleasant to the ears, but they are all based on the good writing.
I think this article is more flexible in terms of language, which can be improved compared to other aspects. Now that the story has unfolded, the characters and plot are not easy to change, only the language can be improved. But when it comes to improving the language, this is the hardest thing.
The writing style should be very chaotic and sad, but the performance in this article is too conventional, without forming its own language style.
Grid.
This requirement may be too high, but who calls me a writer?
But if your language really reaches this point, I think many of the tweets on the list should be put aside.
He looks a bit like Mr. Gu Xie Xiaohe in every aspect.
However, I don't really like Gu Xie Xiaohe's writing because the plot is too sad but the language is not sad enough. It feels like the author cannot control the plot and language.
It cannot express the effect that the author wants to convey.
Gu Xie Xiaohe is a very famous resident writer who specializes in writing tragic articles. Most of his works are short stories. But it seems that this gentleman has not been to Jinjiang for a long time. (It shows how depressed JJ is now)
I can see that you are not the kind of person who writes nonsense, so I tell you so many nonsense. I hope you don't mind. Author's reply:
Well~Thank you MM for paying attention^_^
How should I put it... The whole structure of the story is a big conspiracy. MM feels that there is no new idea probably because the plot has not yet unfolded...
It's almost the end of the semester. The professional courses this semester are very boring and I haven't listened to them much, so preparing for the exam is a very stressful thing.
The next plot, I hope, will make MM slightly change her views on this article~
Thank you again MM for your long review ~ Author's reply:
Well~Thank you MM for paying attention^_^
How should I put it... The whole structure of the story is a big conspiracy. MM feels that there is no new idea probably because the plot has not yet unfolded...
It's almost the end of the semester. The professional courses this semester are very boring and I haven't listened to them much, so preparing for the exam is a very stressful thing.
The next plot, I hope, will make MM slightly change her views on this article~
Thanks again MM for your long review~
It makes me want to cry! After all the hardships, it turned out to be nothing more than this!
Yeah yeah
The ending has personality!
I like! ! !
Haha
tell the truth
I've been thinking about it for several days, but I still haven't come up with such a fantastic ending.
Haha
Don't have any extras! ! ! Author's reply:
Dear, your message makes me so painful, because Xiao Feng's extra chapter has been written.
And I agreed to explain it to Xiao Pai.
In this way, I'll post Xiao Feng's extra story first, and you can ignore it for now. I won't post Bai Shijing's extra story. I'll lock Xiao Feng's story up in a few days.
Another: Mom, hahaha, this ending is awesome, of course, your master, alas, there are people in the past, and there are those who come after.
..... Only half a sheet...
Click Manage Works on the works panel, and then modify the basic information of the article. Isn't there a one-sentence introduction below the introduction of the copy? Isn't there a box below the one-sentence introduction to put the cover address...
You just need to copy the cover address and click Modify Information, and the cover will come out.
PS: I really hope the author can write more in each chapter... There is no requirement for 3,000 words, at least 1,500 words is required... This chapter has 470 words, I feel so bad...
What an interesting idea… Sprinkle flowers...
... What can I say? Why have I lost confidence in the big guarantee that "it will never suck" OTZ... But I still jumped into the trap without looking back! So I just shook my M and cracked the whip, crack the whip!
I really hope Chang Jian and Lin Han are together!
I can't calm down anymore. I hate the feeling of chasing articles. Please don't stop at the critical point... Eh...
很好很好的一篇文啊，看完觉得满足，钉子请继续努力~~~~~~~~~
This chapter really dragged on. . . After waiting for several days, I ended up adding such a plot that is not a plot, which is a bit disappointing.
As a poisonous insect, he can be so cute. Should it really be said that he is born with a different species, or should it be said that the author has a strong writing ability?
Keep complaining! Thank you for your concern! You can rest assured that this article is absolutely original! A boring person, let him continue to be boring! From now on, everyone will automatically ignore his existence. If he wants to say it, let him say it! Yaoyao can bear it! Haha~~ Seeing so many people encouraging and supporting Yaoyao, Yaoyao is already very happy! Yaoyao will continue to write! Regarding this matter, please stop making comments. All I have to do is make a complaint. I will complain to everyone I see. What everyone has to do is to ignore him and isolate him mentally. Anyway, his behavior is no longer a day or two. In Yi Xue's posts, his evil deeds have long been known to everyone. I was really angry at first. After all, it feels uncomfortable to be falsely accused. It is human nature. However, later on, I found that the more I paid attention to him, the more energetic he became, so I simply left him alone and let him say whatever he wanted. After all, real gold is not afraid of fire. He cannot judge my actions or words. Now I finally understand why Yixue still concentrated on writing as if nothing had happened after being so unreasonably attacked by him. She is really an expert and has realized it a long time ago. Yaoyao just got the revelation today. Yesterday, when I was reading Mr. Wang Dingwen's collection of essays "Wind and Rain", I read a sentence - the best way to stop slander is to write a good article! This is what Yao thinks now. Instead of spending time on boring things, I might as well finish the article quickly and be worthy of my friends who have always believed and supported me! Therefore, if I unilaterally stop this matter, if he wants to continue, please do so! My right is - to complain!
Big, update soon. Accelerate
I like it very much, but I still can't get enough of both articles...
That picture is Kanda + Liu Huan, right?
: Chulolo Luxixi. I am his loyal fan
The silver chopsticks are also a point of laughter.
It seems there is no need for me to leave a message soon.
Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers~~~ Fortunately it's not really over, otherwise, ╭(╯^╰)╮Be careful with your little anus... My NP ending, my world is boundless... If you dare to give me a bad ending... You won't want to know the result...
Oh hahahaha, it's over like this... But... My mother's family... My husband's family... I squirted...
Hehe ~~Come back and take a look~~~Thank you for the extra, I have been looking forward to saying this for a long time~
Give it a thumbs up~~~~ Sofa author replied: Congratulations~~~~
It's finally updated, it's been a pain in the ass waiting for it
! Is something going to happen under the emperor's eyes? ?
=0=This· I remember the one you originally wrote for Yu Ye was also very good...
The update is so slow, my neck is getting long while waiting. But it's good (*@ο@*) Wow ~ I like it (⊙o⊙)
Both the pet and the owner are adorable~
I have always liked Fusu, and I feel depressed when I think of his fate. There is actually an article written about him. I support him greatly! By the way, many kind and gentle princes in history had bad fates, such as Fusu, Liu Zhi, Xiao Tong, Li Hong, Zhenjin, and Zhu Biao. History cannot be changed, but I also hope that this article can give Fusu a good ending.
Maybe it's because of personal reasons that I feel the writing is a bit messy... Maybe I prefer independent stories = = And who is Shu Ang = =
Why can't I post a long comment? Please delete the following, I will post it again. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This cold article is much better than many novice articles on the list, but now it is a popular novice and no one can do anything about it. You should probably have this awareness: if you choose an unpleasant subject, you should make some innovations in language or character. The main flaw of this article is that there is nothing new. To be honest, the language, characters and story structure of this article are all average. (I always compare with the resident authors, and the requirements may be higher, because I only read ancient texts by the resident authors) Some of the stories written by adults are very clichéd, but the language is so beautiful that there is nothing to say; some of the stories written by adults are slightly inferior, but have other characteristics. The characters and plot of this article are too popular: there are almost all cold-faced singers in ancient costumes, and there are even more of them buying smiles with a lot of money. As long as the characters and plot are no different from other writers, they should find ways to shine elsewhere, but the author just didn't notice this and was just complaining about his own indifference. It's cold, not without reason. My comments may not be pleasant to the ears, but they are all based on the good writing. I think this article is more flexible in terms of language, which can be improved compared to other aspects. Now that the story has unfolded, the characters and plot are not easy to change, only the language can be improved. But when it comes to improving the language, this is the hardest thing. The writing style should be very chaotic and sad, but the performance in this article is too conventional, without forming its own language style. Grid. This requirement may be too high, but who calls me a writer? But if your language really reaches this point, I think many of the tweets on the list should be put aside. He looks a bit like Mr. Gu Xie Xiaohe in every aspect. However, I don't really like Gu Xie Xiaohe's writing because the plot is too sad but the language is not sad enough. It feels like the author cannot control the plot and language. It cannot express the effect that the author wants to convey. Gu Xie Xiaohe is a very famous resident writer who specializes in writing tragic articles. Most of his works are short stories. But it seems that this gentleman has not been to Jinjiang for a long time. (It shows how depressed JJ is now) I can see that you are not the kind of person who writes nonsense, so I tell you so many nonsense. I hope you don't mind. Author's reply: Well~Thank you MM for paying attention^_^ How should I put it... The whole structure of the story is a big conspiracy. MM feels that there is no new idea probably because the plot has not yet unfolded... It's almost the end of the semester. The professional courses this semester are very boring and I haven't listened to them much, so preparing for the exam is a very stressful thing. The next plot, I hope, will make MM slightly change her views on this article~ Thank you again MM for your long review ~ Author's reply: Well~Thank you MM for paying attention^_^ How should I put it... The whole structure of the story is a big conspiracy. MM feels that there is no new idea probably because the plot has not yet unfolded... It's almost the end of the semester. The professional courses this semester are very boring and I haven't listened to them much, so preparing for the exam is a very stressful thing. The next plot, I hope, will make MM slightly change her views on this article~ Thanks again MM for your long review~
It makes me want to cry! After all the hardships, it turned out to be nothing more than this!
Yeah yeah The ending has personality! I like! ! ! Haha tell the truth I've been thinking about it for several days, but I still haven't come up with such a fantastic ending. Haha Don't have any extras! ! ! Author's reply: Dear, your message makes me so painful, because Xiao Feng's extra chapter has been written. And I agreed to explain it to Xiao Pai. In this way, I'll post Xiao Feng's extra story first, and you can ignore it for now. I won't post Bai Shijing's extra story. I'll lock Xiao Feng's story up in a few days. Another: Mom, hahaha, this ending is awesome, of course, your master, alas, there are people in the past, and there are those who come after.
..... Only half a sheet...
Click Manage Works on the works panel, and then modify the basic information of the article. Isn't there a one-sentence introduction below the introduction of the copy? Isn't there a box below the one-sentence introduction to put the cover address... You just need to copy the cover address and click Modify Information, and the cover will come out. PS: I really hope the author can write more in each chapter... There is no requirement for 3,000 words, at least 1,500 words is required... This chapter has 470 words, I feel so bad...