Story
I don't want to tell this story easily,
Tragic novels have made people numb,
After all, this is just child's play.
The difference between the two is that,
Those tragedies are meant to make readers cry,
It's true.
Conception:
Reader comments
After reading this, I really can't stand it anymore. Everything is probably clear, but the writing is too complicated. It makes my head spin. I don't know if it has something to do with my irritability, so I might as well send some flowers~
Internet Wang Wen should be young and invincible, passionate, occasionally hit the mark, and in short, silly and pure.
Youth is painful and dark, so go away...
I really hate people who speculate on other people's motives with the utmost malice. What a rare cure after being tortured by various BT articles.
I casually clicked in and saw the word Meng Luoke at a glance, and my whole body was shocked.
My favorite is Monroc! ! !
I like thieves the most! ! !
Good article, support, sprinkle flowers
It's developing so fast~~
Bs gathered around to watch, the writing is very good, the writing is skillful, there is no big problem. It's normal for a newcomer, and the subject matter is not popular, so the results are like this.
Three points to mention:
1. It's a bit awkward to write about the characters' inner thoughts. Of course, this may just be my personal bias.
2. "All the sunshine that originally belonged to me was robbed by him at this time." This sentence is a bit God's perspective. It seemed good at first, but it turned out to be a drama.
3. At the end of this chapter, I didn't see why the heroine was angry~~ It was a bit abrupt.
The article is collected. Come on, your writing is absolutely fine. If the plot is strong and it has a red theme, many people will definitely watch it. Come on, believe in yourself.
Sure enough, God unfolded, and in line with the hot topics of the moment, he traveled through time...
Yang Yu will not be written off to death, Xiaolou is alone again, wandering around. . . This way you can write another one. . . Right?
Identification - there must be something from the past here!
Lin Yan suddenly understood why they broke up - was it because of Xiao Bei's problem? Because he gradually doesn't value their life together?
The ambush is deep, and the only suffering is that Shangguan Yu, who practices medicine to save people, is chivalrous and courageous, and is being plotted...
Three liters of blood spurt~~~
What other characters are there? Don't let the wind slag out, it's so disgusting!
Ji Fang feels too cold, as if the two have never been in love
Gone again. Write more soon~~~
Are you going to reshape the plot? I love this CP and look forward to it~
Cough... Cat, you are sending food to the mouse's mouth, look at the sky...
Why do I regard the New Year's Eve Party as a blind date party? Why is this nirvana?
After reading this, I really can't stand it anymore. Everything is probably clear, but the writing is too complicated. It makes my head spin. I don't know if it has something to do with my irritability, so I might as well send some flowers~
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Internet Wang Wen should be young and invincible, passionate, occasionally hit the mark, and in short, silly and pure. Youth is painful and dark, so go away... I really hate people who speculate on other people's motives with the utmost malice. What a rare cure after being tortured by various BT articles.
I casually clicked in and saw the word Meng Luoke at a glance, and my whole body was shocked. My favorite is Monroc! ! ! I like thieves the most! ! !
Good article, support, sprinkle flowers
It's developing so fast~~
Bs gathered around to watch, the writing is very good, the writing is skillful, there is no big problem. It's normal for a newcomer, and the subject matter is not popular, so the results are like this. Three points to mention: 1. It's a bit awkward to write about the characters' inner thoughts. Of course, this may just be my personal bias. 2. "All the sunshine that originally belonged to me was robbed by him at this time." This sentence is a bit God's perspective. It seemed good at first, but it turned out to be a drama. 3. At the end of this chapter, I didn't see why the heroine was angry~~ It was a bit abrupt. The article is collected. Come on, your writing is absolutely fine. If the plot is strong and it has a red theme, many people will definitely watch it. Come on, believe in yourself.
Sure enough, God unfolded, and in line with the hot topics of the moment, he traveled through time...
Yang Yu will not be written off to death, Xiaolou is alone again, wandering around. . . This way you can write another one. . . Right?
Identification - there must be something from the past here! Lin Yan suddenly understood why they broke up - was it because of Xiao Bei's problem? Because he gradually doesn't value their life together?
The ambush is deep, and the only suffering is that Shangguan Yu, who practices medicine to save people, is chivalrous and courageous, and is being plotted... Three liters of blood spurt~~~
What other characters are there? Don't let the wind slag out, it's so disgusting!
Ji Fang feels too cold, as if the two have never been in love
Gone again. Write more soon~~~
Are you going to reshape the plot? I love this CP and look forward to it~
Cough... Cat, you are sending food to the mouse's mouth, look at the sky...
Why do I regard the New Year's Eve Party as a blind date party? Why is this nirvana?