Too taboo, good match, not a very popular CP
Inspired by Three Thousand White Fox's MVs Spring Song and Yi Zi Chi. After two years of being a Feng Hua Wushuang, I once again won the honorable title of a talented MV translator. I hope everyone will review the MV after reading the article. If you can have a sense of empathy, Xiao Mu will be satisfied.
I promised to send Xiao Chen a congratulatory message in May, but I delayed sending it until now.
More than 10,000 words came from a sudden inspiration last night and were written in one fell swoop.
My dear, don't blame me when you see it =3=
This is also an article to bid farewell to the old and welcome the new, eh, because I bid farewell (ah bah) to my best friend and welcomed my new gay friend NANA to the UK. I hope you can read this~
This is not my first time writing an article, but it is my first time writing a short story.
I read less about Jin Yong when I was growing up. Except for Ake and Xiao Wang Ye, who took on the role of Feng Hua Wushuang as the prototype, this is also the first time I openly write about Mr. Jin's fans, and they are still paired with each other.
There is always some anxiety in my heart, I wish I could be gentler and gentler~~
The love you love can only be described as crazy.
Conception:
Reader comments
Since you are writing about Yang Guo, I couldn't help but compare it with the image in the original work. After all, Yang Guo is still a very strong person. Although it is Danmei, I always feel that you wrote Yang Guo's character in a way that is too feminine. Maybe it shouldn't be described as feminine. But why is this Yang Guo so pretentious, especially "he covered his eyes with one hand and howled, shouting", I felt very uncomfortable when I saw it. Let me think about it, you just borrowed Mr. Jin's character name, and the character is your own creation.
In fact, I think you connected some plots quite well, "How can you only have the final say on who will lead the heroes? With Zhang Na Wuji's martial arts and virtues, how can he be as good as my master Jinlun Dharma King? Dear heroes, please listen, Today, apart from Jin Lun Dharma King, there is no other person who is worthy of being the leader of the martial arts world." Zhang Wuji has stood out from everyone since Wan'an Temple. Zhang Wuji has been praised by everyone, and then Jin Lun Dharma King appears and asks for a competition. This makes me feel very natural.
Haha, seeing Huang Rong missing you, you actually have a habit of cutting off your sleeves? I also felt that the plot developed very smoothly.
Also, why is it 6 years old, why not 16 years, haha.
I think the character of Yang Guo in the back looks more natural to me
Hahaha, Mr. Lu's integrity is all over the place
It's my mother. . . .
My husband! I love you! I was so touched when I saw this congratulatory message to me! So happy! Thank you for your hard work, the writing is great! As someone who has no idea about words, I really admire your writing style. It makes me feel like a great god is by my side. I've been busy these past two days, so I'm late in reviewing, sorry! But please forgive me because you are five months late, hehe.
Since you are writing about Yang Guo, I couldn't help but compare it with the image in the original work. After all, Yang Guo is still a very strong person. Although it is Danmei, I always feel that you wrote Yang Guo's character in a way that is too feminine. Maybe it shouldn't be described as feminine. But why is this Yang Guo so pretentious, especially "he covered his eyes with one hand and howled, shouting", I felt very uncomfortable when I saw it. Let me think about it, you just borrowed Mr. Jin's character name, and the character is your own creation. In fact, I think you connected some plots quite well, "How can you only have the final say on who will lead the heroes? With Zhang Na Wuji's martial arts and virtues, how can he be as good as my master Jinlun Dharma King? Dear heroes, please listen, Today, apart from Jin Lun Dharma King, there is no other person who is worthy of being the leader of the martial arts world." Zhang Wuji has stood out from everyone since Wan'an Temple. Zhang Wuji has been praised by everyone, and then Jin Lun Dharma King appears and asks for a competition. This makes me feel very natural. Haha, seeing Huang Rong missing you, you actually have a habit of cutting off your sleeves? I also felt that the plot developed very smoothly. Also, why is it 6 years old, why not 16 years, haha. I think the character of Yang Guo in the back looks more natural to me
Hahaha, Mr. Lu's integrity is all over the place
It's my mother. . . .
My husband! I love you! I was so touched when I saw this congratulatory message to me! So happy! Thank you for your hard work, the writing is great! As someone who has no idea about words, I really admire your writing style. It makes me feel like a great god is by my side. I've been busy these past two days, so I'm late in reviewing, sorry! But please forgive me because you are five months late, hehe.
(=^.^=) This pair, is Guo Jia alive or not?