The first rule of Jianghu: Before marrying someone, you must remember whether the other party has an official match, such as Ximen Chuixue.
Article 2 of the Jianghu Code: Never be a mistress. When an official match comes to you, remember to abdicate in favor of a worthy person, such as Sun Xiuqing.
Article 3 of the Jianghu Code: Men who have a playful smile, a smooth tongue, and a shabby integrity cannot be trusted, such as Lu Xiaoji.
Article 4 of Jianghu Code: To be a rich woman, marry a rich man, such as Hua Qitong!
Article 5 of the Jianghu Code: Buddha bless that man to be able to defeat the Ximen Sword God!
Tao Mumu amassed money crazily, and her four eyebrows were curious: "You like money very much?"
Tao Mumu: "Save up money and buy a fresh, rough guy."
I don't quite understand "fresh" and "first-hand", but: "Why do you want a rough guy?"
Tao Mumu glanced at the Huaqi children's shoes in Yushu Linfeng next to her: "The exquisite ones are too expensive."
"Do you like Hua Qitong?"
Tao Mumu crossed his fingers and smiled sheepishly: "I heard that the Hua family is engaged in real estate, so they must be very rich, right?"
Hua Qitong Shoes: "Haha."
Before he could finish "ha", Master Sword God's sword flew past Hua Qitong Shoes' cheek and stabbed deeply into the big tree behind.
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Why is it so difficult to be sweet? Hurry up and get rid of this disgusting woman. Go home and comfort your children.
Sun Xiuqing was really unlucky. She ended up like this and had her body taken over.
No matter who the target is, let's kill this shameless woman first, it's so disgusting!
Poor Sun Xiuqing was taken advantage of again. Even her little concern for Master Ximen was completely exploited.
Well, it's great that the flies are finally gone. It'll be great if we kill the woman who pretended to be Miss Tao.
Having reached this point, Ermu can already forgive Master Ximen. What a good man he is.
After all, Master Ximen can no longer let go of Ermuzi. A happy and happy life is ahead.
Master Ximen's Nanzhu temperament becomes more and more prominent, and Ermuzi's happy life finally comes
I want to watch the baby's side story, attacking with all my heart
Ask for extras! Can you write more about babies? Rub it hard~~~
Finally the rain has passed and the sky has cleared, ushering in a beautiful and happy life.
Is this still Ximen Chuixue? ! He is really described as a scumbag!
Taoermu brand pots match Ximen Dashen brand pot lids... Hahaha, what a brilliant metaphor!
Actually... When I saw the end, I felt like I was falling into a fog.
There are still many things that have not been explained clearly. Will it end too quickly?
It turned out to be a big bug. .
I'm sure I can't go back now, Ermu is so heartbroken. Live a good life with Master Ximen
Ah, I'm so anxious. Stop abusing the Sword God. Let them be sweet.
Isn't it better for you and me? T^T
Grass mud horse! Hurry up and let this woman who is smart and feels good about herself receive the lunch box!! Strong protest! ! !
Depend on! What does she want to do? Do you want to replace Ermu and marry Master Ximen? Damn, don't bring such disgusting people
Master, please refute them both. If you don't take a stand on this matter, when will you take a stand?
Who is the coming killer? I also don't think it's Mrs. Gongsun. This is too blatant, not to mention that the Great God Ximen is still here.
No matter what the reason is at this time, it is estimated that the great god will not let go.
God is so handsome! Just one or two sentences to sow discord, what a beautiful idea! Ermuzi finally managed to keep the clouds clear and see the moonlight!
Master Ximen is so handsome! This is the right thing to do. The problem between the two of you can be solved by yourself. Why should outsiders care so much?
There are indeed a lot of troubles.
Hey~ It's very hard for people who can't make custom orders~ (tears)
But the author should have finished the exam, right? You can rest happily~ : D
Wow~ Never give sweets to a six-month-old child....
It's easy to choke...
Where is the customization? It's not over yet
About the character analysis of the characters in this article and the compatibility with the original work
First of all, let me state that I am not a die-hard fan of the original works. However, I have read Master Gu Long's works, especially the "Lu Xiaofeng" series and the "Chu Liuxiang" series, carefully two or three times from beginning to end. I still remember the general development of the story, and even some of the unique lines, so I think there are probably not a few people who have the same idea as me. But since the long review was written by me, I can only say that this is my personal opinion, please do not take it personally.
First, let's talk about the characters in the original work. In my opinion, the story itself is more exciting than the characters themselves. I'm not saying that the characters in the original work have no personality. On the contrary, everyone has a personality and is highly identifiable. However, when I close the book, all I can think of is the story itself, not someone's personality. Take Lu Xiaofeng as an example. Everyone is familiar with his four eyebrows, his clever mind, and his genius in martial arts. This has almost become Lu Xiaofeng's symbol. Ximen Chuixue is dressed in white, has superb swordsmanship, and doesn't like to joke. Hua Manlou is a blind man with a beautiful tree facing the wind, full of optimism about life. However, do these well-known character symbols have anything to do with personality? It seems there is, but it seems there isn't.
Therefore, I have never quite understood what the so-called "out of shape" is.
Of course, I have to admit that "Ximen Chuixue" in this article, as the first male protagonist, appears many times more times than in the original work. In this way, the character's actions, demeanor, and expressions need to be displayed in many aspects, so the character becomes more alive. So, I wonder if the so-called "out of shape" is because Ximen Chuixue is too conspicuous and bright. The original simple white clothes with dark hair and a long sword in hand were suddenly added to more behaviors that are common to ordinary people's lives, such as drinking tea and eating, communicating with people, daily life with the people they like... And so on. Moreover, the author's description is extremely detailed, with a raised eyebrow action and a posture of drinking tea. They all look like real people in front of us, instead of being just a dull ink painting like in the original work, and no longer living just for "holding a sword", but have become bright and colorful oil paintings, so much so that the expressions and movements of the characters are beyond what we can imagine from the thin descriptions in the original work. It feels like he is no longer the person we remember, so does it feel "out of shape"?
As I said beforehand, these are just my personal opinions, because I am not a die-hard fan of the original work, and I have not tried to analyze the characters' personalities through the descriptions and dialogues in the original work. Therefore, I can't even imagine how Ximen Chuixue would have behaved when faced with a lover like Tao Ermu and these plot developments if he hadn't been "out of shape"... (It seems so scary when I think about it!)
So in my opinion, a fanfic, unless it breaks down really badly, is not considered out of shape... I am so tolerant! A person always has many sides, and the development of many things is beyond one person's control. When everything gets out of control, isn't it normal for different behaviors to appear?
As an older young woman who likes reading romance novels (definitely a compliment), but doesn't like to use her brain when reading the novel (in today's generation of 2000s, I have already started to fall in love, I am really old enough, tears...), I really liked this article, and I had a lot of fun reading it. The author's writing style is very good, and the story is laid out in a relaxed and relaxed manner. The only thing that is not good enough is that the front line of abuse is too long, and he always gives a long buffer period after a heavy blow. When he feels that everything is under control, he strikes again... I always feel that the scar is healed and the pain is forgotten, Ximen Chuixue will not have a long memory! Therefore, it is necessary to give him a hard blow!
Come on, author!
Why is it so difficult to be sweet? Hurry up and get rid of this disgusting woman. Go home and comfort your children.
Sun Xiuqing was really unlucky. She ended up like this and had her body taken over.
No matter who the target is, let's kill this shameless woman first, it's so disgusting!
Poor Sun Xiuqing was taken advantage of again. Even her little concern for Master Ximen was completely exploited.
Well, it's great that the flies are finally gone. It'll be great if we kill the woman who pretended to be Miss Tao.
Having reached this point, Ermu can already forgive Master Ximen. What a good man he is.
After all, Master Ximen can no longer let go of Ermuzi. A happy and happy life is ahead.
Master Ximen's Nanzhu temperament becomes more and more prominent, and Ermuzi's happy life finally comes
I want to watch the baby's side story, attacking with all my heart
Ask for extras! Can you write more about babies? Rub it hard~~~
Finally the rain has passed and the sky has cleared, ushering in a beautiful and happy life.
Is this still Ximen Chuixue? ! He is really described as a scumbag!
Taoermu brand pots match Ximen Dashen brand pot lids... Hahaha, what a brilliant metaphor!
Actually... When I saw the end, I felt like I was falling into a fog. There are still many things that have not been explained clearly. Will it end too quickly?
It turned out to be a big bug. .
I'm sure I can't go back now, Ermu is so heartbroken. Live a good life with Master Ximen
Ah, I'm so anxious. Stop abusing the Sword God. Let them be sweet.
Isn't it better for you and me? T^T
Grass mud horse! Hurry up and let this woman who is smart and feels good about herself receive the lunch box!! Strong protest! ! !
Depend on! What does she want to do? Do you want to replace Ermu and marry Master Ximen? Damn, don't bring such disgusting people
Master, please refute them both. If you don't take a stand on this matter, when will you take a stand?
Who is the coming killer? I also don't think it's Mrs. Gongsun. This is too blatant, not to mention that the Great God Ximen is still here.
No matter what the reason is at this time, it is estimated that the great god will not let go.
God is so handsome! Just one or two sentences to sow discord, what a beautiful idea! Ermuzi finally managed to keep the clouds clear and see the moonlight!
Master Ximen is so handsome! This is the right thing to do. The problem between the two of you can be solved by yourself. Why should outsiders care so much?
There are indeed a lot of troubles.
Hey~ It's very hard for people who can't make custom orders~ (tears) But the author should have finished the exam, right? You can rest happily~ : D
Wow~ Never give sweets to a six-month-old child.... It's easy to choke...
Where is the customization? It's not over yet
About the character analysis of the characters in this article and the compatibility with the original work First of all, let me state that I am not a die-hard fan of the original works. However, I have read Master Gu Long's works, especially the "Lu Xiaofeng" series and the "Chu Liuxiang" series, carefully two or three times from beginning to end. I still remember the general development of the story, and even some of the unique lines, so I think there are probably not a few people who have the same idea as me. But since the long review was written by me, I can only say that this is my personal opinion, please do not take it personally. First, let's talk about the characters in the original work. In my opinion, the story itself is more exciting than the characters themselves. I'm not saying that the characters in the original work have no personality. On the contrary, everyone has a personality and is highly identifiable. However, when I close the book, all I can think of is the story itself, not someone's personality. Take Lu Xiaofeng as an example. Everyone is familiar with his four eyebrows, his clever mind, and his genius in martial arts. This has almost become Lu Xiaofeng's symbol. Ximen Chuixue is dressed in white, has superb swordsmanship, and doesn't like to joke. Hua Manlou is a blind man with a beautiful tree facing the wind, full of optimism about life. However, do these well-known character symbols have anything to do with personality? It seems there is, but it seems there isn't. Therefore, I have never quite understood what the so-called "out of shape" is. Of course, I have to admit that "Ximen Chuixue" in this article, as the first male protagonist, appears many times more times than in the original work. In this way, the character's actions, demeanor, and expressions need to be displayed in many aspects, so the character becomes more alive. So, I wonder if the so-called "out of shape" is because Ximen Chuixue is too conspicuous and bright. The original simple white clothes with dark hair and a long sword in hand were suddenly added to more behaviors that are common to ordinary people's lives, such as drinking tea and eating, communicating with people, daily life with the people they like... And so on. Moreover, the author's description is extremely detailed, with a raised eyebrow action and a posture of drinking tea. They all look like real people in front of us, instead of being just a dull ink painting like in the original work, and no longer living just for "holding a sword", but have become bright and colorful oil paintings, so much so that the expressions and movements of the characters are beyond what we can imagine from the thin descriptions in the original work. It feels like he is no longer the person we remember, so does it feel "out of shape"? As I said beforehand, these are just my personal opinions, because I am not a die-hard fan of the original work, and I have not tried to analyze the characters' personalities through the descriptions and dialogues in the original work. Therefore, I can't even imagine how Ximen Chuixue would have behaved when faced with a lover like Tao Ermu and these plot developments if he hadn't been "out of shape"... (It seems so scary when I think about it!) So in my opinion, a fanfic, unless it breaks down really badly, is not considered out of shape... I am so tolerant! A person always has many sides, and the development of many things is beyond one person's control. When everything gets out of control, isn't it normal for different behaviors to appear? As an older young woman who likes reading romance novels (definitely a compliment), but doesn't like to use her brain when reading the novel (in today's generation of 2000s, I have already started to fall in love, I am really old enough, tears...), I really liked this article, and I had a lot of fun reading it. The author's writing style is very good, and the story is laid out in a relaxed and relaxed manner. The only thing that is not good enough is that the front line of abuse is too long, and he always gives a long buffer period after a heavy blow. When he feels that everything is under control, he strikes again... I always feel that the scar is healed and the pain is forgotten, Ximen Chuixue will not have a long memory! Therefore, it is necessary to give him a hard blow! Come on, author!