When she was a child, Nana Sato knew that there were two 'stars' in her class.
Fuwa, who is loved by all the girls in the class, and Mogami, who is ostracized by the girls in the class.
These two people had nothing to do with her. A few years after they were in the same class, Sato Nana left her hometown and came to Tokyo.
I just didn't expect that Nana Sato would reunite with Mogami after she entered the entertainment industry with a new look N years later.
This time, she is no longer a passerby,
But the 'bystander' who turned Mogami's life upside down...
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This article is a fan work written by the author because he has been chasing "skip" for ten years but failed. In addition, this article follows the original CP.
PS2: This article is a bit slow. The heroine has always appeared as a bystander before Chapter 16, and the story also coincides with the trend of the comics. I know that the beginning of my first article in Jinjiang does not have any explosive points, and it may not be enough to attract everyone to read Chapter 16 or even beyond. I write this here to give readers who come to read my article a big shot. I hope you can read it if possible. Thank you~~~
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Reader comments
I am so reserved that I laugh and urinate. . . Can't women be strong? In my opinion, the passive one loses because the one who controls the switch is the active one. Although the one who confesses is indeed easy to be worthless (but according to him, so many female comic heroines should be despised by others?) But those are all excuses for the male protagonist, right? If the female protagonist takes the initiative to confess, will he still say that?
Looking at the comments, I saw that the author was very awesome eleven years ago
It feels like a good start, keep up the good work
I made a very stupid mistake. Because of Jinjiang's convulsions, I accidentally sent seven identical replies. I originally wanted to try to delete the redundant replies, but I accidentally deleted the comments that readers gave me. Now I am beyond sad. I don't know how to restore the comment, so I can only express my sincere apologies to my readers here. . .
How to say it? I think I still need to mention a few points to the author.
First, your punctuation needs to be corrected'. . . ' Should be changed to '…', I think this is not the difficulty.
Secondly, this is the first time the author has written an article, and it is actually very good. However, although the author's main plot is to develop the pair of Kyoko, Nana as the heroine is also very important. It's not that I want to follow a main line, Nana is just a bystander. Nana is also a very important clue. Why not cross the two leads together? Blend them.
Then, I think that the psychological description of Nana needs to be described at a deeper level, such as Nana's entanglement with a bad girl. Psychology is very important for a bystander. If you don't do it well, you will fail.
In the end, I actually quite liked the feel of this article.
I hope the author can revise this article and polish it again.
Thank you for your hard work, Dad, touch it
It's over. Are you going to prepare some other articles? TVT
I thought I had been chasing Skip for a long time, but I didn't expect Kiss to be even better than me! ! !
PS: Kyoko and Ren Tsuruga won't break up, right? ? ?
I am so reserved that I laugh and urinate. . . Can't women be strong? In my opinion, the passive one loses because the one who controls the switch is the active one. Although the one who confesses is indeed easy to be worthless (but according to him, so many female comic heroines should be despised by others?) But those are all excuses for the male protagonist, right? If the female protagonist takes the initiative to confess, will he still say that?
Looking at the comments, I saw that the author was very awesome eleven years ago
It feels like a good start, keep up the good work
I made a very stupid mistake. Because of Jinjiang's convulsions, I accidentally sent seven identical replies. I originally wanted to try to delete the redundant replies, but I accidentally deleted the comments that readers gave me. Now I am beyond sad. I don't know how to restore the comment, so I can only express my sincere apologies to my readers here. . .
How to say it? I think I still need to mention a few points to the author. First, your punctuation needs to be corrected'. . . ' Should be changed to '…', I think this is not the difficulty. Secondly, this is the first time the author has written an article, and it is actually very good. However, although the author's main plot is to develop the pair of Kyoko, Nana as the heroine is also very important. It's not that I want to follow a main line, Nana is just a bystander. Nana is also a very important clue. Why not cross the two leads together? Blend them. Then, I think that the psychological description of Nana needs to be described at a deeper level, such as Nana's entanglement with a bad girl. Psychology is very important for a bystander. If you don't do it well, you will fail. In the end, I actually quite liked the feel of this article. I hope the author can revise this article and polish it again.
Thank you for your hard work, Dad, touch it
It's over. Are you going to prepare some other articles? TVT
I thought I had been chasing Skip for a long time, but I didn't expect Kiss to be even better than me! ! ! PS: Kyoko and Ren Tsuruga won't break up, right? ? ?