Net King + Conan, Long Aiwen. When he meets her, life becomes more colorful; when she meets him, life becomes more sunny. In this life, he was her disaster, and she was his lifelong love. This is Qiqi's first time writing an article, so please bear with me, thank you all.
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It's very beautiful, I watched it over and over again several times.
However, Tsuna's description is not reasonable enough╮(╯＿╰)╭
In the first generation, Tsuna's age should have been only 7 years old. Tsuna could have been kidnapped by a gangster and forced to undergo training as a poisonous killer. The first time he killed someone by mistake, and then he was forced to kill more 'gu'. It could be because he wanted to go home and see Nana's mother.
After being rescued by the first generation, he should stay with the first generation as a soft and cute rabbit. It would be more reasonable to raise him as a son.
Later, the rise of Tsuna can be set to a state where Tsuna voluntarily picked up the butcher knife for the first generation because he was seriously injured in order to protect Tsuna.
Because Tsunayoshi is the kind of person who will always be a rabbit if you don't force him, and even if he evolves into a black rabbit, Tsunayoshi should still have a subtle attitude towards life, the kind that is unwilling to take action but has to do it for Vongola, the kind that voluntarily removes obstacles for the first generation but makes people feel distressed.
After returning to the tenth world, Tsuna should have transformed into a better ordinary person instead of a good-for-nothing Tsuna. After all, he has experienced the first generation world. Even if he loses the memory of the first generation, some of the habits he has developed will be revealed unconsciously.
Ahhhh! This kind of tutoring text is great. If you have more time, can you try to revise it? It would be better if the above factors were added, otherwise people would not be able to connect with Tsuna in the first generation, because Tsuna should be kinder (≧▽≦)
I really like Tsunayoshi Little Angel, and I really hope she can write better, because her writing is really to my liking (*^ω^*)
Wow, it's over, I can't bear to leave it
... My dear, have you noticed... That you lose your horse unconsciously when the chicken is cold? (=_=) My dear, I am a little worried, is your vest still enough? →_→
I'm following up on the review. Please update it soon. I can't wait to see the plot below. Everyone who appears is so charming that you can't help but fall in love with them [crying] Of course, it hurts twice as much when a knife hits you.
I don't know why I bought the whole book, I don't like the male protagonist
It's very beautiful, I watched it over and over again several times. However, Tsuna's description is not reasonable enough╮(╯＿╰)╭ In the first generation, Tsuna's age should have been only 7 years old. Tsuna could have been kidnapped by a gangster and forced to undergo training as a poisonous killer. The first time he killed someone by mistake, and then he was forced to kill more 'gu'. It could be because he wanted to go home and see Nana's mother. After being rescued by the first generation, he should stay with the first generation as a soft and cute rabbit. It would be more reasonable to raise him as a son. Later, the rise of Tsuna can be set to a state where Tsuna voluntarily picked up the butcher knife for the first generation because he was seriously injured in order to protect Tsuna. Because Tsunayoshi is the kind of person who will always be a rabbit if you don't force him, and even if he evolves into a black rabbit, Tsunayoshi should still have a subtle attitude towards life, the kind that is unwilling to take action but has to do it for Vongola, the kind that voluntarily removes obstacles for the first generation but makes people feel distressed. After returning to the tenth world, Tsuna should have transformed into a better ordinary person instead of a good-for-nothing Tsuna. After all, he has experienced the first generation world. Even if he loses the memory of the first generation, some of the habits he has developed will be revealed unconsciously. Ahhhh! This kind of tutoring text is great. If you have more time, can you try to revise it? It would be better if the above factors were added, otherwise people would not be able to connect with Tsuna in the first generation, because Tsuna should be kinder (≧▽≦) I really like Tsunayoshi Little Angel, and I really hope she can write better, because her writing is really to my liking (*^ω^*)
Wow, it's over, I can't bear to leave it
... My dear, have you noticed... That you lose your horse unconsciously when the chicken is cold? (=_=) My dear, I am a little worried, is your vest still enough? →_→
I'm following up on the review. Please update it soon. I can't wait to see the plot below. Everyone who appears is so charming that you can't help but fall in love with them [crying] Of course, it hurts twice as much when a knife hits you.
I don't know why I bought the whole book, I don't like the male protagonist