I think the writing is quite good, but it's a bit verbose in some places. Please continue to work hard↖(^ω^)↗
Come on, big brother
It's well written and I'm really looking forward to the next development~~O(∩_∩)O~~ I love the abuse of Ye Zi Shen... And the last sentence is very touching... Hmm... I support it!
Very well written! Speaking of which, raw potatoes are so cute!
I'm here specifically to support you~~
I think Bailu is really miserable.
Come on, stay tuned for the next chapter, waiting for it
In fact, you know very well that you cannot meet the people in your memories.
I can't get enough of reading it every day. Author, do you dare to write more!
Cat, I am completely convinced by you.
Yes, yes! ! (*ˉˉ*) I like it very much. Let's get some meat. Hehe.
Taking too many drugs has already had side effects on the mental and personality aspects.
Let's wait until it gets fatter and then take a look. It's too anxious to watch like squeezing toothpaste bit by bit like this.
How many months have passed and you still haven't updated.
It's been a year, and I've long wanted to give up on your article, but every time I see your catalog, I feel a little reluctant to let it go. I think of staying up late at night under the quilt, peeking at it, and crying.
But you seem to have no love for it anymore, but we can't force it
Is this a curse cast by Bai Jie before she died? It looks a bit like a horror novel.
= =Hongli is still mentally retarded~ But I believe that Xiao Xuanzi will suppress Hongli's trembling heart that is ready to move.
= =The fat man in my family......
It's so happy to eat. I'm hungry and want to eat chicken tenders. I'm jealous... . .
A very eye-catching opening XD
Alas, this is life, there are some things that you just can't let go of, can't part with, and can't live without.
Let's have some extra stories about Zhang's heart, as well as some sweet side stories about morning and evening.
I feel crazy...
What a coincidence today. I haven't updated it in a long time.
Why are there so few reviews on the word count list? The author's writing is very good (>_
Dear, this chapter is a bit short! And the third chapter feels a bit like it was split from the second chapter. (Personal opinion: Can Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 be combined together?) ~○V○~ Hehe, you have to work hard!
Come here first to support me,...
I feel really uncomfortable reading this chapter. The layout is really
I came to the door in the middle of the night to hack the space-time machine... Little Fufu is so cute!
It's great, but only three chapters are not enough. Come on, author! ! !
You can see rotten girls everywhere
Speaking of which, hurry up and catch the bugs. There is a typo ~ clothes [hug up] and so on.
In fact, cultivating immortals is not suitable for the protagonist... It's a bit exaggerated, haha
What type of new pit is it? ? I really want to know~
I think the writing is quite good, but it's a bit verbose in some places. Please continue to work hard↖(^ω^)↗
Come on, big brother
It's well written and I'm really looking forward to the next development~~O(∩_∩)O~~ I love the abuse of Ye Zi Shen... And the last sentence is very touching... Hmm... I support it!
Very well written! Speaking of which, raw potatoes are so cute!
I'm here specifically to support you~~
I think Bailu is really miserable.
Come on, stay tuned for the next chapter, waiting for it
In fact, you know very well that you cannot meet the people in your memories.
I can't get enough of reading it every day. Author, do you dare to write more!
Cat, I am completely convinced by you.
Yes, yes! ! (*ˉˉ*) I like it very much. Let's get some meat. Hehe.
Taking too many drugs has already had side effects on the mental and personality aspects.
Let's wait until it gets fatter and then take a look. It's too anxious to watch like squeezing toothpaste bit by bit like this.
How many months have passed and you still haven't updated. It's been a year, and I've long wanted to give up on your article, but every time I see your catalog, I feel a little reluctant to let it go. I think of staying up late at night under the quilt, peeking at it, and crying. But you seem to have no love for it anymore, but we can't force it
Is this a curse cast by Bai Jie before she died? It looks a bit like a horror novel.
= =Hongli is still mentally retarded~ But I believe that Xiao Xuanzi will suppress Hongli's trembling heart that is ready to move.
= =The fat man in my family......
It's so happy to eat. I'm hungry and want to eat chicken tenders. I'm jealous... . .
A very eye-catching opening XD
Alas, this is life, there are some things that you just can't let go of, can't part with, and can't live without. Let's have some extra stories about Zhang's heart, as well as some sweet side stories about morning and evening.
I feel crazy...
What a coincidence today. I haven't updated it in a long time.
Why are there so few reviews on the word count list? The author's writing is very good (>_
Dear, this chapter is a bit short! And the third chapter feels a bit like it was split from the second chapter. (Personal opinion: Can Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 be combined together?) ~○V○~ Hehe, you have to work hard!
Come here first to support me,...
I feel really uncomfortable reading this chapter. The layout is really
I came to the door in the middle of the night to hack the space-time machine... Little Fufu is so cute!
It's great, but only three chapters are not enough. Come on, author! ! !
You can see rotten girls everywhere Speaking of which, hurry up and catch the bugs. There is a typo ~ clothes [hug up] and so on.
In fact, cultivating immortals is not suitable for the protagonist... It's a bit exaggerated, haha What type of new pit is it? ? I really want to know~