[Jojo]milk Chocolate

To comment objectively, the novel is a little off-kilter towards the end. Except for the beginning of the overseas plot, which I thought was pretty good, the more I wrote about the plot of returning home, the less interesting it became to me, and it didn't make much sense. In fact, this phenomenon is normal. Many novels are amazing at the beginning but boring at the end. Very few novels are exciting from beginning to end. The author can design the overall plan of the article more carefully. As for the ending, I think it can be written more exciting. To be honest, I am not very satisfied with the ending of this novel. It gave me a feeling of, ah, it ended like this, a little too sloppy. I felt a little disappointed, because I am the kind of person who likes wonderful endings very much. If the ending is not good, my impression of the novel may not be good. But overall it's still good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the novel will get better and better. One last question, why can't I see the system in the later stage? Where did the system go?

It's okay to spray, just be gentle...

Hahahahaha this old man is so funny, of course the hot pot is really delicious

Haha, Xiaoye, who was wearing women's clothing, suddenly received a critical attack

I think Ellie is pretty cute too hahaha

I, on my expedition today, I found an Otachi~ But it was Ishikiri Maru. I feel like I have been cursed by my sister, she, 10 times Otai 8 times Ishikiri Maru qwq

Huhu: Weak, pitiful and innocent (heehee)

No, in fact, my point is that "if a woman has a child with a woman, it needs external intervention through surgery if it is not ABO." So under this logic, getting married because of pregnancy seems a bit strange. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make you unhappy.

The corners of the mouth were raised crazily [being dragged away]

Luo: I kept asking before I added him to WeChat.

Oh, this is so boring. Do you want to tell them about their romance?

Not Miss Ning, that's Shen Yan. . .

What does yddd mean? Can anyone kindly explain this?

I am looking forward to the next part of Northwest, I love it very much now

If you are looking for a job, why not become a lay disciple at Lianyin Temple?

Come on, I found the treasure article