Mechanism, hypocrisy, indifference, strength, weakness, loss, and unknowability are the main elements that constitute the modern civilization era. Amidst the huge gaps between people and society, people and people, and people and nature, Hao Damin's pursuit of the ideal world must be weak, because he himself has become a component of these elements.
Integrating all these themes and ideas into a short story seems too general. Maybe it should be written as a medium or long story, but overall, I am satisfied. Because of the need to use "cold" language, some places were handled too implicitly.