This is my first time writing a fanfic, so I'm not sure at all. I hope everyone can give me your opinions, thank you~!
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小病果然怡情 默默的温柔最有爱啦 强烈要求巧克力再出镜 但怎么都感觉是养好了求犒劳的坏心眼 萌萌哒
I understand the issue of "redemption", but I still feel that the character created in the past ten chapters is not the male protagonist (one), which is a waste! No matter it's our love or our brains.
Ah, the picture is so cute~
Woohoo, okay, I clearly said I would fall asleep after eating the apple, but... I was wrong~
0.0Fight on! Sprinkle flowers ~ come on big
... This is an original imported dream within a dream!
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时光大叔来给你撑个场子
To be honest, I have almost forgotten the previous plot_(:_∠)_
Isn't his son from the previous man?
I'm here. I just want to take a look at this time. You modified it.
小病果然怡情 默默的温柔最有爱啦 强烈要求巧克力再出镜 但怎么都感觉是养好了求犒劳的坏心眼 萌萌哒
I understand the issue of "redemption", but I still feel that the character created in the past ten chapters is not the male protagonist (one), which is a waste! No matter it's our love or our brains.
Ah, the picture is so cute~ Woohoo, okay, I clearly said I would fall asleep after eating the apple, but... I was wrong~
0.0Fight on! Sprinkle flowers ~ come on big
... This is an original imported dream within a dream!
The review has been published. Please click on Chapter 32 of the store to receive the review and indicate whether to send it below.
时光大叔来给你撑个场子
To be honest, I have almost forgotten the previous plot_(:_∠)_
Isn't his son from the previous man?
I'm here. I just want to take a look at this time. You modified it.
千金说，我只想和你好好在一起，为什么总不能如愿。 那当然 ，你们好好在一起了，我们还看什么啊，秀恩爱吗┑(￣Д ￣)┍
It's been half a year, are you still updating?
Sprinkle flowers~Momo author~
快写快写(′･ω･`)
Is my wife in final hell?
Could you update it faster? ? ? We are all waiting for you! ! !