Everyone will always have many encounters in life. Even an accidental collision will spark a small spark. What matters is whether you can collect these little sparks and let them ignite.
Li Qi is an ordinary girl, but perhaps she becomes extraordinary because of her ordinaryness. Although she has a different family background than others, she cannot stop her love for life. It all started after an accidental collision.
"I'm sorry, I bumped into you..."
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... Oh my god.. After seeing what you said... I suddenly felt that it is not a sin to have an update speed that is slower than a tortoise...
I'm really resentful~ I originally wanted to see Xiao Luo's parents... I really want to read the next part! I want to see the development of the two whites! ! I wanted to see everything... But suddenly I couldn't write a sentence anymore... And why it just happened to end at a very unappetizing place... What should I say... A tragedy in a cup! ! Tragedy in the tableware! !
It doesn't matter if the update is slow or not, after all, there will be updates... But no more updates... It just won't be updated... There won't be updates in the future... I can't see the rest of it... No oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowrssing goes attention! !
= =|||Why did Raphael's character become like this? . .
You seduced me! ! ! ! ! It's so bad that I want to start a trap. . .
I saw your post on the forum and came here to take a look.
After reading the first few chapters, I found the following questions, for reference only.
1. Layout. In fact, long paragraphs of text can make people's eyes very uncomfortable to read. Personally, I prefer diligent writers who divide their paragraphs into paragraphs. I usually don't bother to read a paragraph if it exceeds four lines. At the same time, it is best to leave a blank line between each paragraph, otherwise it will look tired.
2. Writing style. In fact, there are no special problems if you look closely at the author's writing, but at the same time, there is nothing particularly outstanding, and there is no particularly valuable text worth thinking about. The narration is like a historian's writing style. In some places, using God's perspective to briefly mention it reduces the difficulty of writing, but it also reduces the readability. In terms of symbols, I hope to use the regular shift+6 for the ellipsis.
3. Plot. I have to say that this is the biggest problem, because I didn't look closely, but I can also find that the plot is a bit confusing. And when it comes to writing about war, women often fall into the trap of writing about war.
4. Characters. The portrayal of the characters is not detailed enough, and the characters' personalities are not outstanding enough. Lack of detailed description of psychological activities.
Hey, I understand. No need to revise.
Not bad, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to the exciting content below.
It's very beautifully written, so don't be fooled.
It seems that everyone has to suffer some setbacks before they can grow.
Spread flowers spread flowers
Don't forget, abuse and abuse
This article is quite interesting, why is it not updated? ? ? Doudou, don't just write about Weiyang, fill this hole with some dirt! ! !
Come and see...
The fairy is here, the little fox will be in danger = =
Haha, that's cool. Did you run in the wrong direction?
Did Xiaobai forget Xiao Cao's children's shoes?
As soon as I had some feeling, this section was gone. At the end of this section, I felt like something was missing.
So touching! ! ! ! !
Yo West! This is youth! Youth! My blood is boiling~~ Hurry up to the next chapter!
-.-
Shu's mother also has a childlike face... Tianshan's childlike mother... Tianshan's mother?
Puff. . . .
= =+Aizen appears
Pfft... Iron Head. . . Add in Tiedan'er, and the whole thing will be a gathering of rural teenagers-"=
Who am I? I have lost my memory! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wow Kaka~~~~~~~~~Hanhan is jealous~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Damn, your articles haven't been updated for several weeks.
Looking forward to it
Please update the article quickly
What is the setting of the eulogist? I'm very curious~~
Is it a healing nanny similar to a priest?
Isn't it a bit cruel to treat that Liu Kai?
What will those who write novels do if you do this? This makes others feel comfortable, but what about the author? Have you thought about the author's thoughts? I also write novels. Although my writing is not very good, I also know that coding is very hard. Sometimes I can't come up with a good structure for several hours. Plus, it takes time to revise. It's so shameful for you!
I don't intend to give you negative marks, and I know you may have good intentions, but please consider the author's ideas before posting in the future. Your actions have violated the law, so please delete the post as soon as possible!
Eh, how disgusting~ The truck driver watched him fall asleep with "gentle" eyes. Is this truck driver the reincarnation of Hagrid~
Alas, in the heat of passion, this disaster will come. . . . .
Dear, are you still there? Already going from one final exam to another orz...
The author will update soon, I really want to read it
... Oh my god.. After seeing what you said... I suddenly felt that it is not a sin to have an update speed that is slower than a tortoise... I'm really resentful~ I originally wanted to see Xiao Luo's parents... I really want to read the next part! I want to see the development of the two whites! ! I wanted to see everything... But suddenly I couldn't write a sentence anymore... And why it just happened to end at a very unappetizing place... What should I say... A tragedy in a cup! ! Tragedy in the tableware! ! It doesn't matter if the update is slow or not, after all, there will be updates... But no more updates... It just won't be updated... There won't be updates in the future... I can't see the rest of it... No oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowrssing goes attention! !
= =|||Why did Raphael's character become like this? . . You seduced me! ! ! ! ! It's so bad that I want to start a trap. . .
I saw your post on the forum and came here to take a look. After reading the first few chapters, I found the following questions, for reference only. 1. Layout. In fact, long paragraphs of text can make people's eyes very uncomfortable to read. Personally, I prefer diligent writers who divide their paragraphs into paragraphs. I usually don't bother to read a paragraph if it exceeds four lines. At the same time, it is best to leave a blank line between each paragraph, otherwise it will look tired. 2. Writing style. In fact, there are no special problems if you look closely at the author's writing, but at the same time, there is nothing particularly outstanding, and there is no particularly valuable text worth thinking about. The narration is like a historian's writing style. In some places, using God's perspective to briefly mention it reduces the difficulty of writing, but it also reduces the readability. In terms of symbols, I hope to use the regular shift+6 for the ellipsis. 3. Plot. I have to say that this is the biggest problem, because I didn't look closely, but I can also find that the plot is a bit confusing. And when it comes to writing about war, women often fall into the trap of writing about war. 4. Characters. The portrayal of the characters is not detailed enough, and the characters' personalities are not outstanding enough. Lack of detailed description of psychological activities.
Hey, I understand. No need to revise.
Not bad, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to the exciting content below.
It's very beautifully written, so don't be fooled.
It seems that everyone has to suffer some setbacks before they can grow.
Spread flowers spread flowers Don't forget, abuse and abuse
This article is quite interesting, why is it not updated? ? ? Doudou, don't just write about Weiyang, fill this hole with some dirt! ! !
Come and see...
The fairy is here, the little fox will be in danger = =
Haha, that's cool. Did you run in the wrong direction? Did Xiaobai forget Xiao Cao's children's shoes?
As soon as I had some feeling, this section was gone. At the end of this section, I felt like something was missing.
So touching! ! ! ! !
Yo West! This is youth! Youth! My blood is boiling~~ Hurry up to the next chapter!
-.- Shu's mother also has a childlike face... Tianshan's childlike mother... Tianshan's mother? Puff. . . .
= =+Aizen appears
Pfft... Iron Head. . . Add in Tiedan'er, and the whole thing will be a gathering of rural teenagers-"= Who am I? I have lost my memory! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wow Kaka~~~~~~~~~Hanhan is jealous~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Damn, your articles haven't been updated for several weeks. Looking forward to it Please update the article quickly
What is the setting of the eulogist? I'm very curious~~ Is it a healing nanny similar to a priest?
Isn't it a bit cruel to treat that Liu Kai?
What will those who write novels do if you do this? This makes others feel comfortable, but what about the author? Have you thought about the author's thoughts? I also write novels. Although my writing is not very good, I also know that coding is very hard. Sometimes I can't come up with a good structure for several hours. Plus, it takes time to revise. It's so shameful for you! I don't intend to give you negative marks, and I know you may have good intentions, but please consider the author's ideas before posting in the future. Your actions have violated the law, so please delete the post as soon as possible!
Eh, how disgusting~ The truck driver watched him fall asleep with "gentle" eyes. Is this truck driver the reincarnation of Hagrid~
Alas, in the heat of passion, this disaster will come. . . . .
Dear, are you still there? Already going from one final exam to another orz...
The author will update soon, I really want to read it