This is my first time writing a novel. Please give me your criticism and advice. I would like to thank you with all my heartfelt thanks. Your advice is the driving force for me to move forward.
The writing is not beautiful enough, the story structure is reasonable, and the narrative is protracted and cumbersome. I really don't know. I have read many other people's works, but when it comes to writing my own, it's actually two different things.
It is said that novels come from life. The first novel has the shadow of the author's own life. If you don't know how to write novels, don't even think about writing martial arts, fantasy, etc.
When you say you love me, I believe you will come back to me one day!