A short story that was once rated by a classmate as not exciting enough!
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...——|||Hey... Are you lazy——|||
Very nice, I like this type of writing! Come on, author! Don't give up, you will get more and more readers!
Well written, meow(>^ω^<)
With less narration, the story will have more flavor.
I'm here to see you again, come on. I found out that you are on the Black Eight Immortals list. How is the recent rise?
"A friend of my sister's was left behind by the Moskva River. She will take a flight back to China tomorrow, but she can't take him with her, so she came to say goodbye to him today. It's not that she doesn't have friends, she just doesn't want to be disturbed when she says goodbye." ………… Ahhhh, so sad
I really like the big article! The writing is very good and the story is tense! I like little brother Jing Yi and the witty Luo Ying!
Love the sweet interaction between the two! The article is really good! Great work, I will continue to follow the article!
Once you enter the base, you will be as deep as the sea. From now on, you will be a passerby.
Finally Li Goudan appears! ! ! But having said that, when I wrote down the stories I told, it turned out to be quite few, so I can't afford to waste my time expressing myself in words. It took me two happy hours on the way to chemistry class T^T
...——|||Hey... Are you lazy——|||
Very nice, I like this type of writing! Come on, author! Don't give up, you will get more and more readers!
Well written, meow(>^ω^<)
With less narration, the story will have more flavor.
I'm here to see you again, come on. I found out that you are on the Black Eight Immortals list. How is the recent rise?
"A friend of my sister's was left behind by the Moskva River. She will take a flight back to China tomorrow, but she can't take him with her, so she came to say goodbye to him today. It's not that she doesn't have friends, she just doesn't want to be disturbed when she says goodbye." ………… Ahhhh, so sad
I really like the big article! The writing is very good and the story is tense! I like little brother Jing Yi and the witty Luo Ying! Love the sweet interaction between the two! The article is really good! Great work, I will continue to follow the article!
Once you enter the base, you will be as deep as the sea. From now on, you will be a passerby.
Finally Li Goudan appears! ! ! But having said that, when I wrote down the stories I told, it turned out to be quite few, so I can't afford to waste my time expressing myself in words. It took me two happy hours on the way to chemistry class T^T
I am a big fan of this article, haha. .
Come on~~~~~~~~~~