The author has something to say first: practice writing^^
The article adopts the cross-type first person point of view, that is, the male protagonist is in the first person in one chapter, and the heroine is in the first person in the next chapter. Cross back and forth. It seems more troublesome. But practice writing.
Please understand.
Under the setting sun, the earthen city wall was covered with roses, each one seeming to subvert the loess that built the city wall.
That day, I saw you, bending down, taking all the gold cakes from the hands of the servants beside you, and giving them piece by piece to the refugees squatting outside the city wall.
Just in this scene alone, I feel that the roses are not as good as the embroidery on your skirt, and the sunset is not as good as your colored cheeks. Although I am sitting on a horse looking at flowers, it is not as beautiful as the moment when you smile and talk beautifully.
I rushed to the battlefield in a dusty way, not daring to stop. I just remembered that scene with all my heart. On the way to the battlefield, I thought, if I win this battle, I must tell my father that I want you to be my wife.
Ten short days, a long life.