In order to ensure the legitimate rights and interests of the Humanities Society's "Harry Potter 5", the existing translations are only available within the scope of the website for readers to learn and communicate in English. Because the Chinese translation will be available three months later, Huo Da had to translate it myself. I would like to thank all the netizens who helped me for their opinions during the process. Of course, there are still many immature places, and everyone is welcome to give me your advice.
I will gradually sort out the messy layout. There are still many shortcomings in the first four chapters, and I will correct them one by one. The only thing I don't have now is time.
Chapter 9 is complete
Reader comments
Cheer yourself up
Saying nothing after confessing is the most hurtful thing
1/4/14 My heart very mix, today i just quarrel with a crook online, because GG has been ashame, i feel sad, now i see GG in here, i am glad, thank you
The ghost is a disease! Got a cure!
Looks good, I hope there will be more updates
At this time, I was just 7 months old. Time flies so fast.
Guliang's copywriting is more stream-of-consciousness and lyrical. It can only be seen that he is devoted to 27 wholeheartedly. There is no direction in the setting and characters, and it looks a bit confusing.
From a textual point of view, Guliang's skills are not mature enough. First of all, the usage of "" and "" is not clear. Guliang can carefully look at the adjectives that modify the verb, and it should be "". There are also some words that are a bit unclear. For example, in Chapter 1, Tsuna said, "Let Raishou go alone to destroy the Feirus family." When Lei Shou arrived at the mission location, he was not allowed to let anyone know that this was an order. I don't know how these related words are used. Does Guliang think it's strange to connect sentences like this? There is also a sense of inconsistency in some terms, such as in Chapter 4 [After Tsuna calmed down, he sighed and looked up at a 45-degree angle and said to Bai Lan] The description of looking up at a 45-degree angle is basically used to complain now. Gu Liang is trying to describe real sadness. It feels weird to use this sincerity here.
In terms of characters, in Gu Liang's setting, A Gang's character has changed a lot after inheriting the BOSS. This is a common joke and is understandable. But why is the tone of voice so strange? [It's very scary] [I'm being polite if I let you eat it, but it's still like this. You are so greedy~Greedy~] This kind of tone would never come from either Tsuna, the good-for-nothing, or Tsuna, the villain.
After reading it, I felt that the plot was a bit boring. Gang sacrificed himself to help Reborn regain his original appearance. Firstly, he did not see the necessity of sacrificing his life for this. Secondly, he did not think that Gang, who had become the leader, would not be able to see Reborn's feelings clearly. The author Gu Liang tried hard to create a tragic atmosphere, but Wo felt it was a little deliberate.
As a family, I wish Gu Liang better and better as he writes.
By12 years unmarked | ChangpingpuGuangya
The story is so touching. Things have changed and people have changed. Time is gone and time flies. Why. . . . . .
It's great. It's very well written. I want to ask about Feng Ying's high kung fu. Who is his master? How did he spend his childhood? He also has three children...
That Young Master Rong is really an arrogant worm, but what Mary Sue said is true, especially Grandma Qiong Yao's dramas are basically Mary Sues. That's 100% lethality
Fuji is indeed very shady.
Here we call foreign daughter-in-law a guest, and a local daughter-in-law is called daughter-in-law, but the dialect doesn't sound like the Mandarin daughter-in-law at all. There is also a more vulgar name. It sounds to me like the pronunciation of "Mama", which probably means "Mazi". After speaking Mandarin for so many years, I don't understand many words in my hometown dialect. I still get laughed at if I ask my family.
It's been a week and finally updated! Junjun, please be more diligent.
I haven't finished watching Twilight. I only know the male and female protagonists. What should I do?
Oh, is it possible to get rid of Marisu who requires multiple people to go out and approach slowly? [Watch it with interest
Actually, if I have an opinion, I would just update it more often.
It's best to update several times a day
Otherwise it won't be enough to watch. . . . .
(*^__^*) Hee hee... Then I felt that Xiao Dagger was really pitiful. . . ~~O(>_<)o ~~
Oops, what a stupid and naturally stupid person ∑ (O_O;)
The life-and-death love between the heroine and the hero is touching. It seems that whether they are mortals or gods, they have the same desire for love.
It seems that I should pay more attention to Shen's part and describe it in more detail.
I feel like Tongtong will be tortured terribly T-T. Author, if you help Tongtong be tortured to death,
I'll slap you away with one paw (@^^@)
Cheer yourself up
Saying nothing after confessing is the most hurtful thing
1/4/14 My heart very mix, today i just quarrel with a crook online, because GG has been ashame, i feel sad, now i see GG in here, i am glad, thank you
The ghost is a disease! Got a cure!
Looks good, I hope there will be more updates
At this time, I was just 7 months old. Time flies so fast.
Guliang's copywriting is more stream-of-consciousness and lyrical. It can only be seen that he is devoted to 27 wholeheartedly. There is no direction in the setting and characters, and it looks a bit confusing. From a textual point of view, Guliang's skills are not mature enough. First of all, the usage of "" and "" is not clear. Guliang can carefully look at the adjectives that modify the verb, and it should be "". There are also some words that are a bit unclear. For example, in Chapter 1, Tsuna said, "Let Raishou go alone to destroy the Feirus family." When Lei Shou arrived at the mission location, he was not allowed to let anyone know that this was an order. I don't know how these related words are used. Does Guliang think it's strange to connect sentences like this? There is also a sense of inconsistency in some terms, such as in Chapter 4 [After Tsuna calmed down, he sighed and looked up at a 45-degree angle and said to Bai Lan] The description of looking up at a 45-degree angle is basically used to complain now. Gu Liang is trying to describe real sadness. It feels weird to use this sincerity here. In terms of characters, in Gu Liang's setting, A Gang's character has changed a lot after inheriting the BOSS. This is a common joke and is understandable. But why is the tone of voice so strange? [It's very scary] [I'm being polite if I let you eat it, but it's still like this. You are so greedy~Greedy~] This kind of tone would never come from either Tsuna, the good-for-nothing, or Tsuna, the villain. After reading it, I felt that the plot was a bit boring. Gang sacrificed himself to help Reborn regain his original appearance. Firstly, he did not see the necessity of sacrificing his life for this. Secondly, he did not think that Gang, who had become the leader, would not be able to see Reborn's feelings clearly. The author Gu Liang tried hard to create a tragic atmosphere, but Wo felt it was a little deliberate. As a family, I wish Gu Liang better and better as he writes. By12 years unmarked | ChangpingpuGuangya
The story is so touching. Things have changed and people have changed. Time is gone and time flies. Why. . . . . .
It's great. It's very well written. I want to ask about Feng Ying's high kung fu. Who is his master? How did he spend his childhood? He also has three children...
That Young Master Rong is really an arrogant worm, but what Mary Sue said is true, especially Grandma Qiong Yao's dramas are basically Mary Sues. That's 100% lethality
Fuji is indeed very shady.
Here we call foreign daughter-in-law a guest, and a local daughter-in-law is called daughter-in-law, but the dialect doesn't sound like the Mandarin daughter-in-law at all. There is also a more vulgar name. It sounds to me like the pronunciation of "Mama", which probably means "Mazi". After speaking Mandarin for so many years, I don't understand many words in my hometown dialect. I still get laughed at if I ask my family.
It's been a week and finally updated! Junjun, please be more diligent.
I haven't finished watching Twilight. I only know the male and female protagonists. What should I do?
Oh, is it possible to get rid of Marisu who requires multiple people to go out and approach slowly? [Watch it with interest
Actually, if I have an opinion, I would just update it more often. It's best to update several times a day Otherwise it won't be enough to watch. . . . . (*^__^*) Hee hee... Then I felt that Xiao Dagger was really pitiful. . . ~~O(>_<)o ~~
Oops, what a stupid and naturally stupid person ∑ (O_O;)
The life-and-death love between the heroine and the hero is touching. It seems that whether they are mortals or gods, they have the same desire for love.
It seems that I should pay more attention to Shen's part and describe it in more detail.
I feel like Tongtong will be tortured terribly T-T. Author, if you help Tongtong be tortured to death, I'll slap you away with one paw (@^^@)