It feels pretty good... But the Emperor Qianlong of the Tang Dynasty... This... Is dizzy...
The character introductions are pretty good~~
Later, when you understand 8, you can check it out~~
OH~~~OH~~~OH~~~~~
Come on and write~~~
When summarizing, most of the people's names were changed, right? Can you add the original name?
What about the next chapter?~~~~~
1. The text description pays too much attention to superficial things, and there are too many narratives that are useless to the plot.
2. The character dialogue is too superficial and there are many unreasonable things. I hope the author will think carefully about whether such dialogue will occur in reality after writing it, and then revise it. I think the article will be much better than it is now.
3. Pay attention to the layout. Do not use non-standard punctuation marks. The paragraphs can be made clearer. The current article is very tiring to read.
I hope the author will work hard and make more progress.
Jie Yuchen, Mr. Huaer
It makes me want to continue reading. Please update more quickly.
............
It really scared me. Four years have passed since the 2004 pitfall. I must have given up on it.
Hey
It feels pretty good... But the Emperor Qianlong of the Tang Dynasty... This... Is dizzy...
The character introductions are pretty good~~ Later, when you understand 8, you can check it out~~ OH~~~OH~~~OH~~~~~ Come on and write~~~
When summarizing, most of the people's names were changed, right? Can you add the original name?
What about the next chapter?~~~~~
1. The text description pays too much attention to superficial things, and there are too many narratives that are useless to the plot. 2. The character dialogue is too superficial and there are many unreasonable things. I hope the author will think carefully about whether such dialogue will occur in reality after writing it, and then revise it. I think the article will be much better than it is now. 3. Pay attention to the layout. Do not use non-standard punctuation marks. The paragraphs can be made clearer. The current article is very tiring to read. I hope the author will work hard and make more progress.
Jie Yuchen, Mr. Huaer
It makes me want to continue reading. Please update more quickly.
............
It really scared me. Four years have passed since the 2004 pitfall. I must have given up on it. Hey