Some of them are a bit difficult to read, so keep up the good work!
Uh-huh, I actually fell into a ten-thousand-year pit! ! T_T
Wave a small handkerchief. I am coming. . . . . . . . . Have you added me?
I want to say that vomiting is healthier! The heroine is so useless!
Beibei, Nannan are ready to eat~
The sun is so strong that it is almost sharp. Through the jade-covered purple bamboo curtain, the light path is like a sharp blade, and the knife can cut clearly.
There is less than a foot of grassland between us, but it is like a thousand miles of boiling sea.
These two sentences are very beautiful~~
I think your writing style may be more suitable for short stories, but long and gorgeous writing will be a bit of a drag.
He was actually kidnapped by a hoe just like that...
Sprinkle flowers. . . Sit back and wait for the next chapter. . He Xiaoqing. . Very nice name
I hope you will continue to work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and you will definitely write better articles in the future O(∩_∩)O We are looking forward to it~ [I hope there will be a sequel! (>_<)]
Come on ↖(^ω^)↗ Stay tuned for updates
Before I complain, please let me cry for a while, adjust my mood, and make sure I won't say bad words, so as not to hurt your heart, princess.
Alright.
First, let's look at your punctuation and wording errors, Princess.
For example:
"The goddess's smile is frozen in front of me..." Solid..., Frozen like a ghost! Please tell me do you know in what context solidification is used! Are the people with frozen smiles in novels usually the good guys? Princess, tell me! This should be called "disappear"! Princess!
"... Fatty Wang's house? No, no, no, that kind of place is too dangerous. There is a possibility of being eaten by him at any time... Ahem, it couldn't be Menyou Ping's house, right? In this way, you can have a glimpse of his majestic face, and it's okay... Oh, it's so evil~~~" Princess, I can tell you responsibly
Fatty, he... Absolutely! Wouldn't! Fall in love with you!
By the way, you are also in ecstasy~
~The explanation in Du Niang is: used to express a range, such as: 10~14 years old, 600~700. In daily text communication, it is used to express a certain range. For example, in text messages, letters or instant chats, A~B is often used to express the range from A to B, such as: 1~3, C~D, etc.
Princess, did your Chinese teacher die early?
There is also a name: Xie Yuchen [Xiaohua, are you changing your name?
"I almost forgot that this girl of yours is a road idiot." Road idiot? Princess, are you going to die in a fight? It's so scary.
Jealous Huo Xiuxiu...
Xiu Xiu wants to be beautiful, have status, and be jealous of all kinds! Princess, places outside the mental hospital are too dangerous, let's go back [Director, yes, it's me. That lunatic was caught back, um, you're welcome]
"'Hey, Sister Mo got up early~' Huo Xiuxiu came in without seeing anyone else, walked around my room, looking here and there. "Xiuxiu is a lady, do you think everyone is as rude as you? Princess? [Princess, come on, let's learn how to use honorifics first, shall we?]
"I don't know what the original relationship between Huo Xiuxiu and me was... How do I get along with this!" Princess, do you still remember what you said before, don't you? Come on, let me help you recall. "I spent some time recalling things from the past, but these basic memories appeared in my mind smoothly." Wait, another language problem, princess, are you really in the third grade of junior high school? Did your Chinese teacher cry when he saw it?
... There are too many flaws in this chapter, so I don't want to complain about it.
"Two hours later... I finally saw Wu Sansheng's group of people coming. Please be more active in fighting in the future, okay?! Leave me here for two hours!!!!" It's your honor for Third Master to make you wait for two hours. Third Master can be your grandfather and calls himself sister [Hello princess, please check the express delivery from Mr. Wu Sansheng of Hangzhou]
"The first thing I saw was a handsome young man with a bookish face. His face was full of excitement and joy~ This is Wu Xie, right? This is indeed his first time fighting, and he looks like a loser and weak..." Hehehehe [Hello princess, please check the package given to you by Wu Xie's die-hard fan]
"There was an older man following him, and the two of them kept whispering... Judging from the cunning look on the old guy's face, you knew it was Uncle San~ Wu, San, Sheng!" Typo + symbol error [Princess, "~" and "," are not used in this way, please refer to Baidu for specific usage, thank you]
Every sentence is a joke, right? [Princess, your Chinese teacher said she quit, please hire someone else]
Every punctuation mark is used incorrectly. [Princess, the squiggly line wants to fight you to the death, do you accept the challenge?]
Let's talk about writing again
In order to compare your writing style, I specially looked for my third-grade elementary school composition book. The style is so similar that I burst into tears. Princess, you will be eliminated from the high school entrance examination like this. You don't have a single clue. Your account is just like a running account. The deduction of points is so severe. How can you fix it?
Finally
I want to say
I really want to make bricks
I really want to get negative points
So sad...
What is Skylark here for? Miss Mo, please tell me...
Didn't you agree to despise gays? How can you expect me to trust Sister Su...
The essay I wrote in the third year of junior high school was the same as mine in the third grade... After reading this essay, the Chinese teacher never said that my essay was not good.
Boss, I want one kilogram of brains, one kilogram of dog eyes, and one kilogram of sunglasses, thank you...
Since he returned to Japan after only two chapters, why did the author Sang add a line about China? It's a little strange.
Is the author-san's purpose to add some new settings to the heroine or to add some difficulties to Urahara-san?
The beginning is quite interesting.
抽打能蹦出更新吗？
Author, since Zhong Guo said that Tian Tian's biological parents' surname is Tian, then Miao Hong is Tian Tian's biological aunt, shouldn't Miao Hong be Tian Hong?
哈，我也看到过，来西安带我走
到更新了，天儿都等冷了
Hey... Why are there so many people seeking death these days?
I haven't seen you for a long time, and so many updates, so happy. Originally, I started to have a blast every minute to get some ideas, but unluckily, I was beaten by others and rescued first, and then the protagonist flew away. From the perspective of the protagonist, it is not a be, it is a change. . . The idea is a bit big. . .
I don't know where I saw a sentence, but I thought it was right: People who are not interested in themselves are always aloof.
In fact, the female supporting role, Miss Wang, is also unfortunate.
It feels weird...
This is so sudden! He doesn't even have any memory of his previous life?
The writing is very delicate~~Maruka-kun, you are the stepmother!
卧槽卧槽 果然是狂撒糖~~ 不过好棒哈哈哈 蛀牙也要坚决吃糖！吃不到肉就吃糖！！ 虽然憋七十年不大可能 不过果然还是希望中尉是憋上七十年的【抠鼻。
Some of them are a bit difficult to read, so keep up the good work!
Uh-huh, I actually fell into a ten-thousand-year pit! ! T_T
Wave a small handkerchief. I am coming. . . . . . . . . Have you added me?
I want to say that vomiting is healthier! The heroine is so useless!
Beibei, Nannan are ready to eat~
The sun is so strong that it is almost sharp. Through the jade-covered purple bamboo curtain, the light path is like a sharp blade, and the knife can cut clearly. There is less than a foot of grassland between us, but it is like a thousand miles of boiling sea. These two sentences are very beautiful~~ I think your writing style may be more suitable for short stories, but long and gorgeous writing will be a bit of a drag.
He was actually kidnapped by a hoe just like that...
Sprinkle flowers. . . Sit back and wait for the next chapter. . He Xiaoqing. . Very nice name
I hope you will continue to work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ and you will definitely write better articles in the future O(∩_∩)O We are looking forward to it~ [I hope there will be a sequel! (>_<)]
Come on ↖(^ω^)↗ Stay tuned for updates
Before I complain, please let me cry for a while, adjust my mood, and make sure I won't say bad words, so as not to hurt your heart, princess. Alright. First, let's look at your punctuation and wording errors, Princess. For example: "The goddess's smile is frozen in front of me..." Solid..., Frozen like a ghost! Please tell me do you know in what context solidification is used! Are the people with frozen smiles in novels usually the good guys? Princess, tell me! This should be called "disappear"! Princess! "... Fatty Wang's house? No, no, no, that kind of place is too dangerous. There is a possibility of being eaten by him at any time... Ahem, it couldn't be Menyou Ping's house, right? In this way, you can have a glimpse of his majestic face, and it's okay... Oh, it's so evil~~~" Princess, I can tell you responsibly Fatty, he... Absolutely! Wouldn't! Fall in love with you! By the way, you are also in ecstasy~ ~The explanation in Du Niang is: used to express a range, such as: 10~14 years old, 600~700. In daily text communication, it is used to express a certain range. For example, in text messages, letters or instant chats, A~B is often used to express the range from A to B, such as: 1~3, C~D, etc. Princess, did your Chinese teacher die early? There is also a name: Xie Yuchen [Xiaohua, are you changing your name? "I almost forgot that this girl of yours is a road idiot." Road idiot? Princess, are you going to die in a fight? It's so scary. Jealous Huo Xiuxiu... Xiu Xiu wants to be beautiful, have status, and be jealous of all kinds! Princess, places outside the mental hospital are too dangerous, let's go back [Director, yes, it's me. That lunatic was caught back, um, you're welcome] "'Hey, Sister Mo got up early~' Huo Xiuxiu came in without seeing anyone else, walked around my room, looking here and there. "Xiuxiu is a lady, do you think everyone is as rude as you? Princess? [Princess, come on, let's learn how to use honorifics first, shall we?] "I don't know what the original relationship between Huo Xiuxiu and me was... How do I get along with this!" Princess, do you still remember what you said before, don't you? Come on, let me help you recall. "I spent some time recalling things from the past, but these basic memories appeared in my mind smoothly." Wait, another language problem, princess, are you really in the third grade of junior high school? Did your Chinese teacher cry when he saw it? ... There are too many flaws in this chapter, so I don't want to complain about it. "Two hours later... I finally saw Wu Sansheng's group of people coming. Please be more active in fighting in the future, okay?! Leave me here for two hours!!!!" It's your honor for Third Master to make you wait for two hours. Third Master can be your grandfather and calls himself sister [Hello princess, please check the express delivery from Mr. Wu Sansheng of Hangzhou] "The first thing I saw was a handsome young man with a bookish face. His face was full of excitement and joy~ This is Wu Xie, right? This is indeed his first time fighting, and he looks like a loser and weak..." Hehehehe [Hello princess, please check the package given to you by Wu Xie's die-hard fan] "There was an older man following him, and the two of them kept whispering... Judging from the cunning look on the old guy's face, you knew it was Uncle San~ Wu, San, Sheng!" Typo + symbol error [Princess, "~" and "," are not used in this way, please refer to Baidu for specific usage, thank you] Every sentence is a joke, right? [Princess, your Chinese teacher said she quit, please hire someone else] Every punctuation mark is used incorrectly. [Princess, the squiggly line wants to fight you to the death, do you accept the challenge?] Let's talk about writing again In order to compare your writing style, I specially looked for my third-grade elementary school composition book. The style is so similar that I burst into tears. Princess, you will be eliminated from the high school entrance examination like this. You don't have a single clue. Your account is just like a running account. The deduction of points is so severe. How can you fix it? Finally I want to say I really want to make bricks I really want to get negative points So sad... What is Skylark here for? Miss Mo, please tell me... Didn't you agree to despise gays? How can you expect me to trust Sister Su... The essay I wrote in the third year of junior high school was the same as mine in the third grade... After reading this essay, the Chinese teacher never said that my essay was not good. Boss, I want one kilogram of brains, one kilogram of dog eyes, and one kilogram of sunglasses, thank you...
Since he returned to Japan after only two chapters, why did the author Sang add a line about China? It's a little strange. Is the author-san's purpose to add some new settings to the heroine or to add some difficulties to Urahara-san?
The beginning is quite interesting.
抽打能蹦出更新吗？
Author, since Zhong Guo said that Tian Tian's biological parents' surname is Tian, then Miao Hong is Tian Tian's biological aunt, shouldn't Miao Hong be Tian Hong?
哈，我也看到过，来西安带我走
到更新了，天儿都等冷了
Hey... Why are there so many people seeking death these days?
I haven't seen you for a long time, and so many updates, so happy. Originally, I started to have a blast every minute to get some ideas, but unluckily, I was beaten by others and rescued first, and then the protagonist flew away. From the perspective of the protagonist, it is not a be, it is a change. . . The idea is a bit big. . .
I don't know where I saw a sentence, but I thought it was right: People who are not interested in themselves are always aloof.
In fact, the female supporting role, Miss Wang, is also unfortunate.
终于追上进度了，虽然好多被锁的章节没有看到，但是依然不影响我喜爱此文的程度。希望作者早些更文o(^▽^)o小小声如果能看到被锁章节那就更完美了
It looks great, I must finish writing it.
Come back, make up points, I am Xiao Leng
当电灯泡的感受我都懂……(?_?)
Wenwen is very good. Is Chen Ning going to attack or receive?