Re-edited. . . Poof
Actually no, just modify and modify
"Revise" means that the content of the story will not change, only the sentences will change; and most of the sentences will not change, only a few sentences will change - the writing style may change.
Of course, maybe I will add a little plot on a whim.
Moreover, I plan to lock the third party only on Gu Se, and leave out the rest.
In other words, it is written entirely from the ancient perspective, and the dialogue between Xiao Fang and Chu Xiang will not be written. (This seems to be a bit difficult, so I couldn't help but want to explain it. It was very difficult to change the first chapter)
So, if you have read the previous article, don't follow this. If you still like it, come and take a look after I finish writing it.
If you haven't read the previous article, don't follow it yet, because I won't update it and you'll get bored if you wait too long.
In addition, the reason why I want to revise is because "when I look back at my article, I feel that I can't stand it anymore, and my only thought is: rewrite!"
But I didn't want to change it beyond recognition on the original basis, so I had to write another article.
So I have to thank all the readers who have read "X Heart", thank you for your hard work, really.
[The story of Gu Se mastering Dialect Xin step by step]