[W-Inds. Qinglong] Adventure

The fragrance of free and ownerless flowers ——Impressions of "Seven Crazy Nights" When I first saw Qiye, I felt an indescribable joy. The opening sentence, "This study is like a little mushroom, growing lonely and amused in a damp and dark corner" immediately makes the article exude a fresh and bourgeois sentiment with a little pretentiousness. Although it is said to be petty bourgeoisie and pretentious, there is a sense of reality that is within reach. Things that are too far away are out of reach, just as empty as the truth. It's too bourgeois and pretentious, decadent and confusing, and not to my liking as a person whose life is already decadent enough. And this low-key and gorgeous freshness just caught my eye. Modern Zhan Zhao, who has seen the rise and fall of a thousand years, and has accumulated the ups and downs of the Five Dynasties and the shame of the Qing army's entry into the Opium War, naturally brings with him a selfishness and slickness that does not belong to the Southern Xia of the Song Dynasty. He would still say, "It's worth waiting with your life for such a peaceful country and people's peace." Even in modern society, he is a good public servant of the people, but he no longer says, "Those who are clean will themselves be clean." Not only because of the reputation and morality that had faded after thousands of years of success and failure, but also because there was a figure in his heart that he wanted to wait for. The Seven Nights of Madness is actually a piece of white paper, written down with seven words that can change that person's destiny. It was the opportunity obtained seven times to prevent the soul that belonged to the Song Dynasty a thousand years ago from being destroyed into ashes. Underneath the cheerful words, the story told is clearly a little heavy. The same thing, but with a different mentality, the results may be completely different. For example, he loses his memory, loses his martial arts, and ends up in an environment that is completely unfamiliar to him, just like the guard Zhan in the article. Mr. Gongsun also ridiculed him as "Watermelon Taro Syndrome". Mr. Zhan not only had reason to roar with fierceness but also had reason to be aggressive and want to use his existing internal strength to develop good kung fu. This optimistic and comfortable Mr. Zhan shed a handful of tears just because of the acupuncture and allergies. An incident in which the best police officer in the Song Dynasty lost his ability to work was left unchecked amidst the lively laughter and laughter. This gives the article an open-minded and comfortable flavor. "From heaven to hell, I passed by the human world" is a familiar joke, but when used in the article, it does not feel stiff and spliced, as if it should be part of the text. This ability to use buzzwords so skillfully, naturally and naturally makes me sincerely admire Xiaoxi's talent. Zhan Zhao, who unknowingly traveled back through time and space, obviously no longer felt as brisk as before after learning the reason for his time travel. "They have all crossed the long river of thousands of years. But the young man in white clothes is still on the other side, and he can no longer see the warm spring." It is still a light and smooth sentence, but it has a meaningful sadness settled in the blood - yes, sadness and remembrance. The proud, sincere and childish boy shown to us through Zhan Zhao's first time travel is so beautiful, but why has he lost his warmth? He wants him to be reincarnated again, just like every reader of us who loves him in this world. We use words to commemorate his beauty, hoping that they can convey our blessings and affection to him through thousands of years. Zhan Zhao has seven chances. Use it once and less, but there is still enough hope. What follows this urgency and hope is that Zhan Zhao wants to protect Bai Yutang and wants him to learn to protect himself. It is better to teach a man to fish than to teach him to fish. "I couldn't protect you a thousand years ago, and now I might wear it after sleeping. If you don't learn these things, what will you do?" It was still like a drop of water, but it contained deep uneasiness and expectation. You want to take good care of him without staining your heart, and you also want to take care of his warm life. ——Even if this person is a lunatic who would rather die than admit defeat. The fragrance of free and ownerless flowers is a sentence that suddenly popped up when I was writing a review. Freedom is the spirit of freedom and ease between words. No owner is the joy of knowledge traveling through ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, and at your fingertips. The fragrance of flowers is the strong emotion flowing between the lines between Zhan Zhao and Bai Yutang under the framework formed by the two. "Like a calm stream, stretching through the mountains and rivers. Just like the bright moon in the sky, it waxes and wanes silently. " These two simple sentences convey both a sense of lightness and freedom, as well as a trickle of regret that has hurt the past several times in this life. An aftertaste that makes people unable to put it down. So to be honest, I really like the article. Finding faults is mostly just a thorn in the side of the egg. There are always some thorns. But I can't find any fault with the text. Here, I can only talk about rhythm. The most practical worry is that Zhan Zhao, the main text of Chapter 14, only slept twice. With this and the frequency of the author's monthly updates, I am really worried about the date of the conclusion. I'm also worried that the next five time travels will seem a bit insignificant compared to the second time. Well, Zhan Zhao's second time travel was also unusually long. From Mingyue Tower Road to Mount Tai, from the martial arts tournament to Lin Feilun. Lin Feilun's golden thread skills really make people think of Sky Tower. The bookstore owner reminded Zhan Zhao that the person named Lin was the key. Then I think the clues can probably shed some light on it. It's just that in my opinion, there are many parts of this time travel that don't need to be written in detail. For example, the waiter who delivered the letter at the beginning, the recruitment of workers in Mingyue Building, and especially the ordering in the inn later, I think they can be written more briefly. The first two may be helpful in shaping Zhan Zhao's image, but the ordering section feels redundant. It's not that the plot alone isn't enjoyable. It's just that the beauty of warming wine and killing Hua Xiong lies in the still-warm glass of wine, and in this imaginary space. I feel that Qiye is not a completely narrative story. It has a stream of consciousness component that pulls time, space and emotions. The jumping blank space and clear priorities of the complex may be the part that can be improved so far in the article. Looking forward to what's to come next XD Laugh, let's stop writing irresponsible comments here. (Damn! This is so cheating!!) The following are my reading HC notes: Freedom - smart words When Zhan Zhao saw Qilu Study Studio for the first time, he felt that the study was like a small mushroom growing lonely and amused in a damp and dark corner. <--Hey, the description of this mushroom is amazing right from the start. Daxin doesn't explain. This time he fell asleep very quickly, as if he were on a sailing ship with a favorable wind. With a gentle push, the boat entered the ocean and headed towards the unknown distance. The first thing you see is sheep clustered in white clouds in the clear sky. <--A very touching description. The raging pride is like three thousand cavalry suddenly breaking through the ice river, the fighting spirit is so violent that the strong wind blows through the sky. The green leaves are thick and shaded, and the tall and low willows tremble in it. <--The silver bottle is broken, water slurry bursts out, and the cavalry stands out with swords and guns. There was a thunderbolt, the hills jumped, and the stone door of the cave opened with a bang. At this time, the wooden rafters and tiles of Kaifeng Mansion played a very good role in setting off the atmosphere. The sunlight shone in slantingly, making the inner hall unclear. A gentle breeze passed through, and the copper bell hanging on the corner of the beam jingled happily. Zhan Zhao walked on the street and felt that everything was new. He was really in the ancient city that had appeared in movies and TV series so many times. The wine flags are waving in the wind, the wooden houses and tiled houses beside the road, the craftsmen are shouting loudly, and the dyeing paintings are still wet on the satin hanging in the cloth shop. There is also the thick stone city wall squatting aside and the stone road covered with dark green moss stretching under the feet. <--The street scene drawn in white suddenly brings out the feeling of being there. There are not many words, but every word is essential. Like a calm stream, stretching through the mountains and rivers. Just like the bright moon in the sky, it waxes and wanes silently. <--Absolute praise without explanation Zhan Zhao's heart was as weak as a cart of swaying tofu. <--This touching feeling is so real! When old man Chen sent Zhan Zhao out, he patted him on the shoulder meaningfully and then returned to the house. The study door slowly closed, like the ending of a story. The world is long, unwilling to rise and fall, and another story is about to begin. <--The legend is over, but history has just begun. Sorry, I traveled through time orz As Zhan Zhao listened, the irritability in his heart rose like loess on the plateau, thick and depressing. Gongsun Ce pointed at his hand, and he realized that the water in the teacup had already overflowed, crisscrossing the dark wooden tabletop. <--The detailed description is great! The threads were drawn from the tail of the hidden weapon that Lin Feilun had shot before, and they overlapped each other densely on the ring to form a dense net. Bai Yutang was trapped in it like a peng with broken wings, struggling to advance or retreat. A sharp thread was close to his neck. With a slight movement, it became embedded in the flesh and shed a thin stream of blood. <--Copper Net Array version A... Or Dragon Gate Flying Armor version B? The atmosphere at the end of this chapter was captured very well! Masterless - a joke that comes easily To run or not to run, that is the question... <--Master Zhan can do it. "Little brother, this door is automatic. It will keep opening as long as you stand still. Do you want to come in? The air conditioning is gone!" <--The reality is within reach~~~ "You can actually find this book? Only those who are destined to find this book can find this book." Before Zhan Zhao started to laugh, Old Chen lowered his head again: "Since we are destined to be together, please apply for a membership card and I will give you a 20% discount." Zhan Zhao's romantic feelings were stifled. As a human being, don't be too capitalist... <--Does anyone often encounter this situation on the street? ! One second he was enjoying the sandalwood scent of someone, and the next he was lying on the hard yellow earth. One sentence puts it well... From heaven to hell, I passed through the world... One second he was sleeping in someone's arms, with a warm and fragrant nephrite. The next second his head turned into a wooden fish and he was forced to have an intimate relationship with the bedpost who was a wooden mallet. <--Contrast and emotion, Reiki Shenma can't explain it Therefore, the rescuers always have the habit of appearing a few seconds late. <--Truth is everywhere "Oh, things always have priorities. Some amnesias don't need to be treated at all. Does Xigua know his name is Xigua? As long as he can eat it." Squeezing out surplus value is probably like this, it's really dark... "Wei Zhan's case is quite special. He is like a fine watermelon, with all his internal strength and small red seeds, but he forgot that he can eat it." With a stroke of his pen, Mr. Gongsun wrote in thick ink - Watermelon Taro Syndrome. <--Zhou Bapi's face is unabashed, Mr. Gongsun, when did you become like this? ? (Laughing wildly!) During the Ming Dynasty of Emperor Renzong of the Song Dynasty, Zhan Huanwei once said: Anyone who does not take the ordinary path is just a floating cloud, and should be taken lightly. During the Mingdao period of Emperor Renzong of the Song Dynasty, Zhan Weiwei had a famous saying: Unless you have Shenzhou 7, don't challenge gravity. During the Ming Dynasty of Emperor Renzong of the Song Dynasty, Zhan Huwei once said: When the teacher is impatient, it is important to pretend to understand. <--Well, there is another sentence after this paragraph in the article. I think that sentence is a bit redundant, but I really like these three sentences! Gongsun Ce raised the toe of his shoe to Zhan Zhao: "I have only heard of Meng Hui's Qing Dynasty but not of Meng Hui's Song Dynasty." <--Pfft... Hey, clear through, clear through. He walked faster and faster - "bang", he hit the study door. "Holy shit! Isn't this an automatic door?" Zhan Zhao covered his forehead and cursed. The door of the study room popped open, and an old man with a beard in a long gown appeared at the open door: "Little brother, do you know that there is a power outage today? Come in." So Zhan Zhao followed him wordlessly. <--Looking at the children, they are all resentful because of the power outage at school~~ You can only tell the truth in a way that is easy to hear, but you cannot tell the truth that sounds good. <--All kinds of hits! ! Bai Yutang suddenly interrupted: "Zhan Zhao, you have amnesia, do you still remember how to ride a horse?" Zhan Zhao shook his head. Bai Yutang clapped his hands and said, "Then this donkey is perfect for you. You see, you can still keep your feet on the ground when you ride on it. You don't have to worry about falling off. It's so safe and convenient." Zhan Zhao was silent for a while, then sighed and said, "Okay, then. What's the name of this donkey?" Shang Ci replied: "Zhui Feng." Zhan Zhao sighed: "What a domineering name." Shang Ci Dese said, "That's right, Zhui Feng is a must-have for escaping." <--Laughing loudly~~ Zhan Zhao replied: "My surname is Wei.". The fat man then asked: "Wei what?" Zhan Zhao smiled as warmly as the spring breeze in March and said, "For no reason, my father's surname is Wei and my surname is Wei." <--There is no limit to ingenuity "If you don't spend the money, it's just a stone. If you don't spend the money, it's just paper. You have no money and no tickets. The gate is there, so I won't give you away." <--Domineering! Zhan Zhao was amazed: It turns out that loopholes in the system existed a thousand years ago. <--Oh, this sentence shines through again. Everyone present only heard Zhan Zhao say: "Don't offend me, otherwise I will turn you into a legend." The scene was silenced. Zhan Zhao then said: "Don't offend me, otherwise I'll hit you against the wall and you won't be able to pull it off." The scene fell silent. Zhan Zhao finally said: "Don't offend me, otherwise I will let you know what it means to die in a rhythmic manner." Only Zhan Zhao's gentle and magnetic voice floated repeatedly in the scene. Bai Yutang was silent for a while and asked Master Xingzheng: "Who taught him these words?" Master Xingzheng said: "I don't know, what's wrong?" Bai Yutang shook his head: "It's nothing, it's just that I haven't heard someone bragging in such a refreshing and refined manner for a long time." <--Da Liang~! Floral fragrance - strong emotional entanglement I saw him holding the sword and staring down at me, his features were indescribably delicate, he looked like a young and handsome young man. <--This sincere sentence is very concise and beautiful. It's like it's right in front of you. The frosty young man's expression wavered for a moment, then he quickly regained his composure and gave a surly smile: "Sir, I'm sorry, this big Song Dynasty cat was knocked unconscious by me." <--Apologetic anger has its own flavor. With pride and awkwardness. It really ignites the cleanliness and beauty of youth. The young man said, "I'm going back." His voice dropped like ice. But Zhan Zhao found it difficult to control himself from doing something. . He stood up, walked up to the boy, pinched his face and smiled from the bottom of his heart: "Yutang, you are so cute." After a short silence... Crack! Snap! Boom! . ——"Ah~~~~~~" There is a poem by Gongsun Ce that goes: You will gain wisdom by taking a cut, but guarding is nonsense... <--It is both emotional and immediately turns to a very truthful joke. This is actually a great love! Zhan Zhao immediately started to applaud: "Since ancient times, heroes have been born in young men, and Shaoxia Bai is truly the pillar of the country." Bai Yutang: "..." Everyone: "..." <--Master Zhan, you are so cheerful! ! A young man in white clothes sits on the thousands of tiles, and the crescent moon like a sickle hangs in the endless night. Ten miles of light surged slowly, reflecting the young man's eyebrows, which were more delicate than paintings, as if he would transform into an immortal in the blink of an eye. But the young man did not leave lightly after all. Zhan Zhao suddenly felt an inexplicable awkwardness. It's like you helped someone a little on a whim, but that person said: "Thank you, no need." A touch of alienation lingered in the air, and he suddenly poked you with a sharp thorn. At this moment, the boy and the moon share each other alone, like a wolf standing in the wilderness, their eyes always following the waxing and waning of the moon. In a space filled with silence and solemnity, he pursues the legends above the nine heavens, and it seems that mortals cannot enter his eyes. <--The amazing Xiaobai in Mr. Zhan's eyes~ Perhaps it was uncomfortable to sit down, so Bai Yutang stood up and stretched. The night wind blew his sleeves like ripples of clouds, and he said, "Zhan Zhao, you are usually good at everything, but everything is bad. Do you know?" <--There is nothing to say, emotion and truth are indispensable. Old Man Chen picked up the tea cup and smelled the tea: "Then it's over? The way he died was that his soul was scattered and he couldn't enter the reincarnation." Zhan Zhao's cup of tea suddenly tipped over, and brown tea stains stained the table, mottled like tears. He heard a slow and painful whine coming from his chest, like a wounded lion. He originally thought he could wait, no matter how many decades it took. He, Zhao Zhen, Ding Yuehua, Gongsun Ce, Four Gate Pillars, Master Bao, they all have crossed the long river of thousands of years. But the young man in white clothes and snow is still on the other side, and he can no longer see the warm spring. The world has experienced so many vicissitudes of life in the millennium, and has witnessed many changes in the mountains and rivers in the millennium. Beidou becomes old, and comets bid farewell to the horizon. It's really ridiculous that such a big world can't accommodate one person. The soul was crushed into dust and fell into the darkness, nowhere to be found. They are like two sides of a river, forever separated by a river... <--This paragraph is full of turbulence and cannot be explained. Zhan Zhao was shocked: "You actually don't know me?" Bai Yutang shook his head: "I have never known anyone who doesn't match my aesthetics. If you take a quick look, you will see that they are really not good." Zhan Zhao refused to give up: "Don't take a quick look, look at me carefully!" Bai Yutang looked at Zhan Zhao carefully for a few times, but still shook his head: "If you look carefully, you might as well take a quick look. <--Be cute and respect yourself! This kind of flirting is so touching! ! ! Zhan Zhao lay down on the bed in Bai Yutang: "Be born great and die under flowers. Miss Zeyan, let's do it!" " "It doesn't matter," Bai Yutang said, "I will be with you whether you have memories or not. " <--Only you~~~ It's like smelling the fishy wind with the smell of iron on the vast sea, like choking on the bitter dust on the top of the mountain. The skin and flesh are not damaged, but the heart is just depressed. <--It is different from the generosity that is laughed off in ordinary articles, or the stern anger and rebuttal. It is the sinking after the overwhelming anger, it is the worries that are not damaged but are annoying. What matters is not reputation, but the pride and passion for being recognized. Bai Yutang turned around, unconsciously raised his voice, and took a step forward: "You, are you still blaming me for causing trouble in Tokyo? " <--This sentence makes me gasp in admiration. I like how Bai Yutang cares so much about his childishness~~~~~! ! "You said, why doesn't anyone come to me for a drink? " <--This sentence is full of human sentiment. It's really bright to the extreme. He pulled Zhan Zhao from a high place to an ordinary place, from gentleness to bitterness. Just like the previous sentence, "The skin and flesh are intact, but the heart is just upset." "Complement each other. It reveals a strong and sincere flavor. "You are always worried about me, have you ever thought about yourself? If it weren't for the influence of the Tenth Palace Lord and others, we might not even be able to get a room tonight. This is very unmanly but it works, and I hope you remember it too. When one person is not strong enough, a strong background is needed. " Bai Yutang was stunned for a while and murmured: "I don't understand..." <--The four words "I don't understand" flashed by Xiaobai again! I really like the noob who says I don't understand. Because of his ego, truth, and because he doesn't bother to understand and care about the colorful intestines in people's stomachs. But Zhan Zhao wants him to learn to protect himself and survive. He hopes to change Bai Yutang's fate of losing his soul and being unable to enter reincarnation. Bai Yutang is a madman. Zhan Zhao thought he knew it earlier. A lunatic who has the guts to be cut into bloody pieces by steel wires but doesn't have the guts to say "I lost". <--Once again, I want to say that this noob is eye-catching! Others "Students don't understand what A. D. Means. They only know that Renzong is in power now, during the Ming Dao period. Why, Guard Zhan suddenly remembered? " <--Ahem, come on, catch a bug. Renzong is the temple name. The temple name was given after his death. (Don't complain, there is a legend in the Qiwu Realm that the ministers would call Renzong this way during his lifetime. Isn't it funny? He is nakedly cursing the emperor to die early!) There is a place that is as difficult and dangerous as thousands of rocks and ravines, and the roaring waves are roaring; there is a place that is as bright as the clear sky and broad clouds, and the west wind is roaring. It is the yellowest book on the page, and the stories of swords, swords, and shadows seem to be ups and downs, and the bloody storms are still lingering; it is the battlefield with the most legends, where love, resentment, and blood bloom and wither like extravagant flowers, and heroes emerge from generation to generation. If you love someone, send him there, that is the bliss of the West. If you hate someone, send him there, that is hell. That place's surname is Jiang and its name is Lake. <--I thought I was going to say that the name of that place is GRE. . . Wow, it's so touching. It's just that I don't particularly like the rhythm of the last sentence. As far as I am concerned, if it is written as "Which place is called Jianghu. "It will be more comfortable. "Yutang, you and the 'Unparalleled National Scholar' are a perfect match. "In fact, Zhan Zhao's words are implicitly damaging to others, because the person who matches the "unparalleled national scholar" is not the "peerless beauty". <--This sentence is absolutely brilliant! But then Xiaobai said, "Zhan Zhao, you are actually very handsome, but your handsomeness is very abstract. "Well, it just feels a bit worse~ Bai Yutang raised his eyebrows and hugged Huaying to his chest. Zhan Zhao also showed his giant sword in cooperation. <--Pfft... I'm a little shocked by this gesture. Although it can be said to be childish, I don't know why, but I see it more like the foolishness of a child who has never seen the world, playing a big knife in front of Guan Gong. Although it fits well with the subsequent plot, I still... Can't accept it. Compared with the poisonous snakes and beasts in the morning that everyone was trying to avoid, Bai Yutang felt like he was in the center of a whirlpool at this moment, with people squeezing towards him in circles. He seemed to have met a lot of people, many waists were bent towards him, many hands stretched out, and smiles like crude hand-drawn paintings on many cheap fans bloomed towards him. He held the sword coldly and did not react. His waist bent lower and lower, and the beads of sweat on his bare forehead became larger and larger. <--I really like this contrasting effect, but to be strictly critical, I feel that the atmosphere here is not enhanced enough. It cannot achieve the effect of making people feel emotional. So although this statement makes sense, it seems a bit empty and vain. It turns out that such a thing as internal strength really exists. Zhan Zhaoqiang thought so when he received the punch. <--Master Zhan, didn't you accidentally use this kind of thing before...? "Zhan Zhao, to be honest, Fifth Master feels that you are very strange now, but I said that whether you have memories or not, I will always be with you. I broke my promise this time, I owe you once. " <--I am very concerned about what Xiaobai did this time? Could it be, Xiaojie? ? ? (Wrong!) Bai Yutang curled his lips and said he was an outsider. When one day he makes Zhan Zhao his wife, he can watch it however he wants. As soon as this idea was confirmed, Mr. Bai Wu was in a good mood. He shook his paper fan and wandered into the hall by himself. <--This idea is very cute~~ I think this idea is really cute, but it still feels a bit abrupt. If it were changed to "Bai Yutang pouted: Outsider? Snort! One day he will make Zhan Zhao his wife, and he can watch it however he wants! "The sense of disobedience will be reduced for me. Because I feel that what this sentence is saying is: Xiaobai does not really want to wait for one day to turn Zhan Zhao into his wife, but the child can't help but let out his thoughts when he is angry. Of course, this is a very personal feeling. "If you really forgot everything about being 'Zhan Zhao', would you still be Zhan Zhao? " <--I thought of this sentence very nonsensically: If everyone forgets you and continues to live, what else can prove that you ever existed. Okay, it has nothing to do with the original quote, but I still like it. Zhan Zhao who has forgotten everything in the past, or is he not Zhan Zhao? But to be honest, it is impossible for Xiaobai not to realize that this Zhan Zhao is not the other Zhan Zhao. In other words, he will definitely understand that the Zhan Zhao in front of him does not have amnesia, but has lost the memory of Zhan Zhao, but has other memories. Didn't he ask? We all know that there are not so many "what ifs" in this world. <--Well, there is no "what if".