Only When You Are Half Awake Do You Know You Are Drunk

I wrote something casually, about the legendary Concubine Dong E, and her relationship with Shunzhi, but I still believe that she was Shunzhi's sister-in-law, so I added some content about Bo Mu Bo Guoer, and wrote as much as I felt. This is my first time writing a novel. Please give me some advice. Due to the heavy learning tasks, I often cannot update. Please give me some advice~~~~~~~