Situ Shasha (Grade 1) is a lively and naughty girl, sometimes a little "nervous" but she is really a "martial arts master"
She likes marshmallows the most, and what she's best at is making noises. Don't trust her easily~~ Her nickname is "The Mischief Witch"
Reader comments
Cheers, I love the cute little golden retriever Adam the most, support this pair.
It seems like they are still playing an ambiguous game? In fact, according to the original work, Haotian would have died if he had not cooperated with Adam. There is no upper limit to the difficulty of tasks in country Z. Although he appears optimistic and cheerful, with such a life experience, I really can't believe that he really likes treasures.
But the most interesting thing about Haotian is his protective color. He is the only original character that people can't see clearly. He is the only one who can overpower Adam. Is that guy Song Tian obsessed with the sword?
Is the ellipsis used incorrectly...
It has a shadow of reality and comes from life. It's good and worth savoring.
The article is good, the male protagonist is very loving, if you want to continue to be affectionate, you just have to pity that bicycle!
Ears and tails don't matter, having them is better, but a big wolf would feel guilty. It would be better to have ears and a tail rather than being a werewolf, but it seems difficult to write the reason for this.
Come on, this article is good.
The article is so well written that I read it in one sitting.
Kanon will be happy after this chapter, right?
Right, right~~
I was very confused and said that it was obviously the four of us.
I will give you a rating for each chapter, so update quickly! Dear~~~
Momo Sang, mighty... I can't write a long review, just a few words, Mo Mo must work hard.
Not trained yet XDDDDD
I'll wipe it, you can do it. You asked me to write a review for you. Damn, we are rivals. Snort.
... Why the name wasn't changed. Didn't I say, Sun Yue, Sun Yue, this is a girl's name. You can change it to Sun Yue or Sun Yue. You haven't changed... I'm so sad.
That family criticism meeting. Honey, you wrote it based on your prototype, right... By the way, did you survive the family denouncement meeting in your family? ? Hahaha.
By the way, your writing is so good, I'm so envious. La-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la. But your book is really good... I especially want to read the second chapter. I'll check it out soon, but I need to finish writing my review first.
············Well, I am not a good person. I write long reviews because writing long reviews can give your book more publicity opportunities... So I am going to write a few thousand words below... Don't read it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
There are lilies blooming under Brokeback Mountain. I have a pair of lilies and a pair of lilies. The writing is very good, so I decided to jump into the trap.
It turns out that this is the main text!
By the way, why aren't they divided into chapters?
Come on~~~~~Teng Teng Snake~~~
Why do I feel that last part is so weird? If Leaf Vine Snake chooses the trainer, the last paragraph is more like the trainer choosing the elf, and Ibrahimovic is just a means of subduing. After all, the red-haired boy was not Ye Teng Snake's chosen trainer.
Oops~ I don't know how to put it~~ I just have a general feeling! ~I hate it~Don't force people~
He has to go out anyway, so why not just let a trainer take him out and let him walk the rest of the way on his own. Isn't it bad to follow the training, but in that case what's the difference between being a puppet? ! Does the author just mean to write about the life of a trainer from the position of an elf? Is the protagonist Mo Shanghan who is carrying a secret or someone else?
Well~ I don't know if I'm right or not. In fact, I was a little incoherent at the end. But as long as I just want to express that meaning. If possible, the author should revise this chapter!
PS: Is the other protagonist of the article Ibrahimovic?
Press the paw, author, have you covered the back of your neck today?
I like it, thank you Xiaoyi for writing this for me
Well. . . Next chapter?
To be honest, I really didn't expect you to finish it so quickly. If I hadn't seen the update by chance just now, I don't think I would have seen it until tomorrow, because I swipe it every morning.
Well, in this article, to be honest, you did one thing very well. It's just that you didn't dwell on the heroine's military growth history, perversion, or Mary Sue... I should sigh that this article is really quite normal. This article is very simple, yes, there are no fancy words (in fact, I am often scolded by teachers for writing flashy articles), and this article is narrated in a very plain tone. The tragic ending did not make people shed tears, but left a trace of regret, and it felt that this ending was not unexpected.
Zhong Yi, an ordinary but extraordinary girl. She does not have a stunning appearance, a proud family, or a coquettish temper. She is as afraid of rats and snakes as ordinary girls, but she will not be unable to change. She has a resolute personality and will not shrink away from anything. She knows what to do and what not to do when. But she grew up in a family with special forces soldiers, and had been trained since childhood, which can be regarded as laying a foundation for her future. Her feelings for Qi Huan were not love at first sight. It was the long-term teammate life and Qi Huan's motherly character that made her lose her heart unconsciously. Later, she realized that Qi Huan had submitted a love report. She knew it was impossible, and she might still have fantasies, but her reason was stopping her. Qi Huan thought he introduced the person with good intentions, but unknowingly let Zhong Yi's affection leak out. Yes, there are few girls who accept the introduction of the person they like in front of the person they like. She revealed it, with sadness, expectation, and grievance. But Qi Huan revealed that she had submitted the marriage report. She was finally desperate and finally revealed her final solution. Yes, she couldn't accept staying in the same team with him who was about to get married after being rejected, even though he was the one who gave her back in the first place. In the end, in order to save Qi Huan, she chose to sacrifice with despair and blessings. In fact, she also selfishly hoped to leave a little place in his heart. Moreover, Qi Huan was about to get married. She was actually sending her blessings in a humble way. This ending is not a Mary Sue, as many people would do.
In the end, we can only sigh, missing it is forever.
Later on, Qi Huan, I believe he will still get married, but Zhongyi will always be in his heart, with an indelible memory and an irreplaceable position. Perhaps when Qi Huan was old, during the rare gathering of the old A's, everyone would hold the photo album, recall every bit of the past, recall Zhong Yi's smile and words, and sigh: after all, it is still fate. Then there was silence, incomprehensible words...
Ahem, finally, let's continue writing! Is it good to write anime fan fiction? Or am I a special soldier? My cutest anime: Four Brothers and Digimon Part 1~
PS: Also, I am only in the third grade of junior high school, so I don't write well, so please forgive me for not being able to analyze it well. After all, where is my life experience~ (Is this considered a long review?)
The dark crowd around them shouted: "Burn these heterosexual couple, burn them!"
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I always think this sentence is the highlight. If the world is really rotten
The fujoshi who posted seven novels online probably won't have to go to jail = =
I wrote a diary for you. . Come on. . .
It's still good, but a little short, eh
It's not martial arts, nor is it a palace fight. Take your time and watch
Ah, I'm so cute. My favorite thing is children, my childhood sweethearts~ So cute~
Awesome, I like Master, spread the flowers
Good, good! I like it! If you are not in the best condition, just take a rest! Don't be too tired
One chapter with one monster is very cute... But one chapter with one monster is not enough...
Strongly support the author's chapter 3 and 4 of a monster~~The character is completely described like this, hehehehe
Come on~~!
In fact, I have always hated chasing updates on JJ. But I still crawled over to take a look. Very good writing style. Anyway, I can't write this kind of thing... Although I will consider it in the future, for the time being, I still study learning birds here~
Cheers, I love the cute little golden retriever Adam the most, support this pair. It seems like they are still playing an ambiguous game? In fact, according to the original work, Haotian would have died if he had not cooperated with Adam. There is no upper limit to the difficulty of tasks in country Z. Although he appears optimistic and cheerful, with such a life experience, I really can't believe that he really likes treasures. But the most interesting thing about Haotian is his protective color. He is the only original character that people can't see clearly. He is the only one who can overpower Adam. Is that guy Song Tian obsessed with the sword?
Is the ellipsis used incorrectly...
It has a shadow of reality and comes from life. It's good and worth savoring.
The article is good, the male protagonist is very loving, if you want to continue to be affectionate, you just have to pity that bicycle!
Ears and tails don't matter, having them is better, but a big wolf would feel guilty. It would be better to have ears and a tail rather than being a werewolf, but it seems difficult to write the reason for this.
Come on, this article is good.
The article is so well written that I read it in one sitting.
Kanon will be happy after this chapter, right? Right, right~~
I was very confused and said that it was obviously the four of us.
I will give you a rating for each chapter, so update quickly! Dear~~~
Momo Sang, mighty... I can't write a long review, just a few words, Mo Mo must work hard.
Not trained yet XDDDDD
I'll wipe it, you can do it. You asked me to write a review for you. Damn, we are rivals. Snort. ... Why the name wasn't changed. Didn't I say, Sun Yue, Sun Yue, this is a girl's name. You can change it to Sun Yue or Sun Yue. You haven't changed... I'm so sad. That family criticism meeting. Honey, you wrote it based on your prototype, right... By the way, did you survive the family denouncement meeting in your family? ? Hahaha. By the way, your writing is so good, I'm so envious. La-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la. But your book is really good... I especially want to read the second chapter. I'll check it out soon, but I need to finish writing my review first. ············Well, I am not a good person. I write long reviews because writing long reviews can give your book more publicity opportunities... So I am going to write a few thousand words below... Don't read it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
There are lilies blooming under Brokeback Mountain. I have a pair of lilies and a pair of lilies. The writing is very good, so I decided to jump into the trap.
It turns out that this is the main text! By the way, why aren't they divided into chapters?
Come on~~~~~Teng Teng Snake~~~
Why do I feel that last part is so weird? If Leaf Vine Snake chooses the trainer, the last paragraph is more like the trainer choosing the elf, and Ibrahimovic is just a means of subduing. After all, the red-haired boy was not Ye Teng Snake's chosen trainer. Oops~ I don't know how to put it~~ I just have a general feeling! ~I hate it~Don't force people~ He has to go out anyway, so why not just let a trainer take him out and let him walk the rest of the way on his own. Isn't it bad to follow the training, but in that case what's the difference between being a puppet? ! Does the author just mean to write about the life of a trainer from the position of an elf? Is the protagonist Mo Shanghan who is carrying a secret or someone else? Well~ I don't know if I'm right or not. In fact, I was a little incoherent at the end. But as long as I just want to express that meaning. If possible, the author should revise this chapter! PS: Is the other protagonist of the article Ibrahimovic?
Press the paw, author, have you covered the back of your neck today?
I like it, thank you Xiaoyi for writing this for me
Well. . . Next chapter?
To be honest, I really didn't expect you to finish it so quickly. If I hadn't seen the update by chance just now, I don't think I would have seen it until tomorrow, because I swipe it every morning. Well, in this article, to be honest, you did one thing very well. It's just that you didn't dwell on the heroine's military growth history, perversion, or Mary Sue... I should sigh that this article is really quite normal. This article is very simple, yes, there are no fancy words (in fact, I am often scolded by teachers for writing flashy articles), and this article is narrated in a very plain tone. The tragic ending did not make people shed tears, but left a trace of regret, and it felt that this ending was not unexpected. Zhong Yi, an ordinary but extraordinary girl. She does not have a stunning appearance, a proud family, or a coquettish temper. She is as afraid of rats and snakes as ordinary girls, but she will not be unable to change. She has a resolute personality and will not shrink away from anything. She knows what to do and what not to do when. But she grew up in a family with special forces soldiers, and had been trained since childhood, which can be regarded as laying a foundation for her future. Her feelings for Qi Huan were not love at first sight. It was the long-term teammate life and Qi Huan's motherly character that made her lose her heart unconsciously. Later, she realized that Qi Huan had submitted a love report. She knew it was impossible, and she might still have fantasies, but her reason was stopping her. Qi Huan thought he introduced the person with good intentions, but unknowingly let Zhong Yi's affection leak out. Yes, there are few girls who accept the introduction of the person they like in front of the person they like. She revealed it, with sadness, expectation, and grievance. But Qi Huan revealed that she had submitted the marriage report. She was finally desperate and finally revealed her final solution. Yes, she couldn't accept staying in the same team with him who was about to get married after being rejected, even though he was the one who gave her back in the first place. In the end, in order to save Qi Huan, she chose to sacrifice with despair and blessings. In fact, she also selfishly hoped to leave a little place in his heart. Moreover, Qi Huan was about to get married. She was actually sending her blessings in a humble way. This ending is not a Mary Sue, as many people would do. In the end, we can only sigh, missing it is forever. Later on, Qi Huan, I believe he will still get married, but Zhongyi will always be in his heart, with an indelible memory and an irreplaceable position. Perhaps when Qi Huan was old, during the rare gathering of the old A's, everyone would hold the photo album, recall every bit of the past, recall Zhong Yi's smile and words, and sigh: after all, it is still fate. Then there was silence, incomprehensible words... Ahem, finally, let's continue writing! Is it good to write anime fan fiction? Or am I a special soldier? My cutest anime: Four Brothers and Digimon Part 1~ PS: Also, I am only in the third grade of junior high school, so I don't write well, so please forgive me for not being able to analyze it well. After all, where is my life experience~ (Is this considered a long review?)
The dark crowd around them shouted: "Burn these heterosexual couple, burn them!" ----------------------------------------------- I always think this sentence is the highlight. If the world is really rotten The fujoshi who posted seven novels online probably won't have to go to jail = =
I wrote a diary for you. . Come on. . .
It's still good, but a little short, eh
It's not martial arts, nor is it a palace fight. Take your time and watch
Ah, I'm so cute. My favorite thing is children, my childhood sweethearts~ So cute~
Awesome, I like Master, spread the flowers
Good, good! I like it! If you are not in the best condition, just take a rest! Don't be too tired
One chapter with one monster is very cute... But one chapter with one monster is not enough... Strongly support the author's chapter 3 and 4 of a monster~~The character is completely described like this, hehehehe Come on~~!
In fact, I have always hated chasing updates on JJ. But I still crawled over to take a look. Very good writing style. Anyway, I can't write this kind of thing... Although I will consider it in the future, for the time being, I still study learning birds here~