Heartbroken and unable to breathe
The two poles of the earth
can't see you again
I can't feel your breath anymore
But the different distortions of time and space
Parallel lines of sorrow meet again
Only your lip prints
Accompany me in my dream to return to the Qing Dynasty...
——"Lip Print"
After being pointed out by professionals, the person pronouns used in this literary genre make people feel uncomfortable. They feel that they know everyone's fate. There is also a term in literary genres. Generally speaking, you cannot write like this... I don't understand it very well, so I can only change it slowly~
Sigh... I finally thought about having a side business plan, but it just hit a big rock~ Sigh~ Hey,
I finished three chapters, but my lucky money was confiscated. I felt bad! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! So I guess it's not well written either…sigh