?? He said that the article was very good. It's just that the plot is still not very twisty, so it can't be completed satisfactorily. I said, yes. The articles I write generally have few twists and turns in the plot, but more of a straightforward inner narrative. In other words, it does not constitute a text in itself, but is just a patchwork of messy fragments.
?? This article was just a self-set at first. It's like a trap with a swamp inside. I willingly stuck in it. So when it's done. Very early. It was 2003. Half a year ago, a friend accidentally mentioned this article. He talked about a lot of his opinions, including thoughts on human nature. So I decided to rebuild it. Also give yourself a trap, like this. Jump in again. No turning back.
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