A short mirror article with very few words.
Conception:
Reader comments
Pretty good, thank you for writing.
Catching bugs:
1) The first line, Phoenix Mirror Night, is not quiet.
2) Giving up everything for the ring is not a trade-off.
3) Tamaki, not tanaki
Sorry for being a bit obsessive, after all, the shorter the story, the more obvious the typos are. It would be perfect if these were changed :)
Pretty good, thank you for writing. Catching bugs: 1) The first line, Phoenix Mirror Night, is not quiet. 2) Giving up everything for the ring is not a trade-off. 3) Tamaki, not tanaki Sorry for being a bit obsessive, after all, the shorter the story, the more obvious the typos are. It would be perfect if these were changed :)