The ending was too rushed and a complete mess.
Author, are you no longer writing novels?
I want Chi and Qinglin! ! ! !
Oppose the Three Ps~~~~~
After reading Master Yun'er's comments, I'm really sweating.
This article was co-written by three people, so there is a role reversal in each chapter. Since this is the first draft, we plan to rewrite it into a third-person sequential draft after we finish writing it, hoping that we can make up for the shortcomings of the solitaire text by then.
Thank you for your criticism:) We will definitely pay attention to it when we modify it.
Yes, I think there is still a problem with co-writing
Why co-write?
Renew! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sir, come on
Khan, boss, you tortured me hard enough~~
I cry, can you not torture me?
My heart ached and I was speechless. . .
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I can't stand it
How can this be?
Why can everyone abuse the main character!!!
Bishu I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How could Qinglin be like this? He could only watch Yu suffer so much, but he was so cruel that he could just sit back and watch. It was so irritating.
Finally feeling a little better~
Finally told the truth, hiding it again and again, hiding it like this, poor Chi You! Damn Tamaki, why on earth is he doing?
I agree to ignore Qinglin, no amount of apology can make up for Chi You's disability!
But can you please stop abusing Chi You? I feel so bad!
Your nest has stopped registering~~~I'm so dizzy~~I can't get in~~~
Hee hee, there has been a lot of noise recently, and that website has been temporarily closed...
I haven't been there for a long time
Thank you, Mr. Xiaowan
5555555555555555555
It's really sad~~~
Woohoo~~~You are a stepmother~~~
Qinglin's personality is really that of a child, he doesn't analyze or think when things happen. As an ordinary person, you can still be said to be a sexual person, but as the owner of the first floor, it is too immature.
The ending was too rushed and a complete mess. Author, are you no longer writing novels?
I want Chi and Qinglin! ! ! ! Oppose the Three Ps~~~~~
After reading Master Yun'er's comments, I'm really sweating. This article was co-written by three people, so there is a role reversal in each chapter. Since this is the first draft, we plan to rewrite it into a third-person sequential draft after we finish writing it, hoping that we can make up for the shortcomings of the solitaire text by then. Thank you for your criticism:) We will definitely pay attention to it when we modify it.
Yes, I think there is still a problem with co-writing Why co-write?
Renew! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sir, come on
Khan, boss, you tortured me hard enough~~ I cry, can you not torture me?
My heart ached and I was speechless. . .
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't stand it How can this be? Why can everyone abuse the main character!!! Bishu I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How could Qinglin be like this? He could only watch Yu suffer so much, but he was so cruel that he could just sit back and watch. It was so irritating.
Finally feeling a little better~
Finally told the truth, hiding it again and again, hiding it like this, poor Chi You! Damn Tamaki, why on earth is he doing? I agree to ignore Qinglin, no amount of apology can make up for Chi You's disability! But can you please stop abusing Chi You? I feel so bad!
Your nest has stopped registering~~~I'm so dizzy~~I can't get in~~~
Hee hee, there has been a lot of noise recently, and that website has been temporarily closed... I haven't been there for a long time Thank you, Mr. Xiaowan
5555555555555555555 It's really sad~~~ Woohoo~~~You are a stepmother~~~
Qinglin's personality is really that of a child, he doesn't analyze or think when things happen. As an ordinary person, you can still be said to be a sexual person, but as the owner of the first floor, it is too immature.
Don't let Chi You die! !