An interesting story that takes place between the palace and the world.
Comedy.
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? ? Why do I feel like I missed a lot of chapters? The narrative seems unclear. Why do I suddenly start to give orders? What is the skill of Spirit Point? ? ?
There has been no update for two days, please update.
It's pretty good for daily use, although I've never played Jian San
It's been circled, and the old man has criticized it.
"Hour" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
after
I have understood the truth about the master. This exorcist master likes to build a magnificent world view and then throw in a bunch of wonderful and funny characters to perform cross talk. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing emotional lines, but his ability to write emotional lines is improving year by year. "The Melancholy of His Majesty the Demon King" only has the setting and climax segments, "The History of Blood Tribes in the New World" only has the beginning and end, and the transitional plot in the middle is completely blank. "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" is generally Although there is continuity, the advancement and transition are still stiff. In this film, although the author still cleverly uses the narrative technique of "reversal" to help, the psychological activities of the characters are more delicate (but still unable to write a sense of hierarchy), and the advancement and transition are more natural. In the field of writing, there are also situations where the more you write, the more you regress. I am happy to see that the author has adhered to the XP well (hello) and can continue to make progress.
I feel that the author's XP has a high degree of overlap with my own. I can also see that these free articles by the author have a common situation of using love to generate electricity: the picture is poor and the dagger is visible (or the dumpling is jealous). The author's thoughts must have been quite free when writing these contents, and that's why I enjoyed reading them. Rather than conceiving a commercial work to cater to the aesthetics of a suitable audience, writing a story you like while attracting onlookers from the same audience, I think the latter requires more fate. Due to this fate, this is the fourth book I have read by the same author.
This book gives me a slightly different feeling than the first three books: "The Turing Test" is a science fiction theme, so the writing is drier and the emotions are more "cold". The narrative technique often uses "reversal" to increase the brain-burning atmosphere, and the final ending is also OE. When I read the chapter where the truth was revealed, I could even hear the author's inner chant of joy when he finished writing this chapter (Hey). This kind of resonance experience is rare, and I experienced it four times with Lip Death and Teeth Cold 0.
Relatively speaking, the character creation is relatively inferior. I think this is because the author focused mainly on the plot setting, so he seemed powerless in terms of characters. I don't object to this approach, but I still think that "character" is the most important thing in a novel. Of course, there is a foundation after all. At least the characters in this book are established, but they are relatively thin and lack profound shaping. Of course, this was the author's work nearly ten years ago. Presumably, the author's skills in power generation for love have already been improved to a higher level, and balancing plot, characters, and XP is no longer a problem.
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I have understood the truth about the master. This exorcist master likes to build a magnificent world view and then throw in a bunch of wonderful and funny characters to perform cross talk. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing emotional lines, but his ability to write emotional lines is improving year by year. "The Melancholy of His Majesty the Demon King" only has the setting and climax segments, "The History of Blood Tribes in the New World" only has the beginning and end, and the transitional plot in the middle is completely blank. "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" is generally Although there is continuity, the advancement and transition are still stiff. In this film, although the author still cleverly uses the narrative technique of "reversal" to help, the psychological activities of the characters are more delicate (but still unable to write a sense of hierarchy), and the advancement and transition are more natural. In the field of writing, there are also situations where the more you write, the more you regress. I am happy to see that the author has adhered to the XP well (hello) and can continue to make progress.
I feel that the author's XP has a high degree of overlap with my own. I can also see that these free articles by the author have a common situation of using love to generate electricity: the picture is poor and the dagger is visible (or the dumpling is jealous). The author's thoughts must have been quite free when writing these contents, and that's why I enjoyed reading them. Rather than conceiving a commercial work to cater to the aesthetics of a suitable audience, writing a story you like while attracting onlookers from the same audience, I think the latter requires more fate. Due to this fate, this is the fourth book I have read by the same author.
This book gives me a slightly different feeling than the first three books: "The Turing Test" is a science fiction theme, so the writing is drier and the emotions are more "cold". The narrative technique often uses "reversal" to increase the brain-burning atmosphere, and the final ending is also OE. When I read the chapter where the truth was revealed, I could even hear the author's inner chant of joy when he finished writing this chapter (Hey). This kind of resonance experience is rare, and I experienced it four times with Lip Death and Teeth Cold 0.
Relatively speaking, the character creation is relatively inferior. I think this is because the author focused mainly on the plot setting, so he seemed powerless in terms of characters. I don't object to this approach, but I still think that "character" is the most important thing in a novel. Of course, there is a foundation after all. At least the characters in this book are established, but they are relatively thin and lack profound shaping. Of course, this was the author's work nearly ten years ago. Presumably, the author's skills in power generation for love have already been improved to a higher level, and balancing plot, characters, and XP is no longer a problem.
Update, sprinkle flowers!
Ps It's been so long that I almost forgot the previous plot! [Laughing and crying]
Did you change the copy again through PS?
Please update ~ When will it be updated?
Support nuclear safety classes! Even less human than when I was little!
? ? Why do I feel like I missed a lot of chapters? The narrative seems unclear. Why do I suddenly start to give orders? What is the skill of Spirit Point? ? ?
There has been no update for two days, please update.
It's pretty good for daily use, although I've never played Jian San
It's been circled, and the old man has criticized it.
"Hour" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ after
I have understood the truth about the master. This exorcist master likes to build a magnificent world view and then throw in a bunch of wonderful and funny characters to perform cross talk. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing emotional lines, but his ability to write emotional lines is improving year by year. "The Melancholy of His Majesty the Demon King" only has the setting and climax segments, "The History of Blood Tribes in the New World" only has the beginning and end, and the transitional plot in the middle is completely blank. "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" is generally Although there is continuity, the advancement and transition are still stiff. In this film, although the author still cleverly uses the narrative technique of "reversal" to help, the psychological activities of the characters are more delicate (but still unable to write a sense of hierarchy), and the advancement and transition are more natural. In the field of writing, there are also situations where the more you write, the more you regress. I am happy to see that the author has adhered to the XP well (hello) and can continue to make progress. I feel that the author's XP has a high degree of overlap with my own. I can also see that these free articles by the author have a common situation of using love to generate electricity: the picture is poor and the dagger is visible (or the dumpling is jealous). The author's thoughts must have been quite free when writing these contents, and that's why I enjoyed reading them. Rather than conceiving a commercial work to cater to the aesthetics of a suitable audience, writing a story you like while attracting onlookers from the same audience, I think the latter requires more fate. Due to this fate, this is the fourth book I have read by the same author. This book gives me a slightly different feeling than the first three books: "The Turing Test" is a science fiction theme, so the writing is drier and the emotions are more "cold". The narrative technique often uses "reversal" to increase the brain-burning atmosphere, and the final ending is also OE. When I read the chapter where the truth was revealed, I could even hear the author's inner chant of joy when he finished writing this chapter (Hey). This kind of resonance experience is rare, and I experienced it four times with Lip Death and Teeth Cold 0. Relatively speaking, the character creation is relatively inferior. I think this is because the author focused mainly on the plot setting, so he seemed powerless in terms of characters. I don't object to this approach, but I still think that "character" is the most important thing in a novel. Of course, there is a foundation after all. At least the characters in this book are established, but they are relatively thin and lack profound shaping. Of course, this was the author's work nearly ten years ago. Presumably, the author's skills in power generation for love have already been improved to a higher level, and balancing plot, characters, and XP is no longer a problem. —————————— (Duplicate content) I have understood the truth about the master. This exorcist master likes to build a magnificent world view and then throw in a bunch of wonderful and funny characters to perform cross talk. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing emotional lines, but his ability to write emotional lines is improving year by year. "The Melancholy of His Majesty the Demon King" only has the setting and climax segments, "The History of Blood Tribes in the New World" only has the beginning and end, and the transitional plot in the middle is completely blank. "The Rules of the Silent Gentleman" is generally Although there is continuity, the advancement and transition are still stiff. In this film, although the author still cleverly uses the narrative technique of "reversal" to help, the psychological activities of the characters are more delicate (but still unable to write a sense of hierarchy), and the advancement and transition are more natural. In the field of writing, there are also situations where the more you write, the more you regress. I am happy to see that the author has adhered to the XP well (hello) and can continue to make progress. I feel that the author's XP has a high degree of overlap with my own. I can also see that these free articles by the author have a common situation of using love to generate electricity: the picture is poor and the dagger is visible (or the dumpling is jealous). The author's thoughts must have been quite free when writing these contents, and that's why I enjoyed reading them. Rather than conceiving a commercial work to cater to the aesthetics of a suitable audience, writing a story you like while attracting onlookers from the same audience, I think the latter requires more fate. Due to this fate, this is the fourth book I have read by the same author. This book gives me a slightly different feeling than the first three books: "The Turing Test" is a science fiction theme, so the writing is drier and the emotions are more "cold". The narrative technique often uses "reversal" to increase the brain-burning atmosphere, and the final ending is also OE. When I read the chapter where the truth was revealed, I could even hear the author's inner chant of joy when he finished writing this chapter (Hey). This kind of resonance experience is rare, and I experienced it four times with Lip Death and Teeth Cold 0. Relatively speaking, the character creation is relatively inferior. I think this is because the author focused mainly on the plot setting, so he seemed powerless in terms of characters. I don't object to this approach, but I still think that "character" is the most important thing in a novel. Of course, there is a foundation after all. At least the characters in this book are established, but they are relatively thin and lack profound shaping. Of course, this was the author's work nearly ten years ago. Presumably, the author's skills in power generation for love have already been improved to a higher level, and balancing plot, characters, and XP is no longer a problem.
Update, sprinkle flowers! Ps It's been so long that I almost forgot the previous plot! [Laughing and crying] Did you change the copy again through PS?
Please update ~ When will it be updated?
Support nuclear safety classes! Even less human than when I was little!