It feels a bit messy. After a little tidying up, the plot is still very attractive. Come on, I want to read the rest~~
Not bad, but you have to pay a little attention to the punctuation~
P. S: You must have forgotten me for coming to Coke after such a long time, right?
Thank you for your suggestions. Let's make progress together~
Why is there no reply? ． I'm so sad
It feels a bit messy. After a little tidying up, the plot is still very attractive. Come on, I want to read the rest~~
Not bad, but you have to pay a little attention to the punctuation~ P. S: You must have forgotten me for coming to Coke after such a long time, right? Thank you for your suggestions. Let's make progress together~