Depressed... What is depressed... I only realized it now, because a small... Small mistake made by a group of idiots made me lose my sex, and my parents mutilated my body without my consent ~ causing me to wear... A female country, and a boy? !
When I woke up, I saw a handsome man winking at me, and... And... And saying, "Honey, you were so fierce last night." I fainted 4...
Next... The small and exquisite type, the tall and mighty type, the iceberg type, the sunshine type... Yeah, why is there still a bad old man? ! It turns out to be my father-in-law!
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The scenery is described very beautifully
Please be happy~I can't ask for it~Spread flowers~\\(^o^)/~
I really want to write a story about the couple Xiao Miao and Jiang Ningyuan*☙(●′∪｀●)
Seeing Sui Ling looking so beautiful and smiling, these five words immediately came to mind. .
When Pei Yusheng found out, he pushed her to have an abortion, but Pei Yusheng stopped her later. . . It's inconsistent
There are three purposes for posting this comment: first, to congratulate our little Zi for opening a pit; second, to express that I am here, that I have watched, and that I have grabbed the sofa; third, and what I want to point out the most - holy shit! What a night when there is no one to chat with you! ! ! I've spent all my time hurting you this night, right? ! ! ! ! You little heartless bastard! ! ! ! ! ! !
Ahem. The following is about the characters. Actually, I still think Chen Damin is more suitable. "Rebirth: Three Worldly Life", tsk tsk, it sounds very vulgar at first glance. If you change the protagonist's name to Chen Damin, it will be more in line with your wishes. Secondly, you can also change the title of the article to "The Three Worldly Life of Poor-tongued Chen Damin". Tsk tsk, it sounds elegant and feels festive when it is said out ~ This is called an article, this is called life~~
Yeah, yeah. Finally, it's about the plot. As the old saying goes, if this article is about traveling through ancient times or imaginary, the next step should be that the old man is a legendary master who hides his secrets in the secular world. At the worst, he is at the level of Dugu Qiubai. Then he fell in love with the protagonist at a glance under the bloody sky, and he was like the Tathagata Palm in Kung Fu. That old beggar said that he has magical powers~ After that, he can write a huge masterpiece "On the Development of From Shota to Unparalleled Heroes", which is so easy to write~ Why don't you kid take shortcuts and write awkwardly about modern cities? Why can't you just go with the flow? Tsk, the future is bumpy, just take care of yourself~
Haha, there's a lot of nonsense, and finally I'll sum it up in a serious way – the beginning is good, and it sets the tone of a relaxed route. Those of us who are afraid of reading sad stories can rest assured~ Although the number of words is still very small and I can't tell much, but this kind of real-life protagonist is very suitable for me~ I look forward to the follow-up~~~ I hope the protagonists' lives can be a little more plain and rural, not too bloody~
Finally, I would like to emphasize one more requirement: I want to see virtuous and virtuous recipients! ! ! ! !
PS: According to reliable information, the sofa was snatched away while someone was typing... Okay... The bench is the bench, squat on the bench and wait for daily updates~~It is best to update twice~~~
Just coding is useless. I always feel that I need to learn to make progress. When the number of words reaches a certain level, I still seem to write the same thing.
Are you still reading novels?
Top it.
Did ancient people fold paper cranes? Why do I feel so awkward...
The scenery is described very beautifully
Please be happy~I can't ask for it~Spread flowers~\\(^o^)/~
I really want to write a story about the couple Xiao Miao and Jiang Ningyuan*☙(●′∪｀●)
Seeing Sui Ling looking so beautiful and smiling, these five words immediately came to mind. .
When Pei Yusheng found out, he pushed her to have an abortion, but Pei Yusheng stopped her later. . . It's inconsistent
There are three purposes for posting this comment: first, to congratulate our little Zi for opening a pit; second, to express that I am here, that I have watched, and that I have grabbed the sofa; third, and what I want to point out the most - holy shit! What a night when there is no one to chat with you! ! ! I've spent all my time hurting you this night, right? ! ! ! ! You little heartless bastard! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahem. The following is about the characters. Actually, I still think Chen Damin is more suitable. "Rebirth: Three Worldly Life", tsk tsk, it sounds very vulgar at first glance. If you change the protagonist's name to Chen Damin, it will be more in line with your wishes. Secondly, you can also change the title of the article to "The Three Worldly Life of Poor-tongued Chen Damin". Tsk tsk, it sounds elegant and feels festive when it is said out ~ This is called an article, this is called life~~ Yeah, yeah. Finally, it's about the plot. As the old saying goes, if this article is about traveling through ancient times or imaginary, the next step should be that the old man is a legendary master who hides his secrets in the secular world. At the worst, he is at the level of Dugu Qiubai. Then he fell in love with the protagonist at a glance under the bloody sky, and he was like the Tathagata Palm in Kung Fu. That old beggar said that he has magical powers~ After that, he can write a huge masterpiece "On the Development of From Shota to Unparalleled Heroes", which is so easy to write~ Why don't you kid take shortcuts and write awkwardly about modern cities? Why can't you just go with the flow? Tsk, the future is bumpy, just take care of yourself~ Haha, there's a lot of nonsense, and finally I'll sum it up in a serious way – the beginning is good, and it sets the tone of a relaxed route. Those of us who are afraid of reading sad stories can rest assured~ Although the number of words is still very small and I can't tell much, but this kind of real-life protagonist is very suitable for me~ I look forward to the follow-up~~~ I hope the protagonists' lives can be a little more plain and rural, not too bloody~ Finally, I would like to emphasize one more requirement: I want to see virtuous and virtuous recipients! ! ! ! ! PS: According to reliable information, the sofa was snatched away while someone was typing... Okay... The bench is the bench, squat on the bench and wait for daily updates~~It is best to update twice~~~
Just coding is useless. I always feel that I need to learn to make progress. When the number of words reaches a certain level, I still seem to write the same thing. Are you still reading novels?
Top it. Did ancient people fold paper cranes? Why do I feel so awkward...