Hatred and desire are entangled together. Should we tame or fight back?
Reader comments
After reading the first chapter, how can I put it... If you classify what you think and what you say better, wouldn't it feel smoother? In addition, the scene jump was too fast at the beginning, and it jumped to the next scene before the explanation was clear. I originally thought it was two scenes, but after looking carefully, I found that they are actually the same scene. . Then why are they divided into Xiaoyao Valley and Wangyou Village? This will feel a bit messy.
Jinjiang is really a fortress now. The mobile phones are small and the ads are so good...
After reading the first chapter, how can I put it... If you classify what you think and what you say better, wouldn't it feel smoother? In addition, the scene jump was too fast at the beginning, and it jumped to the next scene before the explanation was clear. I originally thought it was two scenes, but after looking carefully, I found that they are actually the same scene. . Then why are they divided into Xiaoyao Valley and Wangyou Village? This will feel a bit messy.
Jinjiang is really a fortress now. The mobile phones are small and the ads are so good...
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