The third season of the life fan series is also the longest one expected
Xiao Shen Tongzi returned to the time when he was just born, and everything started over...
Ahem... Copywriting is the most troublesome thing. Leave some space for later.
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我哥，难产，遗言，糖，懂？
Baby, come on and update~ I've been waiting for a long time~
Nice! ! ! ! ! But the plot is great! Keep jumping to watch!
I really like this kind of story, it's very comfortable to read
If there is no such name, Baidu can view it.
Ahhhhh? ? ? Gone? ? ?
Fear. . . I have a friend who is the same age as the protagonist in Xiangtan and is also studying foreign languages. . But in German. . .
An unfilial disciple kneels down to see his master
I smiled unkindly when I saw this sentence, but in the end, the memory was sealed again? Will the abuse start again in the next chapter?
①Writing: Poor, with many typos and incorrect sentences
②Emotional line: There is a sour taste like a long pendant; some characters' emotional changes become abrupt and blunt; the artificial saccharin tastes heavy, and the sugar is too deliberate, which even affects the character creation.
③Plot: There are small bugs that can be ignored and bugs that are difficult to pretend not to be seen. The latter are concentrated in many climaxes, especially the ending chapters. It is difficult to comment on using the wisdom of everyone to fill in the bugs; but the writing and plot are okay, at least attractive.
④Group portraits: I don't see any group portraits. There are indeed characters that are difficult to understand, but it's not because they are too complex or multi-faceted, but because they are "ooc"
⑤Theme: It's a bit vague. I don't see any serious theme. It might be something like "strength" or "growth".
⑥ Setting: It's quite attractive.
To sum up, this article has many pain points. If it is a cookie, it can still be eaten, but it is a sour article. If you don't really have no books to read, I don't recommend reading it.
This article is very different from the author's other one by Shen Yanyi. I recommend reading her other one.
But this can also be inferred that the author has made great progress, come on [come on]
The older boy is so nice and the heroine is so gentle. They are a perfect match. Lock it up, lock it up! ! Nalanjia swallowed the key!
我哥，难产，遗言，糖，懂？
Baby, come on and update~ I've been waiting for a long time~
Nice! ! ! ! ! But the plot is great! Keep jumping to watch!
I really like this kind of story, it's very comfortable to read
If there is no such name, Baidu can view it.
Ahhhhh? ? ? Gone? ? ?
Fear. . . I have a friend who is the same age as the protagonist in Xiangtan and is also studying foreign languages. . But in German. . .
An unfilial disciple kneels down to see his master I smiled unkindly when I saw this sentence, but in the end, the memory was sealed again? Will the abuse start again in the next chapter?
①Writing: Poor, with many typos and incorrect sentences ②Emotional line: There is a sour taste like a long pendant; some characters' emotional changes become abrupt and blunt; the artificial saccharin tastes heavy, and the sugar is too deliberate, which even affects the character creation. ③Plot: There are small bugs that can be ignored and bugs that are difficult to pretend not to be seen. The latter are concentrated in many climaxes, especially the ending chapters. It is difficult to comment on using the wisdom of everyone to fill in the bugs; but the writing and plot are okay, at least attractive. ④Group portraits: I don't see any group portraits. There are indeed characters that are difficult to understand, but it's not because they are too complex or multi-faceted, but because they are "ooc" ⑤Theme: It's a bit vague. I don't see any serious theme. It might be something like "strength" or "growth". ⑥ Setting: It's quite attractive. To sum up, this article has many pain points. If it is a cookie, it can still be eaten, but it is a sour article. If you don't really have no books to read, I don't recommend reading it. This article is very different from the author's other one by Shen Yanyi. I recommend reading her other one. But this can also be inferred that the author has made great progress, come on [come on]
The older boy is so nice and the heroine is so gentle. They are a perfect match. Lock it up, lock it up! ! Nalanjia swallowed the key!