When the spring breeze is blowing in Jiangcheng, a meeting has already laid the foundation for it in the depths of time.
The cool academic god × the cheerful and docile young master
Xu Lingche (attack) × Shi Xianyu (receiver)
Attack (seemingly cold, but actually disguised to hide years of scars to protect himself)
Shou (looks lively and cheerful, but actually has mental illness and sometimes has the opposite personality and is very stubborn)
"Shi Xianyu, let's finish this."
"You... What did you say?"
"I said I don't love you..." Xu Lingche held back the pain in his heart and said this, "From the beginning to the end, I have never loved you at all..."
"You... You're kidding, right?" Shi Xianyu was in disbelief, and the ends of his eyes were slightly red.
In the single VIP ward of the hospital.
"Fool, how could I not love you... I simply can't bear to say this to you..."
"I never want to be separated from you in this life..."
"My liking for you is not just a whim. I am serious about it. I love you to the core of my being."
"Sending you a bouquet of white roses symbolizes your pure and innocent love, and also symbolizes our perfection."
"From now on, taking the Prime Meridian as a witness, my life... Begins with you."
Note: Many unreal places, characters, and schools are fictitious. Do not substitute them into reality.
There will also be some real places
Intention: Mutual redemption and dependence, running in both directions, cherishing the present
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[Purple Sugar] kswl I want to support my little couple first! ! ! Ling Xian 99
"The young man's white ears are faintly..." The author caught a big bug [orange candy] and got it
"Shi Xianyu secretly turned around to look at Xu..." This is a big bug for the author~
[Orange Candy] Got it
[Orange Candy] I got it, it looks great, come on
Our Xu Lingche is also a poor baby [holding chin]
[Orange Candy] Now that I've had it, let's give some support to my two little darlings.
The teacher's writing is so good. I really like the sentence "The fine tension spreads gently along the blood" []. We are also very good at envy. We will remember Xu Lingche's wounds and blame ourselves [] It is normal for the writing to be green at first. I believe the teacher will write better and better. Everyone is a good person.
The little thoughts of secret love are written extremely delicately. From "taking a gentle breath" to "typing out a line of words seriously", to "subconsciously clenching the phone tightly" and "staring at the screen for a moment" after sending, Shi Xianyu's nervousness, anticipation, and anxiety are all clearly explained in the details of his actions. There is no straightforward "I like him so much" but the readers can understand them all.
The positioning of "well-behaved and careful" is accurate. Five words outline Shi Xianyu's character - it's not that he doesn't want to get close, but he's too afraid of disturbing him, and he's too afraid that his liking will become a burden to the other person.
Loss is handled with restraint. There was no crying or fussing, no inner monologue bombardment, just a "sigh", a self-comfort, and a touch of "the expectation in the eyes slowly faded away." This kind of gentle writing is more poignant, because the most painful thing about a secret love is never rejection, but the silence that hangs in mid-air with no response. The time span of "a few minutes" can be more specific. Waiting for news about the person you have a crush on, every second is stretched out. If "a few minutes" is replaced by "the screen lit up and dimmed, dimmed and brightened again, he flipped through the chat history three times, and there was nothing in the dialog box except the line of text he sent", the torment of time would be even stronger.
Xu Lingche's reason for not replying could be a foreshadowing. Asleep? You saw it and didn't reply on purpose? Or is your phone not with you? There is no need to reveal it here, but if Shi Xianyu had a guess in his mind while waiting, such as "Did he not want to come back after seeing him?", It would be more complicated and more dramatic than simply thinking "He fell asleep."
You can add an environmental detail to echo the mood. For example, there are car lights passing by outside the window and the light of street lights wandering on the wall. The external "movement" reflects his inner "quietness" and sense of weightlessness, amplifying the "silent loss" to another level.
The whole thing is already great, with real emotions and solid details. If the sense of waiting time can be slightly lengthened and a more uneasy guess can be inserted before "Is he asleep?", It can not only strengthen the humble feeling of secret love, but also make readers feel more sorry for Shi Xianyu and build up more expectations for Xu Lingche's subsequent response~
Chapter 9 "Drunk and Heartfelt" continues the barbecue date in the previous chapter. Shi Xianyu and Xu Lingche have just finished a warm dinner. The evening breeze is just right, and the atmosphere between the two is soft and ambiguous. Shi Xianyu still had the warmth that accompanied him today in his heart. At this time, he received a call - it was from Feng Hao, who told him in a hurried tone: Jiamu drank too much at the KTV. He was completely drunk after three cans of cold beer. He couldn't stop crying. No matter how he tried to persuade him, it was of no use. Shi Xianyu immediately went to deal with this unexpected situation. The emotional line that had just heated up was suddenly interrupted by this phone call.
The atmosphere is created very well. The description of the environment at the beginning of "Twilight soaks the city" and "Lights turn on one after another" is very delicate, and is highly consistent with Shi Xianyu's soft mood at the moment, allowing readers to personally feel the satisfaction and relaxation he feels immersed in the afterglow of the date. In contrast to Feng Hao's urgency on the other end of the phone, he was still and moved, with a good rhythm.
The details are authentic. "Three cans of cold beer will make you drunk" This setting is very down-to-earth, not exaggerated and massive, but more realistic. Jiamu's "unstoppable crying" after being drunk also made people immediately curious - why was he crying? Is it to tell the truth after drinking or to drink away one's sorrows? This hook is buried naturally.
But the transition is a bit abrupt. A lot of space was spent describing the night and the afterglow of the date. After the phone call came in, Feng Hao's lines were rushed but slightly cliched - this kind of "come quickly, he's dying" plot is used too much in the novel. It can be more personalized, such as designing a line with his personal characteristics for Feng Hao, or asking him to reveal what key words Jiamu said when he was drunk, so that the call is not only "calling for someone", but also "laying the hook".
Shi Xianyu's reaction was handled too lightly. The original text only said that he was going there, but as someone who had just gotten closer to Xu Lingche, did he have any hesitation in his heart? Were there any micro-expressions when explaining to Xu Lingche? What was Xu Lingche's reaction after hearing the content of the phone call? This section can add some interaction between the two people, which not only promotes the plot, but also prevents the emotional line from dropping.
Update soon. The deputy CP is also good to watch and knock on.
This confrontation suffocated me
Xingxing is really good at writing push-pull feelings! Just this paragraph of text can make people's scalp numb - Xu Lingche presses forward step by step, every word is like a knife: "What is that like? Tell me!" At the same time, Xianyu was forced into a corner, swallowing all the words that came to his mouth, the panic and confusion almost overflowed from the screen.
The most amazing thing is Xu Lingche's transformation from "gleaming in the eyes" to "cold". The kind of heart-breaking feeling after failed expectations is so heartbreaking. What he was afraid of was never indifference, but that the other person's kindness was just a whim, just sympathy. These words directly pinned Shi Xianyu to the spot - what you thought was closeness might be just charity in his eyes.
The relationship between the two people was torn apart bloody at this moment: one aggressively demanded answers, and the other clearly cared but dared not admit it. The nagging feeling of "I feel uncomfortable when you avoid me; but when you come close to me, I'm even more scared" is so real.
This is how the emotional scene between the two should be - not a sweet confession, but a silent questioning, an evasive look, and an unspeakable sincerity. Xingxing knows how to use dialogue to create tension. In just a few lines, the two people's personalities, relationships, and conflicts have been fully established. I want to see how they reconcile in the future, so I'm definitely following this article!
The emotional concentration of this episode is already very high, and He Jiajia's role as best friend is established very well. If her "venomous tongue" and "gentleness" can appear alternately in the follow-up, her character will be more vivid - for example, while scolding Shi Xianyu for being a coward while silently helping him ask Xu Lingche out, the execution of the "icebreaking plan" will be fully stretched. The writing is very graphic, especially the moment when Shi Xianyu is seen through and holds on until he collapses. Xingxing knows how to make readers feel sorry for the protagonist!
"Ju An closes the book in his hand,..." This is a big bug for the author~
Full of sense of fate! Who understands the tension of this two-way redemption?
Before watching it, I thought it was an ordinary reunion, but after watching it, I just want to say - Xingxing, you know how to poke a person's lung tube! The feeling of pull between the two protagonists is simply amazing. Although neither one of them said anything about love, their eyes, movements, and those moments when they hesitate to speak, all say "I can't let you go" for them.
What pricked me the most was the tacit understanding of "I don't say it but you understand" between the attacker and the receiver. It was not industrial saccharine sweetness, but tenderness with a thorn - he pushed him away to protect him, and he chased after him because he had seen through his bravery. This is how adults should fall in love. There are no inexplicable misunderstandings, only silence and compromise suppressed by reality. It is so real and sad.
The supporting cast also all assisted without stealing the show, and the rhythm of the whole story was just right. The cruel parts were not bloody, and the sweet parts were not greasy. After reading this, I just want to say: Fortunately, they ran towards each other in the end. This kind of powerful article really deserves to be seen by more people. Stars, please write a side story quickly!
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Great, great, great, great
Ding Jiamu just watched Xianxian getting further and further away from him
[Purple Sugar] kswl I want to support my little couple first! ! ! Ling Xian 99
"The young man's white ears are faintly..." The author caught a big bug [orange candy] and got it
"Shi Xianyu secretly turned around to look at Xu..." This is a big bug for the author~ [Orange Candy] Got it
[Orange Candy] I got it, it looks great, come on
Our Xu Lingche is also a poor baby [holding chin]
[Orange Candy] Now that I've had it, let's give some support to my two little darlings.
The teacher's writing is so good. I really like the sentence "The fine tension spreads gently along the blood" []. We are also very good at envy. We will remember Xu Lingche's wounds and blame ourselves [] It is normal for the writing to be green at first. I believe the teacher will write better and better. Everyone is a good person.
The little thoughts of secret love are written extremely delicately. From "taking a gentle breath" to "typing out a line of words seriously", to "subconsciously clenching the phone tightly" and "staring at the screen for a moment" after sending, Shi Xianyu's nervousness, anticipation, and anxiety are all clearly explained in the details of his actions. There is no straightforward "I like him so much" but the readers can understand them all. The positioning of "well-behaved and careful" is accurate. Five words outline Shi Xianyu's character - it's not that he doesn't want to get close, but he's too afraid of disturbing him, and he's too afraid that his liking will become a burden to the other person. Loss is handled with restraint. There was no crying or fussing, no inner monologue bombardment, just a "sigh", a self-comfort, and a touch of "the expectation in the eyes slowly faded away." This kind of gentle writing is more poignant, because the most painful thing about a secret love is never rejection, but the silence that hangs in mid-air with no response. The time span of "a few minutes" can be more specific. Waiting for news about the person you have a crush on, every second is stretched out. If "a few minutes" is replaced by "the screen lit up and dimmed, dimmed and brightened again, he flipped through the chat history three times, and there was nothing in the dialog box except the line of text he sent", the torment of time would be even stronger. Xu Lingche's reason for not replying could be a foreshadowing. Asleep? You saw it and didn't reply on purpose? Or is your phone not with you? There is no need to reveal it here, but if Shi Xianyu had a guess in his mind while waiting, such as "Did he not want to come back after seeing him?", It would be more complicated and more dramatic than simply thinking "He fell asleep." You can add an environmental detail to echo the mood. For example, there are car lights passing by outside the window and the light of street lights wandering on the wall. The external "movement" reflects his inner "quietness" and sense of weightlessness, amplifying the "silent loss" to another level. The whole thing is already great, with real emotions and solid details. If the sense of waiting time can be slightly lengthened and a more uneasy guess can be inserted before "Is he asleep?", It can not only strengthen the humble feeling of secret love, but also make readers feel more sorry for Shi Xianyu and build up more expectations for Xu Lingche's subsequent response~
Chapter 9 "Drunk and Heartfelt" continues the barbecue date in the previous chapter. Shi Xianyu and Xu Lingche have just finished a warm dinner. The evening breeze is just right, and the atmosphere between the two is soft and ambiguous. Shi Xianyu still had the warmth that accompanied him today in his heart. At this time, he received a call - it was from Feng Hao, who told him in a hurried tone: Jiamu drank too much at the KTV. He was completely drunk after three cans of cold beer. He couldn't stop crying. No matter how he tried to persuade him, it was of no use. Shi Xianyu immediately went to deal with this unexpected situation. The emotional line that had just heated up was suddenly interrupted by this phone call. The atmosphere is created very well. The description of the environment at the beginning of "Twilight soaks the city" and "Lights turn on one after another" is very delicate, and is highly consistent with Shi Xianyu's soft mood at the moment, allowing readers to personally feel the satisfaction and relaxation he feels immersed in the afterglow of the date. In contrast to Feng Hao's urgency on the other end of the phone, he was still and moved, with a good rhythm. The details are authentic. "Three cans of cold beer will make you drunk" This setting is very down-to-earth, not exaggerated and massive, but more realistic. Jiamu's "unstoppable crying" after being drunk also made people immediately curious - why was he crying? Is it to tell the truth after drinking or to drink away one's sorrows? This hook is buried naturally. But the transition is a bit abrupt. A lot of space was spent describing the night and the afterglow of the date. After the phone call came in, Feng Hao's lines were rushed but slightly cliched - this kind of "come quickly, he's dying" plot is used too much in the novel. It can be more personalized, such as designing a line with his personal characteristics for Feng Hao, or asking him to reveal what key words Jiamu said when he was drunk, so that the call is not only "calling for someone", but also "laying the hook". Shi Xianyu's reaction was handled too lightly. The original text only said that he was going there, but as someone who had just gotten closer to Xu Lingche, did he have any hesitation in his heart? Were there any micro-expressions when explaining to Xu Lingche? What was Xu Lingche's reaction after hearing the content of the phone call? This section can add some interaction between the two people, which not only promotes the plot, but also prevents the emotional line from dropping.
Update soon. The deputy CP is also good to watch and knock on.
This confrontation suffocated me Xingxing is really good at writing push-pull feelings! Just this paragraph of text can make people's scalp numb - Xu Lingche presses forward step by step, every word is like a knife: "What is that like? Tell me!" At the same time, Xianyu was forced into a corner, swallowing all the words that came to his mouth, the panic and confusion almost overflowed from the screen. The most amazing thing is Xu Lingche's transformation from "gleaming in the eyes" to "cold". The kind of heart-breaking feeling after failed expectations is so heartbreaking. What he was afraid of was never indifference, but that the other person's kindness was just a whim, just sympathy. These words directly pinned Shi Xianyu to the spot - what you thought was closeness might be just charity in his eyes. The relationship between the two people was torn apart bloody at this moment: one aggressively demanded answers, and the other clearly cared but dared not admit it. The nagging feeling of "I feel uncomfortable when you avoid me; but when you come close to me, I'm even more scared" is so real. This is how the emotional scene between the two should be - not a sweet confession, but a silent questioning, an evasive look, and an unspeakable sincerity. Xingxing knows how to use dialogue to create tension. In just a few lines, the two people's personalities, relationships, and conflicts have been fully established. I want to see how they reconcile in the future, so I'm definitely following this article!
The emotional concentration of this episode is already very high, and He Jiajia's role as best friend is established very well. If her "venomous tongue" and "gentleness" can appear alternately in the follow-up, her character will be more vivid - for example, while scolding Shi Xianyu for being a coward while silently helping him ask Xu Lingche out, the execution of the "icebreaking plan" will be fully stretched. The writing is very graphic, especially the moment when Shi Xianyu is seen through and holds on until he collapses. Xingxing knows how to make readers feel sorry for the protagonist!
"Ju An closes the book in his hand,..." This is a big bug for the author~
Full of sense of fate! Who understands the tension of this two-way redemption? Before watching it, I thought it was an ordinary reunion, but after watching it, I just want to say - Xingxing, you know how to poke a person's lung tube! The feeling of pull between the two protagonists is simply amazing. Although neither one of them said anything about love, their eyes, movements, and those moments when they hesitate to speak, all say "I can't let you go" for them. What pricked me the most was the tacit understanding of "I don't say it but you understand" between the attacker and the receiver. It was not industrial saccharine sweetness, but tenderness with a thorn - he pushed him away to protect him, and he chased after him because he had seen through his bravery. This is how adults should fall in love. There are no inexplicable misunderstandings, only silence and compromise suppressed by reality. It is so real and sad. The supporting cast also all assisted without stealing the show, and the rhythm of the whole story was just right. The cruel parts were not bloody, and the sweet parts were not greasy. After reading this, I just want to say: Fortunately, they ran towards each other in the end. This kind of powerful article really deserves to be seen by more people. Stars, please write a side story quickly!
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Great, great, great, great
Ding Jiamu just watched Xianxian getting further and further away from him