“At first, it was just a sphere.”
“My father believed in love, trust, and bonds. He said that chakra could bridge the gap between people’s hearts and put an end to conflict in the world. My second-oldest brother inherited his will. Now the chakra they spread throughout the world has become a weapon for shinobi to slaughter one another, and love cannot break through the towering wall built from generations of blood feuds.”
“My eldest brother believed that absolute strength could protect everything he loved, and that the weak only needed protection under the order established by the strong. Now, great strength is treated only as a chariot that crushes everything in its path and reaps lives. The original desire to protect has been completely twisted.”
Feiyun gazed at the boy before her. “Reality has already proven them wrong. Since neither love nor strength can stop people from fighting, I’ll use my own way to set all this right.”
And so, several years later, the Eternal World descended upon the earth.
【A slow burn! The timeline goes from Volume Two to Volume One, so you can absolutely read it backwards!】
Bonus skit: (updated from time to time)
Feiyun: (after learning that using the Mangekyo for too long can damage your eyesight) The solution is simple.
Madara: (not expecting much) What solution?
Feiyun: (smiling) You die once, and I can reset your Mangekyo!
Madara: (I knew she wouldn’t say anything good...) ...Get out.
Tips:
1. To Your Eternity × Hokage! I wanted to indulge in this so badly that I had to write it myself! I’m extremely eclectic, so you may also find settings from completely unrelated works like Hell’s Paradise, Mermaid Forest, and Hollow Knight, all adapted to the world of Hokage...
2. Please note that the protagonist is not immortal! She is a sphere that came to the shinobi world and was born and raised there. In theory, she should have no gender, but because her first vessel was a girl, she identifies as female! (Really, I just want to write about a girl, hehe.)
3. Anything that differs from the original manga is treated as my own setting! I haven’t read Boruto: Naruto Next Generations, so there’s no Otsutsuki alien storyline. The story is based primarily on the ancient arc of To Your Eternity (I’m not interested in the modern or future arcs). I’ll explain any original settings in the author’s notes.
4. The most important original setting in this story is that there is no Observer. The Pure Land is roughly equivalent to Paradise, but souls that have already gone to the Pure Land and cannot reincarnate may choose to respond to a resurrection.
5. Be warned: the power scaling in this story is outrageously high, and the only thing that can frustrate the protagonist is her own humanity (?). There are quite a few scenes about the bonds between the protagonist and original characters (they’re needed for the story), but there will be no romance!
6. The CP is unknown, everyone! I’m hopeless at writing romance, and weaving it into the main plot seems too difficult, so it’s more likely that I’ll finish the main story and then write separate bonus endings for each pairing!
Theme: Remember to be a good person.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, madam, you write so well
Actually? Anyway, it's free. You can write whatever you want.
In Naruto, ninjas don't seem to have reincarnation at all, otherwise they wouldn't be able to pull out dead people even if they were reincarnated [laughing]
Baby, you write well! ! ! ! I saw different Hashirama [covering his face and laughing and crying], smart, sharp, careful and tolerant. The feeling of constantly thinking about the way forward, looking for breakthroughs, and not wanting to make the same mistakes again feels great! The cruel feeling of the Warring States Period is so real! ! ! Like it! [Kiss] [Kiss] I hope they have a happy ending. By the way, old man Liu Dao is really not suitable to be a leader. Discord between children is mostly due to the immorality of the elderly.
The latter, don't cut it TT
Wow, I personally think that I would pursue humanity and create connections and stories with others, but this is just my personal thought.
How terrible! When Hashirama said it, I almost breathed together with Wama! How terrible!
Will Xiaoming be entangled with Feiyun for generations like Ha Arthur? [Covering face and peeking]
Omg teacher writes so well [please please]
If you put it here, there will indeed be suspicion of unclear main line and loss of rhythm. But whatever,
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, madam, you write so well
Actually? Anyway, it's free. You can write whatever you want.
In Naruto, ninjas don't seem to have reincarnation at all, otherwise they wouldn't be able to pull out dead people even if they were reincarnated [laughing]
Baby, you write well! ! ! ! I saw different Hashirama [covering his face and laughing and crying], smart, sharp, careful and tolerant. The feeling of constantly thinking about the way forward, looking for breakthroughs, and not wanting to make the same mistakes again feels great! The cruel feeling of the Warring States Period is so real! ! ! Like it! [Kiss] [Kiss] I hope they have a happy ending. By the way, old man Liu Dao is really not suitable to be a leader. Discord between children is mostly due to the immorality of the elderly.
The latter, don't cut it TT
Wow, I personally think that I would pursue humanity and create connections and stories with others, but this is just my personal thought.
How terrible! When Hashirama said it, I almost breathed together with Wama! How terrible!
Will Xiaoming be entangled with Feiyun for generations like Ha Arthur? [Covering face and peeking]
Omg teacher writes so well [please please]
If you put it here, there will indeed be suspicion of unclear main line and loss of rhythm. But whatever,