Highlight: second person substitution direction
You were walking and playing with your phone at night, and the next second you stepped on a can.
The whole person fell heavily to the ground, grinning in pain.
As soon as he got up, his whole face was facing the dark muzzle of the gun.
You:? Is this still domestic?
The gangster steals your phone without mercy and asks you to hand over all your money.
You were trembling and preparing to throw your wallet over. The next second, a black shadow fell from the sky, trampling the person to the ground and kicking the pistol aside.
Only then did you see who was coming.
: My Fuck, isn't this Batman?
(26.8.15)
1. Duplicate works, poorly written
2. Save a small amount of manuscripts, about 100,000 words
3. All toward (?)
4. To be added
Mission: Where there is love, there is home
