Demining: Original Attack by Professor X
Hardy Graves met young Severus Snape by chance.
Snape, who had lived a difficult life as a child, was dark, introverted, sensitive and fragile, and Graf felt compassion for him for a moment.
But as the boy grew up, everything seemed to have changed.
This article is about slow healing. Please do not test the original protagonist. Everything is to satisfy the author's imagination. Readers with the same hobbies please feel free to enter.
Pre-released article for the next volume, happy words: "I am a gourmet food anchor at Assassination Academy"
Copywriting:
Montanans are like chameleons, good at hiding in the shadows. They are born assassins.
In this poor desert country, the only way for young people to make a living is to become killers in the dark.
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Plane observer Mino entered the Assassination Academy and became a second-year transfer student.
He stepped on the school bell and walked into the empty classroom with his mobile phone, wondering if he had entered the wrong classroom.
The classmate standing in the corner: She must have a trap.
The classmate who posted it on the window: Are people who are good at art bold?
The classmate huddled under the chair: If there is no way to win, there is always a way! I lost!
Mino took out the breakfast redeemed by the system, sat on the desk and ate meat buns and tofu buns, the aroma filled the entire classroom.
Students: This must be a gas attack! So delicious! Let me smell it again!
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The transfer student Mino has since become the most popular classmate in the class. In order to get a bite of her for breakfast, the classmates have improved their favorability.
They ate Mino's delicacies, their faces full of intoxication: Ouch-ah-it's so delicious.
Mino took a video of them eating. Because his expression was too confused and intoxicated, he was sent off by the platform with a yellow card.
In anger, Mino started the live broadcast, proving that they were really just eating!
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There was a roar in the live broadcast room: ah ah ah, this edge is so good! Don't stop!
Netizen Kuang Kuang tipped: Can the top brother on the list have this sexy classmate? !
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In addition to assassinations, young people in Montana seem to have another way to get rich (Er Kangshou, not just getting rich on the sidelines!
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Cp: Plane Observer Foodie Mino vs Upright, Greedy and Cold-hearted Male Teacher Nikru
New pit, please collect it, okay?
The author's other HP pitfalls:
Completed HP fanfic "[HP] Becoming Professor Severus Snape"
The final chapter of the HP fanfic "[HP] Back to 1975 (Friends with the Professor)"
Concept: Young Snape is too cute, what should I do? Adopt him.
Reader comments
It's such a long-standing article, and it's written very realistically and away from clichés.
Derek and Harry were in the same class.
First time writing a long review! (I don't know if it counts) Congratulations to the author! ! !
The author writes it very well, the characters are very realistic, and the plot is very realistic and realistic. The more I watch the male protagonist, the more I fall in love with it! I was so excited about the emotional scene! ! I've read it back and forth several times (?? ? ??) And still want to continue reading... Why did the author turn off the light so quickly? My poor imagination can't figure out the details! ! !
A lot of understanding has given me a new perspective on the inappropriateness that I often overlook. As shown in the picture, we understand that characters respect characters not only for their attitude towards life and what they have experienced, but because they are individuals who deserve respect just like you.
Characters are easily labeled, and readers are easily satisfied with the protagonist's story, liking people who are good to the protagonist, and hating other people who behave differently.
Yes it's hatred. Amplify the person's behavior, love and hate, and then express your own attitude without hesitation from a God's perspective.
For a flat character who appears as "evil", he was assigned this task, and he was resented.
For a complex character who cannot be seen through at a glance, he is often treated maliciously for some naive and simple reasons (he is a love rival! Or why he did this!).
Black and white is not appropriate. Just like a professor who makes mistakes but atones for his sins, Brian's love in the article stops at reality and reason.
You can't assume that everyone can help you. You are not a Mary Sue protagonist. Even Mary Sues have villains.
Love. Love is indescribable. I looked at him and thought he was really handsome! It's love. It is love that childhood sweethearts want to continue to stay together for a long time. Or the admiration of saying something or doing something extends into love. (Is possessiveness love?) It cannot be explained simply by saying "We should be together."
Nor is it natural love, as readers take it for granted. It combines too many factors. What does this character think? What was the environment like at that time? Do you have any concerns or troubles?
We race towards a happy ending but it's more than that.
"Demand the characters in the novel for what you can't do yourself."
Some people say that the protagonist should be a genius, have memories of the previous life, have a high starting point, start quickly, and be invincible. (I'm just giving an example) (For example, the novels my mother reads)
This works. Finding satisfaction in the spiritual world is great and relieves stress.
But the author has already decided what he planned, and I think it's bad to doubt easily and come up with what you want to see. First of all, we should respect each other.
That's it! Praise the author! ! ! ! ! ! I want to buy a book but I can't find it (._.)
Being drugged to get pregnant is a bit shocking [turned out] Blaine and Graf get along quite cutely, but it's a pity that Blaine is just an ordinary person. I don't understand Graf's transformation after he threw the potion equipment. After finding the little professor in the Room of Requirement, he suddenly started apologizing. I didn't understand. Then he kissed twice suddenly. It progressed so fast... The protagonist showed anger and forced a smile every time. The writing was very good. The little professor was cuter as a child... Although the big and small professors are always unyielding, waiting for Graf to ask for peace...
Can I ask, has Graf solved the problem of immortality?
It's such a long-standing article, and it's written very realistically and away from clichés.
Derek and Harry were in the same class.
First time writing a long review! (I don't know if it counts) Congratulations to the author! ! ! The author writes it very well, the characters are very realistic, and the plot is very realistic and realistic. The more I watch the male protagonist, the more I fall in love with it! I was so excited about the emotional scene! ! I've read it back and forth several times (?? ? ??) And still want to continue reading... Why did the author turn off the light so quickly? My poor imagination can't figure out the details! ! ! A lot of understanding has given me a new perspective on the inappropriateness that I often overlook. As shown in the picture, we understand that characters respect characters not only for their attitude towards life and what they have experienced, but because they are individuals who deserve respect just like you. Characters are easily labeled, and readers are easily satisfied with the protagonist's story, liking people who are good to the protagonist, and hating other people who behave differently. Yes it's hatred. Amplify the person's behavior, love and hate, and then express your own attitude without hesitation from a God's perspective. For a flat character who appears as "evil", he was assigned this task, and he was resented. For a complex character who cannot be seen through at a glance, he is often treated maliciously for some naive and simple reasons (he is a love rival! Or why he did this!). Black and white is not appropriate. Just like a professor who makes mistakes but atones for his sins, Brian's love in the article stops at reality and reason. You can't assume that everyone can help you. You are not a Mary Sue protagonist. Even Mary Sues have villains. Love. Love is indescribable. I looked at him and thought he was really handsome! It's love. It is love that childhood sweethearts want to continue to stay together for a long time. Or the admiration of saying something or doing something extends into love. (Is possessiveness love?) It cannot be explained simply by saying "We should be together." Nor is it natural love, as readers take it for granted. It combines too many factors. What does this character think? What was the environment like at that time? Do you have any concerns or troubles? We race towards a happy ending but it's more than that. "Demand the characters in the novel for what you can't do yourself." Some people say that the protagonist should be a genius, have memories of the previous life, have a high starting point, start quickly, and be invincible. (I'm just giving an example) (For example, the novels my mother reads) This works. Finding satisfaction in the spiritual world is great and relieves stress. But the author has already decided what he planned, and I think it's bad to doubt easily and come up with what you want to see. First of all, we should respect each other. That's it! Praise the author! ! ! ! ! ! I want to buy a book but I can't find it (._.)
Being drugged to get pregnant is a bit shocking [turned out] Blaine and Graf get along quite cutely, but it's a pity that Blaine is just an ordinary person. I don't understand Graf's transformation after he threw the potion equipment. After finding the little professor in the Room of Requirement, he suddenly started apologizing. I didn't understand. Then he kissed twice suddenly. It progressed so fast... The protagonist showed anger and forced a smile every time. The writing was very good. The little professor was cuter as a child... Although the big and small professors are always unyielding, waiting for Graf to ask for peace...
Can I ask, has Graf solved the problem of immortality?